SS aRhI: Once upon a Secret CH 4 updated pg 73- 28 NOV 2014

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Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

amazing update. Every person has own secret. They are living it every single day. And every secret is disasterous affecting each other's life. This is just beautiful piece of writing!

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Wow so many secrets

Hall of secrets

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mimi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

awesome man!!!!

it ws jst fab!!!!

pls cntinue wid it soon!!!!

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Shivana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Man what an update! Arnav trying to woo Khushi - I like 😉 but does Khushi not want to be with him now? I mean I get why she wouldn't want to but love is unpredictable - it wants even if it hurts...is the person with Anjali, Karan? So hyped up about dis FF - hope da quicker update promise stands...

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Wow this is amazing!!

It really really is great!

Love it xx

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..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

So many secrets!!

Thanks for the pm

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nature-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

I'm so loving this SS. The way it's written is getting me hooked to it. Thanks Harshu and Lyraa 😃

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farah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Aww I just read the both parts and I loge it so much .
The story was not as I expected..i mean I was about to.stop reading when I reach the part where arnsv blame her for signing the paper n pairing with shyam..but it was so much much better them my expectations..iI'm happy tht I carry on and didn't stop other wise I would have missed such a wonderful piece of work.. I loved it so Much..it had much more deep.secrets and I love the way everyone has their own secret.. I hope arnav can win his lady love back.. I like the part where mamaji made an excuse for payal though that we unexpected..
I can't wait to read the next part.. I'm very happy with buaji because she told the truth yo arnav..n finally to.anjali thank god she is smart here not the dumb one in serial.. I think the guy who is with anjali is karan. Because when Khushi didn't pick uP his phone . Anjali came to check so I though karam must have asked her to.I like the new character karan.. he is sweet.. lol arnav is being jealous from karan when is just khushis brother.please update the next part soon.. I can't wait to read more..

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shalinii173

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

I loved both the chapters, so many secrets, everyone has secret

but the msgs from karan ... i am sorry to say, its so romantic i dont think any bhai can send msgs to his sister like this.

i just felt so, hope u dont mind,

just waiting for all the secrets to be revealed.

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Glimmer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#280

Brilliant chapter !!!!!! Loved it !!!!!!
The way you have written Arnav's emotions and the lines was beautiful !!!!!!! And the jealousy and confidence of taking the challenge that he will make her love him again !!!!!!
There are soo many secrets and it's sooo intruiging to read !!!!
Who is this mystery guy Anjali talks to ?? Is it Karan ???
And mama having secrets ????
Loved the last part !!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!!