KR SS/Tujhe Sochta Hoon/ Ch6 pt2, Ch 7 + Prev p 50 - Page 34

Created

Last reply

Replies

430

Views

48.2k

Users

65

Likes

648

Frequent Posters

yogini64 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Tune hamare liye jhatka plan kiya hai 😔
more n more twists . . . . Kuch bhi kar . . . Bas post kar de 😃
eshaaax3. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
jee haan, acha jhatka hai, but bura jhatka bhi lol


itll posted in a few, just editing the chapters and color coding <33
eshaaax3. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
I plan on finishing the SS by the time my school starts, so before September 5ish. the future chapters maybe fewer, but longer, or more, but shorter, depending on how i write and what i can manage. If i don't finish before school starts, then of course I'll keep the SS going till i can finish and wont discontinue it, just my updates will be really slow :l
Born2Dance thumbnail
Bluffmaster IF Thumbnail 13th Anniversary Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
Whatever it is...

N HW Eva dey r...

Jus update ASAP please...
eshaaax3. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
don't worry, update aa raha hai, jaldi!


-- btw pm list on first page has been edited for those who care (:
Vaish24 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
and there goes ur half century...

clapping clapping...
eshaaax3. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
ive had a bad case of writer's block -_- and i havent been feeling well. Fasting and various headaches kept me busy :( Sorry from my part for such a delay, but thank you to those who understood and kept patient (:


I plan on finishing the SS by the time my school starts, so before September 5ish. the future chapters maybe fewer, but longer, or more, but shorter, depending on how i write and what i can manage. If i don't finish before school starts, then of course I'll keep the SS going till i can finish and wont discontinue it, just my updates will be really slow :l


  • if your username has been changed and you asked for PM, please let me know your old username and new one (:

Chapter 6- part 2:

< ive no reason for making it a two part chapter, maybe for the cliffhanger or something >

Kria walked over to the library after comforting Sharon. She felt good helping her.

She stepped into the room and sat near a corner table and tried to finsh her assignment works. Soon enough, her thoughts diverged and she trailed into her many thoughts.

It had been quite a few days since she hadn't spoken to her mother; she hesitated to speak to her. She told her herself to not call for her too, and she was surprised her mother had listened. On the other hand she was so stuck upon Rey. He was so intriguing yet she tried her best to keep him out of her thoughts. And then came her cloud bubble of the Footloose competition and Taani. She told herself, "I must stay till Footloose. I have promised RDX, so i have to keep it, waise, mera mission abhi bhi negative 1 stage pe khara hai, aur uss Taani ko toh dikhana hi hai ke asli captain kise kehta hai."

Soon enough Kria began thinking about her mission again. How am i supposed to move from the negative stage ti atleast a positive 1 stage. This is so difficult. Milne doh mujhe uss 'papa' ko. Ab yeh bhi dekhlo, Sharon ki papa bhi.. saath reh kar saath nahi ... detha.

Kria began to fix puzzles in her head. Sharon ne kaha uske papa uske saath hai lekin, saath nahin detha, aur uska mamma hai, lekin nahi hai?! Ajeeb baat hai. Mera bhi toh kuch asi hai na?! Mamma hai, lekin papa ko koi khabar hi nahi. Lekin, Sharon ka papa toh business man hai or something? Kria shrugged at the 0% possibilty. Just then she heard laughs outside the library. She peeked out to see which idiots forgot they were near a library.

"Ohh, thats so funny! You're so funny! I like funny!"
said a familar voice.

A girl's voice replied, "Aww, Rey, do you? You're so cute." She pulled at Rey's cheeks.

Rey made a face and smiled back hesitantly, "Ohhh, you're so much cuter.''
Rey peeped over the girl's shoulder to see if his target was paying attention, and bingo! He quickly went back into his pretense. He put an arm around the girl's shoulders and continued his cheeky act.

Kria watched all this and she fumed from inside. She could bear other girls, maybe if they had some sense, and no lack of character, but this girl?! She was a big no. She couldn't stand her at all. Something, more like many things about her spelled annoying, immature, and a pain-in-the-ass. Kria closed her books shut, fixed her dupatta, and spoke to herself through gritted teeth.
"Taani ke bachi!" She stormed across the library and out to where the farce was being set.

Kria stood with her books in one hand and the other hand on her hips.

Taani and Rey continued walking until they saw Kria. Taani looked at Kria with disgust and pushed her hair back.🥱

"Excuse me, aapke paas dimaag nahi hai ya aap ko woh bhi bolna parega ki aap library ke paas walk kar rahe hai?"

