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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello again.Never thought I'd updating so soon.Here comes a SwaRon phone convo .This present track where Sharon is trying to give respect to Swayam is all my idea.Credit doesn't go to Sharon and Taani's scene where Sharon is confused what to call Swayam usse or unhe.This track has been in my mind since a long time.But its only after that scene I mustered the courage to post this.Thanks for those lovely comments.But it's only because of that scene I'm able to post this update.So in a way the credit to goes to the scene

PART 7

Sharon hung up the phone cursing Swayam not understanding that she is indeed happy to be getting married to him.

Sharon: Taani could know that I'm happy ..and ek Swayam hai...Idiot jaanta bhi nahi mein kya feel karthi hoon

Sharon's Mom: Sharon(shocked)

Sharon: hm...

Sharon's Mom: Don't you love him??

Sharon:(uncomfortable) Yeah.I do.Why are you asking??

Sharon's Mom:(even more shocked) my...oh..so modern daughter is scolding her to be husband??

Sharon: ha tohh?(as if only she had the right to scold Swayam)

Sharon's Mom: You are crazy?? No wonder your dad's so called modern values rubbed off on you.(irritated)

Sharon:(angry) Mom aap...ye kya bol rahi hai?

Sharon's Mom: Come here.Sit with me.

Sharon: Ok!! Fine..(still angry)

Sharon's Mom: Sharon...You know in any relationship respect is very important.You know the secret behind mine and your dad's successful relationship is because of the respect we have for each other...You have to understand this.You aren't a school going girl who can't understand what relationship is

Sharon: Parr Mom I have always been the same ...He knows me..

Sharon's Mom:(angry) Stop it Sharon...Don't tell me about the times you spent with him..You also know the reason why your relationship didn't work out.It's because of your anger and ego.

Sharon:(shocked) Mom aap ...Can't believe you are blaming me for our relationship which didn't work out earlier

Sharon's Mom: Ok.I agree that I don't know what went wrong but don't you think you have share in that.Are you sure you gave all your self in making that relation work??

Sharon:(sad) Mom ..relationship kabhi tha hi nahi..he confessed..I rejected.I've been hiding my feelings ..thats it

Sharon's Mom: Thats what..First step in making any relationship successful is to have respect for your partner's feelings...

Sharon: Mom ..I've been always been like this...

Sharon's Mom:(interrupting) Nahi...You have changed Sharon..pehle bahut gussa aatha tha tumhe..ab dekho...you are more clam.Aren't you?

Sharon: Yeah..(a little angry that her mom is giving her gyaan)

Sharon's Mom:(caressing Sharon's cheek)All I care is your happiness.You don't have any idea how difficult it is to bring up a child.I gave up my career to take care of you.You think I liked passing time at home holding an MBA from the most reputed university.Relationship stays healthy with so many sacrifices.Not that I'm regretting my decision to give my career.Had I not taken that decision I wouldn't have been able to raise an angel as my daughter.

Sharon:(almost in tears)Maa(hugging her)

Sharon's Mom:Don't cry.Cry baby(teasing her)

Sharon:Mom(angry)

Sharon's Mom:(breaking the hug) Acha Can I ask you something??

Sharon: Yeah(wiping her tears)

Sharon'Mom: I always thought you were expressive.Why didn't express your feelings to him??

Sharon: pata nahi Mom.I'm almost dead when he's around.

Sharon's Mom:(teasing) Look who's scared to confess.One who has rejected hundreds of guys is scared of rejection.

Sharon:(says confidently) I'm not scared of rejection because he will never reject me

Sharon's Mom:Tek hai..remember respect...hm???

Sharon: Yeah.

Sharon's Mom:(says leaving the room) Good.

Swayam on the other day decided not to disturb Sharon and decided to call her in the morning.

Next morning

Sharon's was more clear how to treat Swayam.Nothing in this world could have her mouth shut but for Swayam.She was expressive.She turned succinct when asked about Swayam.Expecting that she'd apply all the gyaan she received from her mom got into the car.Right when she was about to drive received a call.

Sharon:Hello

Swayam: Hii Sharon.Can I talk to you now??(hesitant)

Sharon: Yeah.Sure.

Swayam:Tumhe pata hai na...that Rey is busy with some other work.So he wouldn't be able to come today.So you have some extra work to do.Hope I'm not spoiling any of your evening plans???

Sharon: No.You aren't.Dont worry.Acha tuuu(struck at tum remembering her mom's gyaan about respect)

Swayam: What Sharon? Tuu what??

Sharon:(decided that she had to face one day why not today)Nahiii Swayam AAP tension math lo...I will handle everything

Swayam:(almost dead) Sharon tum tek tho ho??

Sharon: Haa Swayam kyun??

