Love To Hate U-kriyansh SS #2 ch13 pg87 24'jun - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nams dii jaldi plzzz😈😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i must say u guys r really very sweet thank u soo much !!!!! đŸ€—well i wasnt well today to write the update 😭.. i wrote it jus few minutes ago.
and its a bit short compared to prev updates..

anyways.. meet me at the bottom of the post..😆
ab bak bak katam update pado
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CHAPTER 8
I slowly opened the back door. And peeped out..
Well there were no one in sight.. I took two steps out to c if I cud get any clue of the strange noise.. there wer few bushes here and there in backyard.. I stood next to one and again tried to peep.. yes yes I hell scared!!! But sometimes u got to grab some strength! Don't u ?
I finally sighed wen I dint get any clue.. I went back to the door and bumped at someone..
I fell down wid a thud..
I opened my eyes wincing in pain.. only to c a man or person or watevr in complete black dress.. hairs shattered on his face
 he was also leaving strange sounds.. may b he too got hurt.. and then he suddenly yelled 'CANT U JUST LISTEN TO ME ?????'
I looked up to wid wide eyes.. he slowly moved his hair..
And SCREAMED
And I too screamed along wid him struggling in my place as though hanging onto my dear life..
And then I heard another female voice shouting.. I got up and looked at him.. he to got up finally setting up his hair.. I screamed again to c Swayam infront of my eyes..!!
TUM ? TUM ?
We both asked simultaneously..!!
And then again I heard another female voice shouting TUM ?
I looked at swayam weirdly thinking was he uttering those ??
He shook his head in disapproval and told me it was from inside..
I sighed.. he sighed
And then it entered our head the one screaming was Sharon! And we cud hear another male voice too.. the very next moment we both screamed SHARON and ran towards her..
As we reached there panting hard.. Sharon was at the entrance of my room.. she was glued to the place staring at someone..
'whats it Sharon ?' I asked moving closer and I froze!!!
'tum dono boot banke kyu kade ho ?' swayam came asking and he too started staring..
Well the other person almost looked lik boot hanging on cliff!!
Yes yes it was Devil! Not real one!! The one who Is always back of my life!
Who else ? its rey I mean reyaansh the great!!! He was hanging on the window railing in a crucial position ofcourse..!!
Swayam started ROFL.. after few seconds Sharon too burst out laughing seeing the poor soul's condition.!
Poor soul ? really ? huh!! Well tat poor soul is getting my soul out of my life!!! How can he b poor ? no ways he is a monster!! Huh
I glared at both and went to his rescue.. well well I shud kick my ass for such a 'humdardi' on him! I cud better have joined swayam n Sharon laughter fits instead I chose to help him SAVE ME ANYONE!!!
I gave him the hand and pulled him up wid all my force..
He took the chance to take the advantage.. he straight away bumped into me and I lost my balance!!
What next ? we both we lying on the bed he upon me.. and me ??? sandwiched under him!!!
Gosh!! I don't understand y am not pitying my condition instead I was gawking at him..!!
I tried to push him.. but unfortunately my eyes met his.. I have told its hypnotic! Once u fall inside those chocolate eyes.. u only drown in there its hard to get out..
For a while we kept staring at each other.. he was using the complete advantage of touching me.,. please don't don't I begged from inside.. but his hand ran all over my back.. thank god I wore a full sleeve tee or else.. my skin wud have been burning by now and my senses mite have been enjoying its holiday trip ..
I broke the eye lock wen the name 'sharon' stuck to my head.. well its actually a miracle tat I was able to think of sumthing else other than him wen we wer sharing such a proximity! Gosh this is the limit.. we wer romancing openly infront of them.. my two bestie!!
WHAT ??? ROMANCE ? romance ?? wo b rey UGGGHH REYAAANSH SE ??? W*F is going!! UNIVERSEEE JIII *sobs*
Finally I got out of his hold pushing him aside.. but wait a sec WTH did I c ??
Sharon n swayam ??? gaping at each other ? W*F they wer sharing a EYE LOCK ??
My mouth was left hanging.. I felt someone was dancing behind me.. I mean doing strange signs jumping etc.. well who else can it ?
I turned around quickly rey suddenly stiffened.. I clearly sensed he was waving his hand at swayam..
But why ?? wats cooking bw those two ? and rey rey ? how can he be soo cool wen his gf is sharing a eye lock wid someone else.. ? seriously he was INSANE! Neither Sharon was less!!!
Finally giving up all his efforts rey started coughing hard.. I glared at him and waited for Sharon n swayam to come back to earth..
Suddenly they turned to me..

