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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing updates
loved them
gosh yeh swaym bhi na
loved it when kriya and every one beating up shivam
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kal unres karu gi k
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Miley awesome post yaar enjoyed it a lot.
But one probs.
Why do you write everything in Percap?
Other than that loved your post so much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm and the updates were really sweet :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
kria rey and swayam hitting shivam...😆

RDX back...

PRECAP:rey k haath mein ring...😍

wow...'👏

nice update...👍🏼

cont asap...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsum updates...finally Kria got even with Shivam abt the truth that changed her life...luving the Kriyansh Swaron parts immensely...pls update soon ...Rey with ring so is he gonna propose or sumthing!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey it comment time


ok then first of all i love dance scene


rey ki jealousy ha ...


bichara rey har baar jahi hota hey uske saath


then again cute kriyaansh scene ...



kriyaa ki dress wooww

she really look hot



noe about part 10



wow kya pitayi ki kriya ne



nd rey ne gusse main pol khol di


then rdx ne kya help ki sab ki



thats great



rdx ne b pitayi ki woow thats great ...



shivam k saath jahi hona chahiye tha


uski gang b bhaag gyi use shor ke



then again kriya ki dress was superb ...



nd m sure rey kriya ko purpose karne wala hey


haye can't wait for this ...


megical update



kya baat kya baat kya baat


love this jaana
Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u all for liking my post and aro thanks a lot my next update will shake everyone's heart coz something magical is coming...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: enrique

Thank u all for liking my post and aro thanks a lot my next update will shake everyone's heart coz something magical is coming...



really then m waiting for this more nd more to jaldi update kar na ...
Posted: 13 years ago
*****part 10*****
Note:plz switch on the speakers
Next day morning every one got up early and wer in the garden . . Chit chatting and playing with the ball . . . . And rey was standing far away. From every 1 ... den rey puts his hand in his pocket and takes out a ring and says to him self...
Re: wat to do shall I give her and tell her dat how much I love her . . But she already knows how much I love her ...( and puts the ring back in his pocked as nicole calls every1 for breakfast ) and Rdx came out of a big glass door which wayed towards the main house in such look ..

..and the whole gang was shocked to see him in this avatar and den ...and den started to move towards nicole and rdx
They all wer to wish nicole happy birthday
passsing through the swimming pool and vicky and nil went into a small argument . . . Kriya was standing near the pool in their argument nil pushed vicky and he moved back unknowingly dat she was behind and pushed her she fell into the pool with a splash and every1 faced towards her and couldn't control der laugh and all busted into laugh and kriya was irritated and she screamed . . . ( the water was 6 fets deep but she could swim...).
Kr: wat r u guys laughing at me help me( but no one helped her nt even rey. . . As they wer acting den kriya spoke ) swayam...bhai aap to Meri madat karo( making a puppy face and with a sweet smile .. . .) the gang was shocked to here bhai from her mouth and everyone said "wat bhai...?".
Sw: ok ...ok and ( & he moved forward to help her he gave his hand but she was in a playfully mood. . So she grabbed his hand and pulled him lot of force . . . And he to was in the pool next moment. . . ) Sharon and gang was busting into laugh and rey told Sharon. . ..
Re: Sharon is this the way to laugh on ur friends ( and he pushed her also in the water but her Romeo catches her and der was a "pehala neha" moment and den slowly slowly the whole gang joined them except rey . . . .
Here Nicole and Rdx wer watching them and den they came near close to the pool and both wer laughing and den nicole spoke...
Ne: Ravi... This is nt good u shouldn't laugh on these kids ( and even pushed him also in...)
Rdx :( amazed confused and asks her ) mujha kyu Dhaka diya . . . .
Every 1 was enjoying splashing water and having fun but rey was standing and watching his baad utter ...and Swaron noticed it and Sharon told kriya...something in her ear and den kriya slowly without notice slid out of the pool and now rey noticed dat she was nt der...and asked ever1
Re: guys kriya kaha hai...( and every1 took her Name and took a dive in the water and checked it ...but didn't find her ...der she was standing behind rey and she called him ...he turned back and she pushed him and he trying nt to fall he try to catch her hand ...but failed and both fell in the water and the whole gang was Laughing and again started playing but no one noticed dat kriyansh didn't come out of the water...

