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Posted: 12 years ago
Mindblowing update
you've written it beautiffully
loved it
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Superb update
well written
loved it
do continue soon..
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Writer Note..

Thanks a lot friends for being with me in this whole Journey🤗'🤗Actually it's not the End of this story'there is no End of this story.It is continuation of Life.

It was the journey of two people who was finding comfort in each other.It was the journey to search Love,trust and comfort in the relationship'Relationships are Like a string that can be broken easily if there is No Love'Comfort.

I hope you liked this Journey and these two characters (Mayank& Nupur).

i'll come up with another concept and with new characters soon.

Maria. (Remember me in your Prayers)

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Inconvenient Love

Man is a knot into which relationships are tied. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupry, Flight to Arras, 1942, translated from French by Lewis Galantire

They have been spending half of the month in the London, roaming, enjoying in this beautiful city, collecting and savoring the beautiful moments which were going to become a beautiful essential part of their life, After that day everything had been changed, the warmth, the love, trust that was missing somewhere in their relationship now it seemed they had found out it. Every night she had felt the warmth of his body close to her, clinging her against him, whenever she felt cold she found his arms around her possessively, wrapping her, gathering her in their hold giving her the warmth, the comfort she needed, they needed.

"Nupur"Mayank threw the cover aside rubbing his eyes and yawned looking around for her, after these few days now it had been became his habit to feel her close to him when he wake up. Sometimes he smiled at himself thinking how beautifully she had realized him what He was'she had met him with the real Mayank Sharma'the real Mayank who was living inside him but was scared to come out breaking the walls of self-consciousness'self-fear.

He shrugged smiling inside and stood on his heel guessing where he could've found her.

"You're looking like a typical wife but forget the first rule for the married woman"

Mayank's voice hits with her ear drums and fumbling at his sudden appearance in the kitchen she turned to look at him placing the sandwiches on the plates, His eyes were narrowed slightly, his mouth curled into a rakish smile as he regarded her with a passionate look and as usual she had felt difficult to look back at him, "and what's that?"She had given him a fake confusing looking passing by him arranging the plates on the breakfast table.

He held out her wrist before she turned again to bring the tray of food from the kitchen, "it has become a habit of me to feel your skin in my arms" his long legs had eaten up the space between them in two steps and then he knelt in front of her so that she was forced to look into his eyes, compelled by his soft tone and the new passion and love in his husky voice.

"Very cheesy lines Mr.Sharma"

Nupur given him a teasing look pulling back her hand but before she could take another step away from him he had yanked her back in his arms and she lost her balance falling onto his chest,Mayank crawled her arm around her, lifting her chin up with his finger She had found herself Still'motionless for a moment as she looked back in those deep eyes'his tone was serious reflecting the emotions which she could see in his eyes too, "you always wanted to know what is in my heart for you?"

She could feel her lips quivering with suppressed emotion as she nodded her head slightly, "hmm".

"Today I'll tell you what i feel for you what I couldn't tell you before"

She swallowed the sudden choking lump in her throat remembering all those moments, all those nights when she had waited for him to say something'something in reply of her confession'she could've remembered the day when she had poured out her heart in front of him and asked his confession in return but he didn't say what she wanted to listen.

"I'm listening Mayank'I always wanted to listen you" She forced a shaky smile.

Mayank was quiet for a long moment just was starring her, "Yes you were right-I was scared to accept my feelings'I didn't want to accept those feelings which you brought in my heart'I was scared to think about our future'I know age difference doesn't matter to you but it matter to others'and I was feared what if it came in our way'I didn't want to bind you in this relationship'I wanted to give you freedom to choose best for yourself but whenever I took a step back I found you more close to me" he dragged in a deep breath and She said nothing, only stared at him as the silence stretched far too long.

"I Love you Nupur---I always loved you'I love you from the day we met first" He said it softly, his voice only slightly lifted to be heard in her ears. She couldn't have heard anything except these words and her heart thumped madly in her chest as she stared back into those eyes for confirmation. Mayank's fingers were warm and solid as he curved his hand around hers. He held her firmly but not tightly and then brought to his lips kissing her palms, "A new beginning for us'will you be mine for forever'just mine"

A grin appeared on her lips despite those tears which were floating in her eyes and then he had pulled her in tight hug'comforting her'gathering her in the hold of his arms for Life.

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The End.

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all..i was reading the previous part...when i got ..this part..
or should i say last part😔

Secondly...
I happy happy to comment first..👏


Thirdly...