"You excuse you, dimaag nahi aapke paas! Don't-"

Kria shoved her hand into Taani's face and pushed her back slightly.😆

"Please, i know you have no brains," she made an annoying face at Taani and turned to Rey.

"Mein toh aapse baat kar rahi thi."


"And you were saying?"

"Ki ye library hai, aur aap bohut shor macha re hai."


"Lekin main library se bahar kahra hoon"

"Aur mein andaar, toh-"

"Toh andaar hi rehthi, bahar kyun aayi tum?" Rey smirked, teasing Kria was too fun.

"Main kya karun ya na karun ye aap kaun hote hai mujhe bata ne ki liye,"

"Exactly, aap kaun hoti hai mujhe bata ne ki liye ki main kya karun"


Kria opened her mouth to speak once more but kept silent.

"Agar mein shor machau, run karron, gana bajaon, ya phir ek larki kesaath walk karun, tum hari kya problem hai?"

Kria squinted her eyes and glared. Her problem wasn't that Rey was talking loud or walking, it was that he was talking to Taani and walking with Taani, whether she admitted it or not.

She pointed her finger at Rey, as her matching colored bangleds jingled. She gritted her teeth and mumbled. With a grunt she turned and left.

"Bye bye miss no dimaag"😵


Kria rolled her eyes as she continued walking. Taani pulled on Rey's arm and asked to continue walking.

Rey rolled his eyes too and made up a witty excuse. "Sweet sweet Taani, No. Okay? Some other time. I don't feel like it."Rey walked away shaking his head.

Aur koi larki nahi mila mujhe. Kahan se aayi hai ye pagli jungli? But only she would work, baatcutter cant stand her, it's so obvious. Vaise Rey, tera mission, toh positive stage 2 par aake khara ho gaya itni jaldi. Not bad Rey, not bad at all. Rey slipped his hand into his pockets and held onto something tight and let go. He walked away, around the halls.

Sharon and Swayam were in the rehearsal before everyone, practicing their dance; remembering that they had to do a couple dance. Kria barged in mumbling to herself some great words, remembering what happened a little earlier. She dropped her duffel bag and took her practice clothes out and went to change. In a little bit she came out and stretched, relieving her thoughts.

She walked up to Sharon and Swayam who just separated and went to hydrate themselves.

"Uhh, Sharon, yeah, hey, umm" she mumbled a little as Sharon looked at her, sipping her cup.

''Uhh, are you okay, from before, i mean," She gave a weak smile.


"Tumhe kya? Listen just cause i shared that with you doesn't change anything. I still dislike you." Sharon said, grilling Kria.

Wow, okay then, Kria thought to herself. Dropping the topic, Kria asked about the dance,
"So, what has to be done? Like what dance?"

"You're the captain too right? And so is your partner, you can figure something out, no? You've such a clever brain, no?"Sharon threw the cup out, and went back to Swayam.

What am i supposed to do? And how can i forget, woh idiot hi mera partner nikla, wah kya kismat hai teri Kria, she mumbled to herself, tying her hair up and warming up.

Just then Rey and his melodramatic so-called sidekick walked in, arm in arm. Rey knew Kria was at the rehearsal hall, and he knew he needed to start the third stage of his mission. Kria glared at Rey and walked up to him. She looked at their arms, being linked in each others.

"Aap dono haat chor sakte hai, hume," she said pointing at Rey and herself, "practice karna hai"

Rey smirked a little and spoke as Taani still didn't let go, "Um, who said i was to partner with you?"

"Why?"

"Nahi, matlab mein sirf keh rahi hoon, you know, dancing with Taani is more lively you know? So i was thinking ke-"

"Ke you dance with Taani ?" Taani smirked at Kria's words.

"Good job Kria, you're very fast," Rey teasingly smiled at Kria and took Taani by her hands and started to dance, even though he didn't want to.

Kria, tumhe aapne muh khulne ki liye sirf yahi tarika hai. Jalan. Warna tum zid lekar behti rahogi saare zindagi. Rey took Taani's hand unwillingly and made all these wild dance moves just to fuel Kria. He could see the fumes in her eyes; she stood staring, with her arms crossed.

Rey and Taani posed for their ending in front of Kria;

"Ho gaya show off ? Ab actual practice kare ?" Kria said, pulling on Rey's hand. He had smiled at her gesture, and quickly remembered his pretense act.