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Wen they fell in the water they both went till the ground coz of the force...and both swarl and roll up and down by touching each others shoulders... and looking at each other and den an idea stuck rey's mind ...kriya was about to go to the surface but .he pulled her and said her to wait through gesture by showing his palm . . He puts his hand in his pocket and takes out something ...
(the things which happen in the water is all in gestures...)
Kriya ask him in gesture dat wat happen by shaking her palm left to right ...and her mouth was like she has stuffed lots of chocolates ...it was like a baloon ...both wer looking at each other they wer looking pale coz of the water they thought they could have never look more beautiful than this...now rey gustered something to her and she looked at him
~"Rey pointed his finger towards him ( WHICH MEANS "I")"~
she was watching him carefully ...and trying to understand wat he is trying to speak...
~"Den he took her right hand and placed her hand on the position of his heart(WHICH MEANS "LOVE")"~
~"Now took their both hand towards kriya's heart ...(WHICH MEANS "YOU")"~
and den he showed her the ring ...by seeing the ring she got amazed and she jeked and moved back
Then he pulled her towards him ...her eyes went wide .she was staring into those chocolati eyes ...she felt dat some one has filled her heart with lots of butterflys,she was feeling that the gravity pulled her no more she was on9th cloud ...he was just lost in her beauty...and looking at her like she was looking like an angel ...to whom he might take in his arms ...
Now she understood that what he wanted to tell her.is..
"! L0vE Y0u" ...she forgot that she was under water and she blurred out ...
"YE$" from her mouth after which air passed from her mouth and bubbles wer formed and immediately rey placed his hand on her mouth indicating her nt to speak coz which will lead to shortage of breath and they might drown ...
Den she nodded her head in. A"YE$" and den ( the most precious moment) he place the ring in her ring finger . .and den took her in his arms and gave bone hug to her and now both faced each other...and looked in eachothers eyes and wer lost for time... She was so happy and mesmerisimg the ring dat they both forgot they wer under water ...
now reality stuck his mind and he was out of the stock of the breath... and rey pulled her out of the water with full force . . . . and now both wer looking at each other and wer blushing and smiling hard... ~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~
They both came on the surface of the water and wer breathing heavily and now the gang noticed dat they came up and mr interrupter asked them . .
Sw: wat wer u guys dng ? . .
Kriya was so dam hell happy dat in excitement she screamed """"whooohooo!"""""
And rey by seeing this was frozen coz she was looking dam happy and dat was the only thing he wanted . .
To avoid swayam's questions rey turned towards her and spoke. . .
Re: Tum ne mujha Dhaka kyu diya...?????
Kr: ( looked at him he pointed his eyes towards swayam she understood) mai. . . I was just trying to scare u . . ...and they both started their nakali fight . . .
Splashing water hitting each other. ...Every1 was just pissed off with their fights and boys caught " KRIYA" and girls caught "REY" and pulled them out of the pool. . . They didn't had der breakfast . . . But now. It was time for lunch ...every1 went and changed and decided to met in the hall for the lunch now in girls room everyone dressed up only kriya was left she was having bath she sat under the shower and den water was dripping on her and she was staring at the ring and den she finished the bath took the rope and stood infront of the mirror...she said to herself ...
kr: Is this wat called "LOVE" (she was blushing hard and was remembring that moment wen he said "I love you" underwater ...) her thoughts wer broken from the voice cumming from out side it was sharon ...
sh:kriya come on fast we r getting late ...
kr: u all leave i will come in 5 min ...(every1 left the room )
In boys room rey was so happy dat he was dancing witout any song and doing some hip hop moves standing on the bed and all the boys wer shocked and they wer asking questiona to him ...after some time every1 was down in hall except kriya ...and every1 was seated on the dinning table only 1 place was empty beside "mr interupter" swayam...and den rdx asked sharon
rdx : sharon wer is kriya ?
sh: she is still bathing ...dnt no wat happen to her she is jumping around and blushing away...i guess she has gone mad ..
rey understood dat this was the effects of after preposals... even he was blushing ... now kriya was comming down from the stares and looked at rey who was just frozen to see her coz she was looking dam gorgous in dat dress he was mesmerised with her looks and nicoled disturbed his thoughts ...
nic:so madam u finally arrived ...(kriya was confused and looked at rey as she wanted to sit beside him but only 1 chair was empty ...wen she didnt sit swayam got up and told her...)
sw: arre sit na ...wat happened ...(he took his hand and bought her close to the seat and draged the chair for her and den made her sit on it and said in pleading voice)
sw: (by hugging her from behind by her shoulder) o sweetheart ur so sweet today coz of u we had lot of fun ...
and now every1 in the room was feeling hell jelouse from swayam and.. rey took the fork which way lying on the table and pointed it towards swayam and said in angry tone ...
re: swayam agar tera ye bhai behan ka pyaar ho gaya ho to khana khai...( swayam got scared dat he might kill him with that fork only and he sat beside her now every was talking about randam talks and kriyansh wer looking into each others eyes and was blushing away den rey's naughty mind thought of something and
He slowly moves his leg towards kriya nd slowly kicks her which gives her an jerk and he understand dat it is her legs and she caugh and breath heavily...by seeing this swayam says ...
sw: wat happened kriya r u alright (&passed her the glass of water)now rey also says her ...
re: ha..ha.. kriya kya hua ...r u allright...?(and winks at her ) den he slowly tries to move his leg above her legs but she get scared and moves her legs in other direction ... he stops for 2 min and den he finds dat her legs r back in postion and den he moved his legs and seduce her but he gets confused dat she is nt reacting only and now swayams chokes very badly and drops his spoon and caugh very dadly and see below and find rey's shoes and looks at rey in an disgusting look ...
evrry one got scared and asked wat happen some passes the glass of water...and patted his back...
...Now he thinks lets have some masti in front of every1 with him so he dnt says anything he messages sharon about this den sharon suggests him to blur out infront of every 1... den it was unbareable for him ...now swayam took a knife which was lying near him and pointed towards him and said by grinning his teeths...
sw: rey this is me ...(and give him a narrow eyes look )
re:(confused and said) ya in know you swayam ur kriya's bro?(and gave him a smirk)
sw:(ahem ahem he points the knife towards down and says again ) this is me ...
re:o sh***T...(and he gets up from his chair and was so embarised of himself dat he ran away from der...)swayam followed him from behind...leaving every1 on the table...
kriya was about to take a bowl of rice which was infront of sharon and sharon notices the ring...
sh: kriya ye ring kaha se aye???????????its so pretty
please tell me how was tthe preposal please please ...

thats it guys please please hit the like button i took lot of efforts to write this ...
Precap: wat will kriya answer to sharon and wat will rey answer to swayam ?
wanna no so please hit like button and comment please please its a request...


Edited by enrique - 13 years ago

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