Oh...My My..God..!!!
No wonder i was falling for this Mayank more and more...

he is just so cute,so perfect...
frankly speaking Maria Didi..
this character of Mayank was somewhat like my dream boy...
Specially the way he confessed her feelings to his beloved wife.
his life his soul his Nupur...
I wish i could also get a loving person such as Mayank...

If i would have been in Nupur's place i would have ended this confession
to a much wilder positions...
No wonder i am talking like insane...
I am in so love with this FF...
Mayank and Nupur...
This couple has actually created a certain Magic on me...
Specially in this FF...
Loved the whole ff..
I used to read each and every part of this FF..atleast three times...

i am so loving this..
aNd i am feeling equally sad..that it ended...
No more Mayu of this ff and Nupur also...
I am so going to miss them a lot...

But alas...every story has a end..so this was the last part...

I thoroughly enjoyed each and every word of this last part...
It was not expected to be end..
but still i liked it...
I can understand...
But still I am going to read it again and again..even if it has ended...

i am so waiting for it's sequal just waiting for it...
Hope would get soon...

Loved it to the core..
Thank you so much for providing such a beautifull ff...

i am so thankfull to you...


😊
Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful ending.
So, finally mayank has confessed his love to Nupur... He told her that he had been loving her from the first time he had met her but was concerned about her.. He was conscious about the age difference... He didn't want to hurt her and that's why he didn't want bind her in a relationship..
All this lines of Mayank make me love him even more..❤️☺️
Truly gonna miss mayUr 😭
Tanks Maria apu.. Thank you very much for writing such a great love story of mayUr... Love u.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

First of all..i was reading the previous part...when i got ..this part..

or should i say last part😔

Secondly...
I happy happy to comment first..👏


Thirdly...


Oh...My My..God..!!!
No wonder i was falling for this Mayank more and more...

he is just so cute,so perfect...
frankly speaking Maria Didi..
this character of Mayank was somewhat like my dream boy...
Specially the way he confessed her feelings to his beloved wife.
his life his soul his Nupur...
I wish i could also get a loving person such as Mayank...

If i would have been in Nupur's place i would have ended this confession
to a much wilder positions...
No wonder i am talking like insane...
I am in so love with this FF...
Mayank and Nupur...
This couple has actually created a certain Magic on me...
Specially in this FF...
Loved the whole ff..
I used to read each and every part of this FF..atleast three times...

i am so loving this..
aNd i am feeling equally sad..that it ended...
No more Mayu of this ff and Nupur also...
I am so going to miss them a lot...

But alas...every story has a end..so this was the last part...

I thoroughly enjoyed each and every word of this last part...
It was not expected to be end..
but still i liked it...
I can understand...
But still I am going to read it again and again..even if it has ended...

i am so waiting for it's sequal just waiting for it...
Hope would get soon...

Loved it to the core..
Thank you so much for providing such a beautifull ff...

i am so thankfull to you...


😊

aww Shefali🤗🤗 i know deary how much you liked this FF and Mayank--whatever you said about Mayank is right..
AS i said its not the End--its beginning and its just start of a convenient Relationship..😳😃
i'm glad to get such sweet words from you🤗LOve y deary🤗
God Bless you..
keep smiling.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Humayra

Beautiful ending.

So, finally mayank has confessed his love to Nupur... He told her that he had been loving her from the first time he had met her but was concerned about her.. He was conscious about the age difference... He didn't want to hurt her and that's why he didn't want bind her in a relationship..
All this lines of Mayank make me love him even more..❤️☺️
Truly gonna miss mayUr 😭
Tanks Maria apu.. Thank you very much for writing such a great love story of mayUr... Love u.🤗

Humayra🤗🤗 first of all deary i'm sorry i couldn't complete ur req till yet😳
I'M glad you liked this journey😳😃🤗
Thanks for being with me...love y🤗
Keep smiling.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was really a beautiful ff maria di 😊 Hats off to you ...👏
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Originally posted by: Maria.

Humayra🤗🤗 first of all deary i'm sorry i couldn't complete ur req till yet😳

I'M glad you liked this journey😳😃🤗
Thanks for being with me...love y🤗
Keep smiling.

No problem apu. I know if my sweet apu has promised something to me then she surely gonna fulfill it..
I can understand you must've busy with jiju and attending relatives in Eid( are you blushing? 😛) and that's why you couldn't complete.. Love you... And you also keep smiling😊

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