***
Rey Sharon and swayam wer standing in a line heads down and my hands on my chest glaring at them infact shooting daggers at them..
Shit not rey again! Wait who cares anyway ??
'anyone PLEASE CARE TO EXPLAIN!!!' I yelled

And then they shivered and started off
'kria actually mei usse baat kar rhi thi..' sharon said trembeling
'haan kria wo sharon mujse baat kr rhi thi aur mei..' swayam said sheepishly
'mei wo tumse.. I I mean Sharon se milne aaya..' rey too was trembeling
Swayam glared at rey..
Rey went nervous 'wo mei actually wo sh Sharon meri fone nhi uta rhi thi toh mei..'
Swayam looked away prolly convinced for what rey said..
'rey tumne kab muje fone kia ?' Sharon asked him innocently checking the fone..
Rey and swayam slapped their heads..
'sharon!!! Ur my GF remmbr ??'
'REY ???' swayam raised his voice..
'WHAT ??' rey yelled at swayam!!
'REY ? Y RU YELLING AT SWAYAM ?' Sharon yelled back rey
'Mei kaha ..' rey started
'DON'T U DARE SAY ANYTHN TO SWAYAM!! U got tat ??' Sharon said firmly at rey who was trying his best to say sumthn..
'Rey!! Tu yeh kya actions kar rha hai ??' swayam asked him confusingly..

'and wait a sec itni raat ko tumei sharon ko fone karne ki kya zaroorat thi ??' swayam asked pushing sharon behind him standing right infront of rey..

'swayam relaxx relaxx..' rey tried shifting swayam's gaze on.. i seriously dint understand WTH was goin on..

'Tu yeh yeh kya kar rha hai ans me!!' swayam yelled almost hitting rey..

'array relax beta relax.. wo tum kuch bul rhe ho nhi ? socho..'

'rey!!!!!!' sharon shouted..

'what is it sharon ??' swayam enquired

'i called rey tumei nhi !!!' sharon said to swayam and turned towards rey

'yaa muje batao itni raat ko tumei mujse kya baat krni thi ??' sharon asked at him suspiciously

'actually wo..' rey started

'haan itni b kya zaroorat ki wo fone nhi utayi toh tu seeda KIDKI SE KHUDKE GAR AGAYAA HAAAn!!' swayam, yelled at rey

'TU MUJE KUCH BOLNE DEGA ??'

'NHI DUNGA TOH ???' swayam started ..

rey held swayam's collar probably speakin on his ears but..

'WTH REY SWAYAM KO CHODO!!' sharon interupted.. rey slightly pushed sharon.. swayam caught rey's collar.. and there u go!! all three started fighting like dogs!!

i dont understand sharon is rey's gf or swayam' s ?? uggghhh

''GUYSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' now I YELLED AT THE THREE
They stood straight! ATTENTION lol!
'AB SIRF MEI BOLONGI!!! AND U WILL ANS ME' I looked at them and again continued firmly 'ONE BY ONE'
They nodded their heads..
'Sharon u wer speaking wid ur BF right ???' I raised my eye brows.. rey went to open his mouth while I glared at him to shut up
'haan kria mei swayam se..'
'Swayam!! Sharon was talking to u ?' I question swayam interrupting Sharon
'haan kria wo actually..'
'REY ermm erm hmm matlab Reyaansh tum kisse milne aaye ho wo b kidki se ???'
'mei wo..!'
'ANS TO THE POINT REYAANSH!!!' I almost yelled he looked down innocently..
*gulping*
'mei toh tumse milne aya..'
'WHAT ?????' I was shocked.. but he started doing weird expressions..

'AND SHARON I THOUT U WER SPEAKING TO UR BF ie REYAANSH lekin yahan toh tum..'

i saw them bitting their lips GAWD W*F IS GOING ON!! SOMEONE ENLIGHTEN ME PLEASEE *sobs*

rey continued wid his wierd expression .. first i thout he was winking at me.. then i thout he was asking me to cum aside.. thn i felt he was gone 'mad'
'KYA HAI ??' I asked him annoyingly he dragged me out of the room ( next room )..
He pushed me inside the room locked the door behind..
I was shocked..
***

okay is baar no demands!! because next update is on 20th.. 😳
and i want everyone of u to give LAMBA comments this time..!!

hope to c all ur likes and coments..
😳

and haan mei likes pe demand nhi raki toh iska matlab yeh nhi ki tum log like karna band kardo!!! atleast 50 likes to banta hi hai ..! hena ?


