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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Congrats for thread 5! :)

Part 41 was really nice and Nani's plan seem to work wonders for ArHi.

Though Arnav apologized and tried to clear all the misunderstandings between them but it's obvious for Khushi to be annoyed. This way they are actually behaving and fighting like a real husband and wife! :)

Cute.

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Precap for part 42 was nice.

Arnav is so pissed off. I guess Khushi has tortured him enough. It's getting way too long now.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

hmmm...

u again stoped at wrong place,...

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

part 42 was good.

I just hope Shyam is loyal to Anjali and not fooling around for if he isn't then it will take a huge toll on the relationship between ArHi as well as between Anjali and Shyam. Arnav will find out more about him and I just hope Shyam didn't do anything wrong.

Arnav did feel sorry and Khushi forgave him. She was hurt whenever he shouted on her but then slowly he realizes his fault and then gets back to her. This is the way he is and she shouldn't make him so furious again.

The precap was nice!

Khushi trying to fit in the cushion on her belly to see how she would look when she would be pregnant and Arnav admiring her. Too cute! :)

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

I really loved part 43!

It was a delight! :)

The Mamma-Mammi bit was adorable! :P

Thankfully, Shyam is not cheating on Anjali and that Tanvi is such a bi*** I am sure Arnav will handle her. Arnav sending white lilies for Khushi? aww..that was cute! :) I really liked the way Aman teased him. Arnav smiles frequently, thanks to his beloved wife. I loved that bit! :)

Well penned!

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#616

I loved part 44 except the last bit.

Aman seemed to be amazing in this FF and his friendship with Khushi is beautiful. The way he teases her, it's just so refreshing!

The card was really nice. The way he said, if your answer in no, save the card, I'll try my luck with someone else. It made me rofl!

And then when he was trying to convince her to join Arnav in Manali and said that he didn't want to lose out on any project because the MD of AR group was being seduced by his wife! :P

Though Khushi didn't tell him anything because she didn't want him to know her plans but that did hurt him. Hope things will be fine between them.

The precap was interesting!

Tanvi and Khushi were class mates and now Arnav appointed her in AR group.

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

omg! omg! omg!!!

What's happening here!!!!!!!!!??????!!!!!!!!!!

Ghosh, part 45 was a shocker!

I mean, I really liked the way the story is turning..

Why is this Tanvi trying to get closer to ASR? Khushi could so obviously sense that and why is Arnav trying to spend more time with Tanvi? I guess he'll try and use her and then blackmail her like she was blackmailing Shyam and this isn't good at all for Khushi!

The last sequence, before Aman and Arnav talked, it felt good when Arnav told Khushi that he feels for her and nobody else but then there comes the shocker! He asks Aman to book return ticket for Khushi all alone so that he can focus on his plans? What plans?

Poor Khushi heard him and she is all hurt..! omg!

Don't know what will happen next..!

Amazing part! I am loving this story!

Very well penned!

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

part 46 was really nice!

So, you continued that 4th june sequence which we ArHi fans weren't satisfied with as it turned out to be a complete disappointment!

But, I don't want them to get closer before everything is cleared, before he tells the plan between him and Tanvi.

Though they are feeling quite attracted but still it won't be right, according to me to be one at this time when they are some doubts and confusions. The rest depends on you, since you are the writer and it depends on how you have planned the story.

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