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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

How can u not be happy with this one

loved it

seriously awesome work

loved how khushi rushed up to arnav and kissed him on the cheeks in front of the model

typically her

the ending was so cute how arnav said that she takes his breath away just by wearing a saree

lovely os

thanx for the pm

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ipkknd_hazel

@ipkknd_hazel

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

aww that was so cute 😳 i lovedd it... :))

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Maha Khan

@Charmz_58

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

tooo tooo tooo cute...just loved it ❤️.

Thanks alot 4 the pm!!

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

While I like the concept of your saga I think it could have gone differently. I can almost imagine Khushi questioning Aranv why the models need to wear such scandalous clothes...etc. Arnav replying in his own way that a lot of women wear such clothes to gain a man attention and that man like seeing them in such clothing. Khushi awkwardly asking him if Aranv liked seeing women who wore such clothing? Aranv could answer could be some where in the realm of his eyes only liking one woman and her looking beautiful in anything she wears. Just my thoughts, her personality just tends to lean this way. I am not sure she would have meekly gone into the bathroom and tried on lingerie for him if she herself was very uncomfortable with the thought.

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

You wanted to show Arnav is happy with who Kushi is and he would never want her to change to his lifestyle...Your message was clear ! It wasn't weird at all...Don't worry about it :) It was cute :) I loved it !!

Edited by asrcraze - 13 years ago

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Beautifull OS...

Arnav is sooo sweet n cute... he love Khushi as she is... He never want her to change herself for him... thats so sweet of him😳

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Hi friend, this was really cute, especially the saree bit, even I didn't want Khushi to wear the lingerie! Good thinking and cute as well!Pls pm me with furthe updates. Thks.

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Kiran

@ILuv-LoveStory

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

That was really awesomeee..at the I was thinking that he gifted her a nighdress..but that was saari..soo sweet..
Lovely update..one request..want read more..abt Khushi's insecurity..aur Arnav's..soo if u can write..thnx again for pm..

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

lovely os! thanks for the pm!

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saritha

@IllGetOverIpk

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

why are u so unsure about ur talent? let ur imagination be free..its a beautiful os..so don think tat it was weird... see we are not critics or talented like u...don worry ur msg was clear... arnav loves khushi as she is...