*****part-5****
sw: we must get near her. as soon as possible... now...and both left...(the gang followed them)
rey broked down and that thought of loosing her again had created a hell lot of fear in him and he fell down on his knees and was crying hard and he had all the past flashbacks in a fast forward (her 1st dance in dhearadon club, her meet in st.louise collage,
her dance to challenge their group, rdx party "Ramaira raichand", her way of teasing, her eyes and wen they first danced together in collage trip,, swimming pool, the gs and asg fights,the hayy rama scean, they dance on the song in lamho... her confession of more dan friend , shivam's party her song , her butter fly kiss ,their dancing on road , and den preValentine night he couldnt handle the train of this thoughts the pain and the rage of his anger now didnt favour his head and heart and in that anger he screamed)
re: kriyaaa...i a.m s.o.r.r.y p.lea.se fo.rgi.ve m.e ...( he was crying hard and was angry with himself for saying all such things about his love , his baatcutter)...someone from behind was noticing all this and came near him and kept a hand on is shoulder and sat down...
~scean in hospital~
sw and sh was running and wer afraid ...for her... and reached i.c.u...and asked dr ... wen dr ...came out ...( now rey also reached der)
dr: we have plastered her leg but i dont thing she can handle the pain ...
sw: wat do u mean by that ...(swayam was angry on doc)...(rey saw this and sat on a chair near by in a trauma ...)
dr: her legs have became so week we cant say anything unless she wakes up...and by the way... who is mr rey ...( rey got up by listening his name..)
re: i...am rey dr... hw...is... she..( he had tears and and was hesateting)
dr: she was continously taking ur name in dat state ( and told swayam)...ok please have faith she will be alright u can meet her after she wakes up( whole gang was now in tears and vishaka spoke)
vi: ( seeing at rey ) u saw na.. she asked about "u". and u...wat u said... befor speaking think 2wise dude and even she broked( rey was feeling hell guilty and started moving towards i.c.u door)(swayam and sharon was the 1 close to the door)
rey was continously moving in front (even swayam was in trauma and didnt note that rey was coming close and wen rey opened the door swayam noticed & got up)
sw: (caught rey's arm from behind and said ) "DONT EVEN THINK ABOUT TO STEP IN REY U DONT HAVE THE RIGHT" and pulled him out and den on his this action rey was shocked that his best friend was doing this and rey spoke in low voice
re: w..at u s..ai.d "i...dont..."(he had tears in his eyes and was seeing at swayam) and now sharon spoke
sh: yes u heard him right rey ...wat u told few hours a go" she is dead for u ..." right so u cant meet her...
re: but dr just told dat she was asking about me...
sh:(spoke in high voice) she must have lost her mind dats y ... she dont no about whom she is asking a man who doesn't even care about her (she screamed and them dr came .and said maintain silence please... rey asked to the dr)
re: can i meet her please...
dr:looked at swayam...
sw;( he gave a answer "no" by nodding his head) (he saw the doc in an angry look...)
dr: ( he understood)mr rey if patient's brother doesn't want u cannot meet her please ...
re: (shocked who is her brother and couldnt understand anything and asked dr about him) who is her brother doc.. please tell me i will beg him to let me in ?
dr: he is right behind u... (pointing toward swayam ) mr swayam shiwakat...now please keep silence...
re: (looked at him and was confused dat wat was happening how could be his brother .he spoke slowly...) wat swayam?
sw: (was now angry and caught rey's wrist and took him out of the hospital or literally draged him & it was raining out side )
sw: enough rey now ur testing my patience please leave... after wat ever u told today i will not allow u to meet her ..nor will sharon do ...she have already lost her mom and she is in pain and i willl not let any1 mind u any1 (poiinting his finger towards rey) gives her any pain(rey was hell shocked to hear about her mom )
re: wat ...w..at u told her mom?
sw:yes ( he shouted in a rage) please now leave ...(and he marched in )(rey was standing in dat rain all alone
re:(self talk wat have i done today she needs me the most and i ...) he walked in that rain in the dark haunted roads ... till he could fell equal pain wat she was suffering..and he abused him self and ... now it was 7 pm at night all most whole day passed he was still walking and reached a point beyond which der was no way... only abyss..(khai..)
