Arhi: Dark Night Dawning Epilogue updated pg 23

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guyinoblivion

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

this is one of the best proposals in any show i have seen these many years..nicely done..eager to see next part

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Abi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Okay first CONGRATS ON THE NEW THREAD! WOOOH!!!!

And now: AWWW OMG OMG AWWW!!!! He said them he said the three words AWWW!

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE! I totally loved it The Heer-Ranjha lines were so touching, GREAT GREAT UPDATE!!!!

-Abi❤️

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neena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

congrats for new thread,...loved it!!!

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purplelove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

👏 Marvelous update. He finally said the words she never thought she would get to hear. 👏 I loved the whole update however I have to mention this part:

He hadn't spent one month in this sweltering heat, neglecting his business to finally get beaten by a halwai! If someone had told him a few months ago that he would be competing with a kurta clad, shudh hindi speaking desi boy he would have laughed. And here he was checking himself out in the mirror. F@%*!

When I read the above it made me laugh so hard. 😆

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mallug007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Oh my gosh!! he finally said it.. I am so glad that he used the words from the heer rhanja act. i hope in the actuall soap he I love how Khushi told Saint Suraj that that is how they are. Love your story, but I feel like it is coming to an end :( I hope you start a new story that is completly different.!! lve reading your stories!!!

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GunM

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

i just loved the confession

cant wait for more

please continue soon😊

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saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

awesome update cant wait for next part continue soon please

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Amy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

omg omg omg!!! im fangirling [is that a word😕] so hard right now ahhh!!!!😳 im blushing so hard and cant stop grinning!! AMAZING updated; by far my most fav chapter! i love this story and i know it has to come to an end but i really dont want it too =(

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srmirji

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

brilliant...this is again one of the best chapters...its evident that you have put all of efforts n mind to write so beautifully.

arnav coming back...kudos...shows he knows where he belongs and what's his priority.

khushi's response to saint suraj was awesome...how meaningful and correct for Ar-Hi...arnav hearing the whole conversation was even better...I truly loved this part,...

getting the heer - ranjha scene to the end was again apt and thoughtful...best way to express arnav's emotions and to resolve the distance between them...

thanks dear...keep it on,...