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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing!! loved it read all chapters in one go plzzz update soon and plzz do send me a pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all one go..
Its really amazing yar
I love anjali n ansh too
Hope they wont hide their feeling for longer

Arshi's love was out of word
They were too cute .. I m just waiting for Arnav to join them

Payal was hell jealious n i think when Arnav will come
Ansh's sister will droll over him n khushi will jealious at that time
Wow maja aayega... Hai na..?

All i can say is super lovely story.. I m already addicted
Edited by pantrossy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Eee. Can't wait to read the next part. :D
Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnie boy come soonnn...Thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: farha5556

what yaar last update also u said arnav,now also u r saying precape-arnav,continue soon.

m soo sorry.. i think cv's are making me like them.. lolšŸ˜†
but nw i am updating nxt part soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kajolkonna

U didn't pm me of this update. 😭
awesome update.
Yeee...
Arnav is coming!!!!waiting 4 nxt update.

m sooo soo sorry dear.. i dnt hw did this happenned tht i missed pming someone..
kaan pakad k sorryCry
i wl take care lil more nxt time while pming i promise..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Farwa_Ibrahim

Hey Chotie (u r my younger sis na) loved it it was the cutest update... Anjali n Ansh awee so sweet talking with eyes ... Shree was cute drooling on Akshay n payal's i will kill u looks gave my mouth widest smile shoo cute ... Ahan next update Arnav wao cant wait do update soon

šŸ˜†šŸ˜† yea i am ur chottie.. lolzz🤣
thankyou for beautiful comment..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update shree is so crazy poor payal she letting out her secrets thanks for the pm

thankyou so much i loved your comment as always.. i love this pic..
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Posted: 13 years ago
here is arnav guys.. i know i let down everyone's expectations with part 12 without arnav..
but what can i do it was getting so lenghty.. so here is nxt part.. very very soon.. just in 2 days..
Part 13

In evening at around 5-6pm..

Nani- Anjali bitiya.. what do you think.. chotte is coming or not.. ??

Anjali ' you don't worry Nani.. I am 100% sure that he is coming and is in way now..

Nani- hmm.. but bitiya it's raining heavily and he must be driving..

Anjali ' haan Nani.. chotte never travels with bus.. hey bhagwaan.. I hope chotte doesn't hurry up and gets into some trouble..

Nani ' don't be tensed.. he will be fine..

After some time Ansh, Payal, Akash and Khushi all were having fun time in the hall playing cards and all.. they had also planned to watch some horror movies at night..

Ansh ' ok now let's rest for some time.. ..it's been hours we are playing now..

Khushi- hey devi maiyya.. it's 8o'clock.. ..i have to make dinner also..

Payal- Khushi come I will help you.. ..

They both looked at Shree if she is also joining them or not.. but she made a sad face and said

"sorry.. I don't know cooking.. ..and I want to enjoy rain so am going out.."

Khushi and Payal smiled and went to kitchen..

Ansh- no Shree.. u will get sick.. stay inside.. get it??

Shree ' ohh please bhai.. stop treating me like a child.. am 22yrs old now.. I'm going.. bye..

Ansh- hey Akash I need to make some call.. I'll be right back.." and he went to his room..

The farm house has beautiful gardens at both the side of their main door.. there were big tree and was excessively greenery everywhere.. different kinds of beautiful flowers and all which made everything heavenly beautiful and this weather made it more exotic adding a best flavor to it..

Shree was enjoying the rain when she heard a sudden loud screech of car brakes.. she tried to look who was there.. she saw a man wearing 3 piece suit, holding a bag over his shoulder rushing towards the door..

Shree muttered ' omg.. who the hell is he.. he is so hot.. by god.. I think my wait is over now.. thank you god.. she said looking at the sky thanking god.. but where is he running.. .. I should not let this chance go away so easily..

Here Khushi was in the kitchen when she felt the same breeze which she feel every time whenever Arnav was around her.. .. she looked up and stilled at the place.. and left whatever was in her hand and smiled and her eyes glowing with happiness.. she knew he was here.. "Arnav ji.." Payal looked at her and asked

"Khushi what happen??"

Khushi- jiji.. vo Arnav ji..

