Childhood Crush of Raizadas Pt 7 Pg 52 *COMPLETED* - Page 40

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...how cute...awesome ending...👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
really sorry for the late reply...
but the end of this story was a big blow for for me...i wish u would have cont. and elaborated a little...but
i loved the arnav's protectiveness and possessiveness even the matter comes our beloved khushi...
i just could nt stop laughing even arnav got shyam punished for his mistake...i would have liked to his face(was the muscle twitching when he as angry) during his childhood days...
but thanks for writing such a wonderful story...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nirbasito

It was sooo beautiful ...especially Rabba ve moment...

Luved Arnav-khushi funny fight scene..ahahahah..Too cute!

and the ending was fantastic...Really appreciate your Work . 👏



Hey dear Thanks for liking the ending and the fights.
Well its our dear Arshi who will never stop fighting. hehehe.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arnaushi

really sorry for the late reply...

but the end of this story was a big blow for for me...i wish u would have cont. and elaborated a little...but
i loved the arnav's protectiveness and possessiveness even the matter comes our beloved khushi...
i just could nt stop laughing even arnav got shyam punished for his mistake...i would have liked to his face(was the muscle twitching when he as angry) during his childhood days...
but thanks for writing such a wonderful story...



No probs dear its okay i can understand u have ur reasons too to be late.
But i am happy that you liked the update.
Well i wil try my best to write the sequel OSs on this one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really nice ending...
Thx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
such a cute ending! i loved the baby ASR with his baby attitude LOL
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Iluvmyself

Really nice ending...

Thx for the pm...


Thanks.
Its was a nice feeling to know you loved the ending.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry227

such a cute ending! i loved the baby ASR with his baby attitude LOL



Awww thanks dear for liking the baby ASR attitude.
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey wait let me dance first

You must be thinking y am i dancing not dat coz i have gone mad .. coz i am the last to comment yeee

heheheh you must be confused she is happy to be last

wait let me take a bow first kya likha hai yaar tune ...

from the childhood they r fighting for bench

the way the fight in the class is so cool yaar

the rocket fight was awesome

i just loved the way u express the childhood emotions


Asr is strong from childhood aww so cool

Our sanka devi is to dam strong from bachpan man

shayamwa is to cheepwa i hate him jungly kahi ka

i just loved the way he protects her from childhood yaar

he beats shayam for khushi ..awww how sweet

and as rest is history their fights will never end

and this anjeli she is 1 disturbing creature

all and all i loved it from bottom of my heart

this is for u...

hatts off to the whole ff

challo aab mai thag gayi

jada lamba comment ho gaya na

aaram se read ka lena

dhiyan se padna

chalo aab mai jati hu taxiii aare mil gayi byeee

bye bye

jane se pehale mujha itne bada comment kabhi nahi mile
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww Miley. . . . . So big comment?
Nice yaar.
Love it.
Happy to know that you loved it so much.
Only some people know the generosity of replying.

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