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@PersieV

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Well I'm first! Not a surprise there LOL!

I'm in an angry mood after that crap exam, I feel like crying but this definately cheered me up!

I'm so glad you decided to write and you were saying you were struggling what the? This was perfect..

I want you screaming my name all night! God that was my favourite dialogue. The whole scenario was just perfect!

Hahah and I'm an abductor? LOL!

You need to write more! OKAY?

Love you

Edited by Aveiro - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

res
if this is what i get from a lovers tiff i say we have one every time!
This was so hot and the blindfolding wah!
You have joined the gutter crew!
Take this with pride!
And write many more!
It was awesome woman!

Edited by -Chinnu- - 13 years ago

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

LOL I dont know what I am commenting for...but I am sure it will be good! So ..

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Wow, girl, doesnt seem like you are doing this for the first time...Its very beautifully written.

Its HOT, shows passion and sweet romance too :) I was hyperventilating at the end of it...lol

Loved it!

Keep it up,

thanks for the pm

Edited by inspiringstars - 13 years ago

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: inspiringstars
LOL I dont know what I am commenting for...but I am sure it will be good! So ..

res

Trust me it's going to be awesome ;)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

Res ;) :D

*Edited

Phew.

*Fans self*

*Drinks water*

*Sprays some water on face*

*Fans self again*

And I am still - O.o

One more joins the club of ze gutterluted Beys! I am so happy! :D

Loved it, Ridz! It was hot and saucy without being crass and vulgar and that, baby, is the way to go! :D

Brilliant job! :)

Now write more. ;) :D

PS - And La Petit Mort?! Seriously?! Well from what Ive heard the French are very good at this... ;) :D

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

Damnnn girl! that was hot! Loved it! and i love the title! thanks for the PM :)

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

That was *Ahem* different..

Loved it all the same, and can't wait for more like this!

Edited by purplekid - 13 years ago

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

*calms self down* that was some OS...wow...wow...AWESOME!!!!! Thank you for the PM!!!

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

it was hot...truly passionate...

loved it...u did an awesome job...

very well written os...thanks for the pm dear...

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arhilover55

@arhilover55

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

loved it!

very hot!

thanks for the pm.

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