She didn't say anything further and rushed out..

When he was little close to the door Shree rushed towards him and collided into him intentionally.. ..the bag fell down which was he carrying.. she acted like she is about to fall.. his hands quickly held her from her waist preventing her from falling.. .. she pushed herself more close to him encircling her hands around his neck.. she was on her tip toes and close to him making her body in contact with his.. he felt very uncomfortable and held his hand back but only to be pulled it back on her waist by Shree.. ..before he could hush her away she crashed more into him..

At the door stood Khushi looking at them but there was no jealously but sadness.. she was already sad and very upset and this sight of her husband holding someone else made her more sad.. she was not angry not even jealous but the picture in front of her made her excessively sad.. she didn't know when her tears started making their way down her cheeks.. she kept looking at them under the rain fully drenched.. and making her heart hurt more and more.. ..not able to look at them now for a second also, Khushi turned to go but saw that she was not the only their witnessing this but everybody was..

Ansh came from inside after making his calls and saw Khushi's tear stricken face and got worried.. then his eyes fell on Shree outside in front of main door with Arnav..

Ansh- hey bhagwaan.. ye ladki..

He went rushing toward his sister and pulled her away grabbing her arm..

Ansh- Shree.. it's not funny.. and this is your last warning.. stop doing your nonsense here..do have any idea what are you doing??

Shree- bhai.. vo..

Ansh ' SHUT UP.. AND GET INSIDE.." he shout at her making her flinch..

Shree- but bh-bhai

Ansh ' I SAID GET IN.. he didn't waited her to act and dragged her inside holding her hand tightly..

Khushi and Arnav looked at each other and Arnav froze seeing her all teary.. Khushi turned rushed towards her room..

Anjali 'chotte.. come in fast.. u may catch cold.. come..

Arnav picked up his bag and went inside direct to his room..

He saw Khushi standing near window looking out at the rain.. he threw his bag aside and pulled her to face him and hugged her tightly.. crushing her against his bard body.. Khushi closed her eyes feeling the warmth from his wet form.. but she didn't hugged him back.. he caresses her hairs and kissed her nape.. but when she still didn't hugged him back his pulled her back.. saw her still crying.. he wiped her tears away.. looked into her eyes cupping her face..

"Khushi..!!"

Khushi pushed his away and turned her back to him..

"Khushi.. please..I-I am sorry.. please talk to me Khushi.. "

Khushi heard him and melted immediately.. in a jiffy she turned and crashed herself into him making him stumble back and hit the wall.. ..he smiled and locked his arms around her.. and she cried into his chest..

"Arnavji ap bahut bure hain.. I will never talk to you.. katti.."

Arnav smiled at her silly words and kissed her head..

"Khushi I love you.."

Khushi moved back and replied "I love you too Arnav ji"

He held her close and took her lips into his.. kissing her like there is no tomorrow.. pushing her more towards him his one hand slide around her through her saree to touch her bare waist.. ..and with another hand on her nape not allowing her to move back if she tried to.. they kept tasting each other.. showing their hunger for each other.. Khushi slowed down the pace and then moved back a bit.. he rested his head on hers and then rubbing his nose to hers he said..

"Khushi.. mai..mai tumahre bina nai reh sakta.."(I can't live without you)

"hum bhi"

He pecked her lips and then moved back..

Khushi- hey devi maiyya.. Arnav ji.. you will get sick.. go and change..fast..

Arnav again pulled her close and said smirking at her ' will you help me.. Khushi..

Khushi couldn't say anything.. he just looked at his collar and blushed..

"so should I consider it at yes??"

Khushi pushed him and replied.. "no.. I need to go down and look whether dinner is ready or not.."

"Khushi'" he tried to catch her but she ran leaving him disappointed..

precap- Khushi found something in Arnav's bag..
do comment and like yaar friend.. m very upset with very less response...
please make me happy... does it take lot of your precious time to leave a comment?????? 😭😭
$hradha..
link to my other ss "LOVE WILL FIND ITS WAY" on page 1
Edited by MyPrinceBarun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yayyy!!! first to comment!!
dhinka chika...
Arghhh... ye ladki... whateverhernameis 😔
Edited by ii..Shilpa..ii - 13 years ago

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