~scean in hospital~
only 1 person was allowed in the i.c.u after lots of request... &swayam was in ... sitting near her bed all in tears sharon enters and sad him to leave ...but he doesn't agree but sharon force him and said...
sh: dont worry i will be here with her u go... u need some sleep coz u was here for long time and u look stressed out ..please i insist u ...( and make a sweet face )
sw: (didnt had any choice now so he says) ok fine but take care of urself and (turn towards kriya and) and even her...and leaves and take the whole gang with him but he didnt notices dat neha was nt der in hospital den every1 left from there and only sharon was left...and den she was resting near kriya's bed and neha saw from out side that kriya was gaining her concious and sharon wokes up...and ask kriya
sh: how r u feeling now?(she was happy dat she gained her concious )
kr:my head is spinning ...(keeping her hand on her head )
sh: dont get up u sleep ... i am here only with u ...ok
kr:sleeps off again...after 15min ...(neha was watching all this but she didnt enter she went and called some1)
ne:hello "rey" kriya ko hosh aya gaya u coming fast dont tell any1 ok...(and cut the call)and thinks of the flash back
...in the atrium rey scream's her name kriyaaa...she hears alll this and she was the one to console rey and asked him
ne: wat happen y r u doing this... wen u hate her...
re: i dont hate her neha ..." i love herfrom bottom of my heart" ...i was behaving like this just to forget that she has left me and gone...(all in tears.)
neha understood his position ...(she came into reality and went out side the hospital)
..here rey was sitting in the rain wen he received neha's call he got up and like he drank energy booster he was dam happy like he was nt happier ever before and ran towards the hospital like a maniac...he reached his destination and saw neha and went near her
he was all in wet clothes ...they both entered in and rey saw sharon in the i.c.u he said instently to neha
re: how will i go in?if she will see me ..she will kill me...
ne:dont worry neha is der na (and she took him in to changing room and gave him some clothes to change...) take this and change 1st go ...and pushed him..(in a room)...(rey was bewildered as wat she was doing and just did as she said and came out)
re: neha tum ne mujha...(looked at him self)...y did u made me dress up like a doctor ( and she gave him a doc cap and a mouth piece and took rey near the i.c.u and told him nt to say even a word now she opened the door which woke sharon from her sleep and she stood up and asked neha??????
sh:neha wat happened u didnt go to home?(even rey was standind der and was hell scared from sharon)
ne: no neha... also wanted to stay with kriya ...(and said) ...doctor wants to check kriya(pointing towards rey)
den rey understood wat was happening and was thanking neha from to the core.. of heart in his mind...he was dam happy dat finally he will meet her he was like he got his breath back and was excited...
sh: ok..so go a head( and she again sat on couch rey was confused wat to do and looked at neha)
ne: arrey sharon lets go out na doc will do his work lets have some coffee u looked too worned out...(she agreaded and left with her)( now he was all alone with his battcutter he went closer to her and a tear escaped from his eyes he bend down closed to her and said in a low but happy tone)
re:"kriya"(he told in a low voice even den he felt the voice ecoed in whole room )😭
re: i...i...am s..o.rr...y😭(and tears started to drop from his eyes) i am sorry dat i spoke wrong about u i no i shouldnt have done dat i am really sorry i was wr.o..ng who told dat u r me.a.n but ur nt please... i am mean ..😭..i am very bad.😭.. wake up baatcutter and interrupt me while i am speeking please i cant see u so quite. 😭u dont look good in this calm state please wake up once😭 talk to me scold me,😭 hit me ,do anything.😭.. i will nt feel bad but please get up(and the chain from his neck came out and hung he didnt notice) and he took her😭 hand in his which send a jolt in kriya's body she could feel ... but didnt woke up coz her senses wer not
working...as she was week...please baatcutter i sware i will never talk about u like this again "i promise dance ki kasam" ...please and he heard some1 talking now neha and sharon was returning and rey saw them talking ...kriya's hand was still in his hand he was about to take a turn and then suddenly the chain which was hanging got stuck in her fingers and he took a sudden turn and the chain broke and was left in her hand only the 2 girls entered and neha spoke ...
ne: over doc did u check her... how is she is she fine...(rey didnt speek and just showed the thump up and went)(sharon felt annoying about it)
thats it guys its a really long for today
precap: next day kriya woke up with the chain and locket will she recognise it ...
or will sharon and swayam see that before her ...will the gang forgive rey or will he never again meet her
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