"Kria, meine kaha mujhe Taani ke saath dance karna hai-"

"Aur mein captain hoon, aur mein keh rahi hoon ke aap hi meri partner ho,"

"Mein bhi hoon captain-" Kria grabbed one of Rey's hands and forcibly placed it on her waist.

"Aur mein Weaklings ke bhi captain hoon, aur mein kehti hoon ke Taani partner dance nahi karegi, aur kuch?" 😎 She put her hand into Rey's and place one on his shoulder.

Rey made a "wow, not bad" face at Kria and started dancing. Eventually, the two became lost in their dance and totally forgot that rehearsal hall time had been over.

Lost in their ending pose and in each other's eyes, Taani grunted and left.😆

Kria pushed Rey away and shook her head at him and went to go change.
Rey kept looking in Kria's direction and hit himself slightly in the head. "No one dances livelier than her, and i can never have a better partner. In fact she's the best partner." He laughed as he took off his sweaty t shirt and took his car keys out and left.

A few minutes later Kria walked out of the college and went home.

A lot of things had happened today, some that turned on a light bulb in her brain, others that set her heart aflame.

------------
chapter 7 in the following post.
Edited by eshaaax3. - 13 years ago
eshaaax3. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
  • this update is all Taani burai. Taking my anger and dislike out on her dheere dheere through this warna D3 mein toh mujhe woh log goli mar dethi lol
  • The thing about Rey and the note is my imagination, i made it up; not taken from the actual D3 story.


Chapter 7:


Kria changed into her clothes, still in her churidar and churiyan phase even after that little indirect from Rey. She walked out from the dark college building to what was a rainy picture outside.

"Sh*t"
she exclaimed. She searched for an umbrella but left it at her apartment and she didnt have a car. She stood in front of the college trying to stop a cab or rickshaw but none were stopping, even if they were empty.

Bright car lights in the dimly lit, rainy atmosphere sparkled from behind Kria. A car came to a stop in front of her and the windows rolled down. The Mercedes.

Kria stood where she was, as if she hadn't noticed the car and tried to call for more taxi's.

Rey looked at Kria from inside his car. The rain had practically given her a full on shower. She was drenched. Her salwar stuck on to her and was on the verge of becoming see through. He looked on as Kria's hands waved for a ride and the reflecting chudiyaan jingled. He liked this look on her, he felt it made her look more innocent. In fact, he liked everything on her. He smiled and shook his head.😳

Rey slouched down a bit and looked out the window and called for Kria.

"Oye, hello, stop calling for a ride. You're not going to get one."

"So ? Tumhe kya?"

"Yeah, right... mujhe kya... But mein keh raha hoon, tumhe ab koi ride nahi milegi."

"Aapko sab kuch pata hai na"

"Andar aaoge ya mein sach mein chala jaon ?" Rey asked, ignoring Kria's remarks and pushing the door open from the driver's seat, somehow knowing Kria wouldn't deny his help.

She rolled her eyes and sat in his car. He floored the gas pedal and zoomed off. They sat together in silence. Kria looked over to Rey to start a conversation but she fell into a trance.

Rey was still shirtless from the rehearsal hall. She gaped at his chiseled body and instantly remembered the field trip and Rey's "Dil Se" in the hall. Both time's he was in that state; both time's the two were practically a millimeter apart. Kria felt nostalgic remembering things she pushed to the back of her head.

Rey noticed Kria was staring. He stopped at the red light, and looking straight ahead, he broke the silence, "Kria... you're staring." Kria flustered and looked away quickly.

Rey smiled at her innocence, and to lessen the awkwardness, he spoke about the day.

"Aaj practice acha tha na?"

"uhh, hm?!"

"Maine bola, ke aaj practice acha hua, right?"

"Uh, hmm, yeah.. acha tha tumhaara dance ... Taani ke saath.."

"I know, hum jeetenge footloos, dekhna .." Rey chirped.

"Rey! I said we are partners !?"

"Haan, toh meine kab deny ki ?"

"Tumne abhi abhi bola, ke hum...ke hum jeetenge ..."

"Haan, hum kahan. Hum ka matlab you, and I .. "

"... so .. we are partners ?!"

"Kria, really, you're so slow sometimes"

Kria looked away from Rey and smiled a little, not letting him notice it. Rey bit his lips and continued to drive. Soon enough his car stopped infront of Kria's apartment.

"Kria... your house .."

She took her belongings, fixing her dupatta and pulling it over her head, remembering she had no umbrella, and got out of the car.

Closing the door, she turned to Rey to thank him, but before she could say so, Rey took a turn to speak.