dont worry its not a demand 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg all dis looks sum theives r in shakria house 😆😆
swayum hair hahahahhah LOL 😆😆😆 u got me naa :P "
rey was on window dng cliff jumping đŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ˜Č

all r in big FAT CONFUION 😆😆😆😆😆😆

kria tho gayi 😛😛😆😆😆

d way kria helped her monster hayeee😳😳😳😳😳

d way rey not leaving any chance to seduce her â˜șâ˜șâ˜șâ˜ș

she thinks der r dng romance *touchwood* 😳😳😳
d confusion goes on

d way rey swayum nd sharon acted ROFL đŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€Ł

GOOD JOB YAAR TOTAL MAST I WAS ON FLOOR 😆😆😆

ND NXT CUMES D
rey continued wid his wierd expression .. first i thout he was winking at me.. then i thout he was asking me to cum aside.. thn i felt he was gone 'mad'
'KYA HAI ??' I asked him annoyingly he dragged me out of the room ( next room )..
He pushed me inside the room locked the door behind..
I was shockei love dis part waiting for it
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omg room dat to he locked it â˜șâ˜șâ˜șâ˜șâ˜ș
hayee meri kriyansh 😳😳😳😳 dreams

u r fab i always say :P u r d best muahzzzđŸ€—

thanks for d pm which i will get :P 😆😆😆

update after 20 th
all d best for ur exams 😃😃



Edited by sujana9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Update nams.
It was cool.

ha ha so ab mujhe sab samaj aa raha hai.

Tu itna sara confusions kaise likh sakthi hai???


Tu gr8 hai mate.
Rey tho unko ishra kar raha tha nah.
Bichare Swaron Samaj hi nahi paye aur Rey Ko phasa diuya.
Rey ko tho sab se daat padi.

Yup Kya sab Kria se darthe hai/.
Sad uske ek awaj pe chul ho gaye aur thik se answer kiya unhe.

Rey has guts.itne hyper aur guse wale Kria ko ghasit ke le gaya dusrte room mai aur door lock bhi kar diiya.

Wow dat was one rolfing update.

Update next part soon.

And thanks for nt giving any demnad this time...

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I thot as usual Kriya bumped into Rey but i was wrong..


Kriya n Swayam collided...


Rey thru d window n Sharon in d room...


N d famous "Tum??" dialogue from d four..😆😆


Kriya was hell confused wid dem n so was sharon..


Loved it wen Swayam, sharon n rey were fighting...


Kriya's yell n their attention position was worth reading..


Glad dat kriya came to kno swayam n sharon were talking wid each other n rey came to meet Kriya...


Rey pulled Kriya into another room...


But u shudnt hav stopped here...


N on 20th...3 days!! its ok i wil b waiting...


Dis was an amazing updt.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nams unres'd today itself...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update nams...👏
seriously i was just ROFLing...đŸ€Ł
love the confusion...đŸ€Ș
rey was hanging on window...đŸ€Ł bechara...
then swaron and rey fight..love that portion..
and itni confusion ke bad kriya ko gussa to ana hi tha...lagta hai jaldi hi sab confusion dur ho jaegi...
update soon...
Edited by dildostidance19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lamba cmnt my jhooti...

arey ye kaisa update tha???

mumma...

kaisi point pe chod di??????

kria nahi mai in sobs...

chalo above ka jo bhi cmnt ha wo just frustration of the cliff hanger...

cmng to the update...

really kria is ...i shouldnt say but * dumb*

yeah dumb...arey kitni ache se pata chal jayega...

phir bhi use toh pata nahi chala...

really...

bechara rey latka hua hai...

full advantage...hahaha...

kriya toh mast thi...

aur swaron and rey fight...

gosh im rofl ing...

phir bhi kriya nahi samjhi???

next part 20th ko?????

usse pehle nahi hosakta kya????

bas only next update jaldi kardo rest apna tym lo plzzz...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update 😊

Luvd each and every part of it 😊

Waiting for d next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
O_O room mai band..? OMG OMG .. â˜ș
kria ke saath mai bhi confuse hogayi..
swayam ko rey pe gussa aaying..lol
and that kriyaansh fall..hayee..
awwiee Sharon being protective towars swayam..
kria ka imaag khraabing..:P
awesum update nams..
no demands..:\
20 ko update..?
after 3 days..:(
u knw na dat during summer days are longer..:(
aww i cant w8 for next update..
ok get well soon ..
Btw congrats for new threadđŸ„ł

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