*MN FF~Inconvenient relationship* Last part 142 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazinggg,loved it
plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
how could mayank do this? how can he be so harsed and heartless...

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Posted: 13 years ago
maria i m enjoying this ff
wonderful story
plz update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really inconvenient relationship... nice update..I like that u r focusing on their character and not messing up with them...

continue soon.
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Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur such an over Welcoming responce and beautiful comments🤗🤗means a lot to me, 🤗🤗🤗
well those readers who are confused about Nupur's age ,let me tell them she is 23yrs old while Mayank is 31 yrs old..
i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
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Inconvenient relationship

Mayank'd tried to catch her and at last grabbed her wrist before she would escape from the huge hall, her body stiffened at the rough touch of his palm around her soft skin, she swung back and the way her angry eyes swept from his eyes to his chin told him that this time it was not easy to recollect the scattered things.

"Nupur'listen me"

"Why should I listen you?" She bit off her words regarded him coldly keeping aside her urge to yelling at him for humiliating her every time, wanted to yell at herself even more for loving that person who even didn't care for her feelings a bit. She wasn't a violent person. She wasn't even hot-tempered but now she could not bear his rude behavior anymore. He dropped his arms fell into step next to her, "I am sorry..i had no intention to hurt you" he said quietly keeping eye on their surrounding and gulped of air calming down his temper But was that enough??She had been listened these words too many times that they had been lost effect. "you had no intention to hurt me but you did.." she shrugged and titled her head in other side, "and I have been said sorry for that"he said calmly like nothing had happened between them, she flabbergasted and swung again regarded him coldly, she did not expect him to behave so calmly there was not even sign of guilt flash across his features, "I don't want your apology" Her temper flared and She saw by his expressions he definitely had been taken her words as his insult but chose to ignore it before speaking he took another deep breath and lifted his gaze at her, "Listen Nupur,I am not in mood of fight"

"So I am!!" she replied, just as stubbornly giving him angry glare.

"Then why are you creating scene like always??" His lips tightened into a bitter line and he knew he had been lost his temper and said whatever comes in his mind. She backed off at his words and the tears glitters in her eyes made him realized how much his word had hurt her, he swallowed hard feeling a pang of guilt somewhere in his heart, he stepped next to her and caught her wrist she jabbed him but he did not release her, "I am sorry, I really sorry"

She regarded him earnestly and the guilt in his eyes realized her he meant that but she moved away her face and he loosened his grip over her wrist, "Listen Nupur,I know I was too much busy in work that could not give you time and when mom scolded me I realized my mistake and you know I don't do anything without my will, so if you are thinking I just came here for mom its wrong"

She turned back him and amazed to hear softness in his voice. For a fraction of a second she almost forgot the sting of his rudeness.

"Do you really mean it what you are saying?"

"Yes" His lips barely moved

She fully turned towards him lifting her eyes at him and then stared deep into his eyes, "if you are really sorry for your behavior then you have to call me 'jaan' in front of everyone"

"What??"He flabbergasted and his voice grew dangerously low.

"Do you know what you are saying" His eyes narrowed and he tried hard to keep his temper in control gasp air.

"Yes..Your apology will be accepted only at this condition" she said stubbornly, He caught her arm and gave her a shake, "why are you making it big deal? You know I can't do this" he bit his words and his eyes showed mixture of anger and irritation. She drew back herself giving him stubborn look, "you have to do it for repent your mistake"

"Do you think I will do it" Mayank's lips twisted

"Its not big deal Mayank Sharma to call your fiance 'jaan'"

He backed off her stubborn statement and gave her angry glare which did not affect her much, "you know I don't like this cheap'." His lips tightened into a bitter line but he cut short by her

"But I like it.." A heavy silence fell between then and then Mayank took deep breath stepping close to her trying to make her understand for one more time, "Nupur..You know I can't use these words for you, I am not this kind of person you know what I mean"

He sounded so soft and she stared back in his eyes and found him trying hard to control his temper but she did not let him win this time.

"You are saying or not??"She knew she was pouring fuel on his already raised temper but she could not back off this time Absolutely Not..

Mayank gave her long angry glance and than accepted his defeat as he did not want any fight, he had been fed up of this daily arguments and fights and moreover his mother had warned him that he never fight with Nupur

"Jaan" he whispered looking around if someone had listened or watched him and felt reveled as no one was watching them. Her heart raced thousands time in just few second and she gasped trying to compose herself and hid her emotions.

"I did not hear ...Please will you say it in bit loud voice?"She said playfully and Mayank glared her, "Jaan'I am sorry"

"Apology accepted"

She smiled widely and Mayank consciously looked around and his breath caught in his throat to see many eyes on them..

He took deep, unsteady breath and closed his eyes for a moment and opening them his gaze followed her face who was now smiling happily, he did not know where their relationship will lead them But this way is going to be tough for both of them.

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here is next update,hope you will like it😳
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Exceptionally beautiful writing
i am loving the way you are portraying Mayur here
its amazing
Loved it
hatts off to you
loved it
do continue soon
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Beautiful update Maria.specially d apology part.nupur is too smart.:D.the story is going interesting.im loving it.keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was awesomesttt part
you have wreitten it really amazingly
Nupur should behave little mature,continue soon
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Amazing part,you are portraying their characters so beautifully,i am loving it,i can understand Nupur behaviour she is young and Mayank is mature they both need to understand eachother,i really loved it

do continue soon

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