"Ajeeb baat hai Kria. Not done, tum wapas aane ke baad tumhe sirf drop kar rahi hoon. "

Kria was kind of shocked and signaled for him to come inside, "ab.. uhh, come .. in ?"

"Yahi ghar ke samne aakar chala jaata hoon, i think last time mein tumhari ghar ke andaar ayaa woh Valent..." his voice trailed off. He realized he spoke too much. He opened his mouth again to change the topic, but instead he made a sharp u turn and sped away.

Kria stood in front of her house, becoming drenched once more, and sighed.



Rey turned on the hot water to its fullest and stood under the shower, his hands against the wall, head bowing.

It was so hard for him; to act like he wasn't hurt, to act like her presence didn't make him weak. How can she be so normal around me?! I don't understand. I want to get to the bottom of this, but why is it so difficult? I know for a fact that there's some lie in what she told me that night. What is the lie, i have no idea at all, but this is ridiculous. Why can't she just tell me dammit? I'm so ready to help her out, even after being... betrayed.

A tiny tear rolled out of Rey's closed eyes. He hated crying for her. A side of him told her not to run after her but the other side wanted him to get to the bottom of it. He walked out into his room in shorts and a black tank.

He went to his dresser and looked for the note he still kept in his pocket and held on to since that day. For the first time since she had left him, he opened the hand written letter. It was a very large paper, and it was filled front and back. In small writings, Rey had written down every date and every single moment he spent with her. And if he hadn't, he took the date and wrote about how he spent the day thinking of her. He flipped to the back of the paper and to the very bottom.

Feb 13: so happy she won! Going to her house for a special surprise! Universeji, you're amazing!

and then

Feb 14: ...

just sat printed on the lines all by itself; the only empty date.

He folded the paper and put it back into his pocket. After Kria had left, the note he had written was like a flashdrive that kept all his memories and thoughts safe and alive. He stood in his balcony, remembering he had to go hardcore to open Kria's mouth.

He looked up at the sky and talked to himself. "I wish you knew how much you mean to me, i wish you knew how there isn't a day ive spent without thinking of you"

Next Day:

Sharon left the canteen in a rush and left the college building and Swayam ran after her and stopped when he saw she was already gone. Swayam let his hands loose and sighed.

"Man, why is she so upset! So what if he can't come for Footloose?! She should understand he's a busy man!"

Kria was walking out of the girl's locker room and into the canteen when she saw a worried Swayam mumbling to himself. She walked over to see if she could help him or anything.

"Uhh, Swayam, tum aise... are you okay?!"

"No yaar, woh Sharon gusse mein chaali gaye. Pata nahin woh itna udaas kyun hora hai!"

"Is it her dad Swayam?!"

He nodded and twisted his lips, "She's upset he can't come to Footloose, and Footloose is still days away! She says he has plans that night."

"Uh, shayad postpone kar sakta hai, no? He is business man na, un logo ke liye postpone karna toh mushkil nahi hain, right?"

"Businessman? Kria, Sharon ki dad ek dance director hai, badi badi films ki choreography aur setting ki charge unka hathon mein hai.."

Kria was at a loss of words. Could her assumptions be true, could Sharon really be ... ?!

Before Kria could say anything else, Swayam signaled to continue talking some other time so he could go comfort his lady love.

Kria nodded and weakily smiled.

She ran her fingers through her hair and walked in to the canteen, so she could think but of course before she could enter, the sight in front of her stopped her.

Her blood boiled, how and when ?!

Rey moved a strand of her hair behind her ears and laughed with the psycho in his arms. He looked at Kria for a second and pretended he hadn't noticed her and continued walking out of the canteen area.

Kria whispered, "Ek hello bhi nahi bola usne ..." Sulking, Kria slowly paced into the canteen.

Rey heard Kria's whispers from behind and frowned. He looked at the freak in his arms abd let go of his embrace.

"Rey, honey, what's wrong, why's you let go?"🥱

"Haha, woh, uh, kuch nahi Taani, my hands hurt."

Taani looked at Rey in disbelief, his hands hurt? Wow what an excuse. She rolled her eyes and left Rey.

She walked down the halls and spoke to herself. I will make you mine Rey. Im loving your attitude towards me and now I'm going to give it a name.


The loudspeaker came on and RDX ordered for the students to come to the main hall for an important announcement.


Few minutes later; Main Hall:

Rey stood to the far left, his hands in his pockets, shoulder closed in. The whole college was pretty much lined up and huddled to hear RDX's announcement. Kria came a few seconds before RDX could start. She stood near the center, and eyed Rey and the rest of the gang at once.

