Dancing Queen! CHAPTER 25 part 2 !! hello again.!

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Angeline124

@Angeline124

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Finally u gave an fantastic update. Loved maanvi's pov! Hope virat would realize his love for maanvi. Continue soon and thnx for the pm.

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@say_cheese

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

what do i say dear its more than amazing ...
loved it to the core , loved the Manvi's view n the last few lines (those were really awesome..)
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thnx for an awesome update dear..
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n yes also for the pm.

.cont. soon plz..

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Ankita

@..Ankita..

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

awwie...this was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. to say the very least :) Mannu, oh-so adorable!
Fanatstic update!
keep going girl 👍🏼

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Beautiful... Just wonderful and much much more...
I loved how he cared for her and the baby... It was so natural...

Thank you so much for the pm 😊

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Loved it,, awesome update...
Caring virat and his love for the baby was well described. Ending is very nice, now maanvi know the reason of her life..
Plz do update often

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Dr. Simran Singhania

@Virmanroxx

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Thnx for updating . U updated aftr such a looong time.

dint read it yet. will comment again aftr reading

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

You are briljant Kimmy, Just falling in love all over again...

The way you describe the surroundings, that was; WoW!

Speechless.

Edited by BrunoMars - 12 years ago

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CHANDANA

@chandana123

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

I fell in Love with again!!

And the last line by Manvi was perfect!!

This is the best update ever...

Continue soon...

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

You're an amazing writer, you showed how love could bring changes in man, Virat is now completely a changed man, Manvi had changed him! 😳

I love the fact how he stood by her side when her own di blamed her, and I don't think Viren and Jeevs are negative but they are a sort of selfish and Viren is very much protective towards her wife but then, the split between the brothers and sisters was obviously not expected. The description of the cottage was so beautifully written, "Wow" it made me feel like I'm reading about one of rooms of the heavenly god!

This is soo good, it's making me excited about the next part!

I'm waiting😉!

Edited by ITrustMyHeart - 12 years ago