SS aRhI: Once upon a Secret CH 4 updated pg 73- 28 NOV 2014

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

i don't think you guys are lazy just busy with school work extra class thesis hope fully a party in between because even genius needs a break loved the update asr jealous and so trying to woo khushi back loved it loved the update mamaji cover payal snooping anjali and karan covering track so snake does nor suspect loved the update thanks for the pm

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Samana Dahar

@samana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Nice update.
Thanks for the PM.

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ASADsweetZOYA

@ASADsweetZOYA

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

👏awesome update dear

loved it

tthnx 4 the pm😊

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

awesome update!!! karan seems to be nice guy... but arnav is getting jealous of him..

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

I thought you guys forgot about this fic. Im so glad you updated

Okay predications!

I think that Payal and Mamaji will together spy on shyam and expose him. Bahu-Sasur PI team!

Anjali is scretly meeting Karan, which is why she was panicking and looking for Khushi. And the single rose was to be delivered to Anjali because her and Karan couldn't meet.

Arnav will try his might, but I hope he keeps in mind to trust her and not jump to conclusions

Great update! I loved it

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Simran

@Sim1234

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Such a good start to this FF! You are both very talented writers and I'm just so shocked ( in a very good way) at how you guys wrote this and portrayed so much just within the 2 chapters. Wow, I'm actually just speechless.

So Arnav knows the truth now after putting Khushi through hell, and is very very jealous of Karan. i wonder how Karan came in the picture obviously during the time Arnav was being an idiot! I like

Karan, he seems cute! 😳

Wow Payal and Mamaji are the bomb! He is so undercover its amazing, can't wait to read more about him and his secrets..and Payal as well! You guys do it better than the show, though still full credit to the show😃

Khushi poor girl has gone through so much and dosen't even understand whats happening with Arnav I would be even more confused then here..talk about getting mixed signals from a guy 🥱

I can't wait to read more of this FF, its written beautifully and the story line is just getting better and better and I can't believe it's only been 2 chapters!

Thanks for the PM...and continue soon!! 😉

Sim

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ITS_LEENA

@ITS_LEENA

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

amazing update dear, secret, secret and secret

its great that anjali moved on with the circumstances, i hope arnav doesnt misunderstand her this time, is karan, khushis brother, and anjalis boyfriend are same