"Good afternoon guys! Well, I'm not gonna take much time. I hope you all know our college's Rose Day tradition. It's very close, AND we are holding a Rose and Friendship Day dance over the weekend outside in the back of the college at 8pm. So please do come, refreshments will be served. Take it as a night of relaxing from all the Footloose practice. Come with whom ever you want, boyfriend, girlfriend, friends, or yourselves. What ever you like ! You can continue with your day now. Hope to see you guys soon!"

Kria immediately looked over to Rey to see any kind of remembrance of what happened last year at Rose Day. She remembered what she did and mistook Rey for. She wanted to talk to him but before she could, the famous hindrance walked over to Rey and whispered into his ear. Kria saw how he weakly smiled and Taani linked her arms into his. Kria turned around to walk away but Taani made sure she didn't.

"Kria, tum arahi ho na, dance party pe?"


"Uhm, i don't know," Kria whispered.

"Oh you don't have anyone to go with do you?"

"Uhm .. that's not the thing.. woh.. " Kria's eyes flickered to Rey's and down to the linked arms.

"Yeah, what ever. Waise tum na party mei yeh kapre maat pehnke aa na. Tacky lage ga you know.. Kuch modern pehn le na." she flicked Kria's bangles.

Rey held his tongue from bashing Taani. How dare she?

Kria's anger flared.

"Excuse you, firstly, I AM going, and don't worry, if anyone's gonna look tacky, it's you babe," Kria pulled out the clip from Taani's hair.

Kria walked off to the girl's locker room. Taani stood by herself as Rey let loose and went his own way to relieve him from the cat fight.

"I'll make sure Rey says yes to us. Just watch Kria. You come back and think you can take everything again? No no. Not that easy. I'm not letting anything go at all."



Kria opened her locker in anger ad took out the extra clothes she kept. She took the bright orange shirt, and the black skin tight jeans. She looked at her bangles and slid her dupatta off her neck.

"I don't give a damn who you are Taani. I haven't hated anyone so much before the way I have with you. Do whatever you want, but copying what i do ? Please, you don't even stand a chance." Kria spoke outloud as she slipped her salwar top and churidar off of herself. She pulled the orange shirt over her head and squeezed he legs into the black jeans. She looked at herself in the mirror and ran her hands through her waved hair.

There she stood, looking at her reflection; Kria Ghai.

-------------
Edited by eshaaax3. - 13 years ago
eshaaax3. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 8 Preview::

The lights burned his eyes. He couldn't believe it. She couldn't be serious.

She gripped her glass hard, almost crushing it into pieces.

The crowd went quiet but immediatley began their talks and many whispers.

Taani stood next to Rey, smirking at Kria. Rey looked back between the two ladies. This wasn't what i planned, he said to himself. This wasn't what i planned at all.

He looked over to her in the crowd and his heart burned. Fine, if it's that easy for you, it should be for me too.


---

now keep guessing ki kya hone waala hai (;
Edited by eshaaax3. - 13 years ago
Vaish24 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
okay so finally u updated...

yayyy!!!!!!!!!!!

but pata hai mujhe toh bure jhatke hi mile apart from the car convo😃but honestly bura k ratio zyada tha...

leave that...

so do tell me accha jhatka kaun sa...😳

so the update...

loved it only in the sense kria ws responding... subtract the other elements i say Totally adored it... 😃

so krish are gonna be sissy???

kria drenched and rey shirtless... a mus watch sight... seriously/...

thanks for imagining that...

chapter 7... aur burai karti na plzzz... mujhe kam lagi... chalo koi nhi least bothered...

i get my kriyansh thats the thing...😃

rose day... i get trnsferred to ur OS... so i believe vaisa toh kuch nhi milega lekin... i can hope u know... as to quote u "Kabhi bhi kriyansh ke megic moments aa sakte hai... mood ka bharosa nhi..."

toh main boling ki apne mood pe bharosa ki it brings the moments... 😃

then the preview...

i wud love to see kriya hurting herself crushing the glass and then sitting in fire escape...
i know cliche but the impact it created thats superb...

the background satrangi rey...

my guess: she announces them as the official couple... rey didn't expect tht and kria she received the biggest bow... okay a lame one but... something better than nothing...

just hoping ki rey doesn't start to doubt his beliefe and let the other side win...

make the rose/friendship day the confession ay... plzzz...

and me first to comment...

Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".