Swayam: Kya maine galat suna ?? Kya tumne abhi mujhe aap kaha?(scared)

Sharon: Haa Swayam..kyun mein aap nahi keh sakti(confused)

Swayam:(in manju mode) Tum mujhe jo chahe woh keh sakti hoon

Sharon:(sensing that Swayam is getting back to his real self)Hm..tek hai I will see you in school.Bye

Swayam:(softly) Bye

Sharon:Bye(blushing)

Swayam:(after hanging up the call to himself I'm damn sure she's taking marriage counselling pakka...)

Sharon was surprised that she actually called Swayam aap.She wasn't the one who'd believe in the old Indian ways of showing respect to husband.She grew up listening to her mom who addressed her dad as aap.She got into the car enjoying the feeling of surprise.Also Swayam sounding so soft and romantic after years added to the surprise element.Awkwardness at its best accompanied with happiness.Was a rare combination.Wasn't completely unknown to her. This was the feeling she had all the times when they both were alone in rehearsal hall.

Swayam reckoned this as one of best moments of his life.It never mattered to him the way she addressed him.The mere fact that she was trying to show him respect was all enough to celebrate.Swayam excitedly got into car sure to have wonderful drive to school.He played his favorite song and also which suited his life.

Sharon parked the car and started walking when she heard her name.She turned and saw Swayam walking towards her.Already being diffident about self the day's start added to her nervousness.

Swayam:(smiling) Hiii

Sharon:(blushing) Hii

Swayam:toh ready ho aaj extra work ke liye..

Sharon: Yeah.All ready.

Swayam:(trying to make her talk in hindi more so that she'd again call him aap)Ha...ready kyun nahi hogi..aaj kuch zyada hi acha mood hai tumhara..

Sharon: Nothing like that.Just normal(trying hard not to speak in hindi)

Swayam:(to himself...common Sharon ek aur baar aap kaho...which guy wouldn't like when his girl gives him respect) hm...bahut tension hai Sharon aaj kuch zyada hi work pending hai(knowing that she would react soon if she knew he was tensed)

Sharon:(sad) Swayam aap tension math lo...(realizing what she said) I mean don't be tensed

Swayam:(trying hard not to smile) Yeah.Yeah

Soon they reached the entrance of the school.

PRECAP:

Sharon: Swayam aap...

Entire gang: Kyaaa(loudly)

After some time

Nilesh:(smiling)Swayam(shouting as Swayam was leaving) tere bag mein ek note raka hai ..dekh lena

Swayam:(not paying much attention)ha tek hai tek hai..

Later

Swayam: Sharon come I will drop you..

Sharon: Nahi woh..actually I got my car

Swayam: oh..but you can leave it there..I drop you

Sharon: kal subah??(expecting him to offer her a lift the next morning)

Swayam: hm..I will pick you up in the morning

At home Swayam opens the note which is folded.He finds a red rose in the folded note.The note read:

To the most handsome guy I've ever known..this is for you.

Keep smiling

Your love.

Swayam:(angry) Yeh Nil...simmi bas naam ke liye GF hai...hum sab guys ke saath dostana karna chahta hai ..dekhlunga kal usse
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Posted: 13 years ago
Again marriage counselling... Lolz... And aap was the best part... N then swayam trying hard to make her say aap again n the precap is toh the best part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aap haha rofl swayam speak in hindi so that sharon again call him aap that was hilarious
Precap swayam thought that nil give him the letter
Waiting for.next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part where swayam wanted sharon to say "aap" once again...
Tnx for the pm
pls update the next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Swayam:(after hanging up the call to himself I'm damn sure she's taking marriage counselling pakka...)

Sharon: Swayam aap...
Entire gang: Kyaaa(loudly)

Nilesh:(smiling)Swayam(shouting as Swayam was leaving) tere bag mein ek note raka hai ..dekh lena
The note read:

To the most handsome guy I've ever known..this is for you.

Keep smiling

Your love.

Swayam:(angry) Yeh Nil...simmi bas naam ke liye GF hai...hum sab guys ke saath dostana karna chahta hai ..dekhlunga kal usse

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AMAZING !! Loved the update, keep it up !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
The convo between Sharon and her mom was really sweet !!! AWWHHH, she actually called him AAP and I loved the way Swayam kept speaking in hindi so that she will call him AAP again !!! The precap looks really interesting and I can't wait for the next update !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wa kya baat hai sharon n aap simply awesm n nil ka note hahaha
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Posted: 13 years ago
This was hillarious. Sharon taking gyan from her mom was awesome . But the best bit was Swayam going in all hindi mode just to listen her say 'Aap' 😆. Can't wait for the next update. to see ntire gangs reaction.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sharon calling swayam app...loved it...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahaha so sweet sharon calling swayam aap. Well it is good start. Actually this happens in almost all the houses especaily in India. Yaar it is superb waise i love swaron to the core, no doubt about it but when you write ek alag se sweetness hai ismai. Thanks so so so so so much for the wonderful update. I loved it so much.

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