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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Brilliant!

NO! Not the end yet 😆😆

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Damn that was hot.. pls do continue!! Loved the story

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

thank you for the pm... loved the conflicted khushi and the determined to show his love arnav... what a couple, always getting distracted by their passion! they seem to love living dangerously... also their passions seem to ignite and they give in to that desire in the most dangerous of situations 😉... here, when there's danger of them being caught [in the jungle shack in the show]! that cupboard seems to have been made just for them 😃! the steamy bits seem to come quite naturally to you! wonder what shyam has planned for khushi and what arnav's response will be

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starzyasha

@starzyasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

OMG!!! Only you can make every line so intense and beautiful!!! Amazing update... Thank you for the pm :)

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mayad

@mayad

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Posted on the blog but just wanted you to know that I am out of reading material now and you better put those fingers of yours to the keyboard! Hope the fleas are gone!

Can't wait for the next chapter and more cupboard love! Really wish I knew what's gotten into Khushi in this one!!!!!😉

Maya

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

woah !! hawwtt
yeah it was a surprise..
continue with this hun..it's too good
👏👏👏👏👏
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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Awesome stuff! Just caught up with the three parts and it is a brilliant mix of passion and suspense. Loved it👍🏼

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

r u serious??? 😲 you stopped there and last word the end 😒

please continue dear... i want more... the was so awesome hot update... loved he was trying his own ways to make her understand that she is hid wife forever and ever...