Before I Fall Again... On hiatus indefinitely. - Page 30

Originally posted by: -publicenemy-

This maybe an overly ambitious undertaking for me, particularly given my history, but let me make my aims for this story clear (as its distinction from my other FFs).

-Firstly, this story will continue in a first-person narrative (from Nirmala's POV) until its end. So, think of Johnny boy and his Tamil as a plot device (one of likely a few) to get Manu's story without Nirmala being directly privy to it 😉

Hope the other plot devices are English speaking ones. Otherwise how is niki going to figure him out. Is she going to become a good eavesdropper/ detective or just a more experienced woman/ wife who will know what is going on even before it is uttered.

Last evening when I was seeing one of my addictions, my son left his computer and came and sat with me supposedly to give me company. Now these company givers are dangerous people because you can't put a tape on their mouth. He said, how come the people in your serials have such vision. Their eyes decide who they are taking to and then their eyes are trained and focused only on them and they don't even realise who is one inch away to the left or to the right. Whereas you usually when you are supposedly seeing your tv serial, you can laser through the wall and even guess what I am watching and even intercept the thought that has not even come to my mind yet and you yell, don't do it.

I told him that comes with experience of being a wife and a mom, ESP.

So I really would like to read niki's growth process.

-Secondly, this story has no second leads (😲 I Know! Shocking!). So,

Varun/Rima/Lalitha/Veena/etc. fans, sorry...

Thanks for that and a big hug as well.

-Thirdly, I am hoping to keep this FF shorter than my typical length (meaning, less than 100 chapters)

Now, let's sincerely hope I can stick to all of the above 😆

All the best, 100 or 500, kya fark padta hai.

Oh he is a lost cause to almost everyone!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: -publicenemy-

This maybe an overly ambitious undertaking for me, particularly given my history, but let me make my aims for this story clear (as its distinction from my other FFs).

-Firstly, this story will continue in a first-person narrative (from Nirmala's POV) until its end. So, think of Johnny boy and his Tamil as a plot device (one of likely a few) to get Manu's story without Nirmala being directly privy to it 😉

-Secondly, this story has no second leads (😲 I Know! Shocking!). So, Varun/Rima/Lalitha/Veena/etc. fans, sorry...

-Thirdly, I am hoping to keep this FF shorter than my typical length (meaning, less than 100 chapters)

Now, let's sincerely hope I can stick to all of the above 😆

D,

I do like Niki's curiosity 2 know about Manu, though she does not understand a word they speak...the story can unravel when it has to...

And about second leads , I have not read all of ur works , other than the current 2 I have read The oldest story , so I did except...ur second leads r always interesting... Lena,Thalia,Vaibhavi...so,I did except but no second leads , more Abhi-Nikki...yay!

Length does not matter!

Devi a hundred chapters is fine by me...with no side stories at all. Now I get what u meant when u said this is going to be more intimate than lavender. I am so looking forward to it.

Thanks for the beautiful update. I wasn't expecting...so it came out all the more sweeter..

Lalitha sounds very devious. Makes me wonder what length she did go to in the past to catch Abhi. Also very curious to know why he tolerates her? I'm sure we will find out due time. Great update. 👏 Thanks for the Tamil translation.

thank goodness for english translation...

Read all parts at once.. You have explained nikki's feelings so well.. Good going.. Waiting for next update..

liked it.so ther is some mystery behind lalitha.now i understand y he said he cant explain wat niki saw on tht day.hmm...the story is growing more exciting.👍🏼