Dancing Queen! CHAPTER 25 part 2 !! hello again.! - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago
ohh mannu is jealous!! šŸ˜†
update soon...thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for the PM! The update was hilarious. Dilip is ridiculously funny- he thinks he stands a chance against our Virat šŸ˜ Ah well, the proposal was a touch rash by Virat- how's he going to get out of it now; especially without hurting his friend...
Looking forward to your next update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lolz...da stammering speech of tht creep dilip was actually very hillarious...n yeah he totally deserved being taught a lesson by virat...bt m a lil concerned for malika...she wil be hurt badly in da process...anyways nice update...plz continue soon n pm me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good storyline. Can't wait to hear the next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Creepo Dilip Got What He Deserved But I Hope This Mallika
knows That Virat Is Jus Faking It He Doesnt Really Mean That Proposal
But Manvi Why Is She Taking That Drunken Wayward Dilip's Side Yuck
Cant Wait Til VirMan Unite And I Am So Halpy U Finally Updated
Now Update Soon And PM Me
Thanksz
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was extreme funny... Virat was ri8 Dilip is extremely stupidoholic.. Why Manvi behaving like a doormat bimbo with Dilip n sherni with Virat..??? I know this going 2 be sooo dramatic.. thnks for the pm n update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahaha.. Quite funny...šŸ˜†
thnx 4 pm..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finallg got it thanks for all the trouble and loved the update please pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiii!!!!!... This update is hopefully short and sweet, i didnt get so many comments on the last update but m hopin it will change this time as i really do value your opinions!
Take care n remember... Luv u! :)


chapter 12: turning tables
Manvi stood there dumbstruck... Her feet had become glued to the ground. She looked on at malika who had a smile on her face that could light up any room. She forced a smile on her sullen face and held out a shaky hand to malika who Failed to see the pain in her voice as she congratulated her...
'im so happy for you' manvi looked at malika with tears in her eyes.
'are you okay manvi?... You look pale...oh my god why are you crying?!' malika asked totally confused at the change in manvis demeanour.
'im fine malika, consider them tears of joy' manvi replied barely smiling
Manvi stood there frozen as malika hugged her and ran out the room to convey the news to the rest of the vadheras. She looked over at virat who had been stood there watching the two girls with no expression on his face.
Slowly, he walked over to manvi looking her deep in her eyes... As he leaned over her and shut the door. He looked at her with tears in his eyes unable to bear the pain he saw in hers.
'shouldnt you be out there celebrating with malika?' manvi asked coldly unable to look him in his eyes.
'hurts doesnt it?' he replied looking at her, burning through her skin with the fire in his eyes. Answering her question with his own.
She looked at him taken aback...'what does?'
'being alone' virat said in his husky tones
'i have dilip, im not alone... You dont even love her, you cannot be happy' she challenged
'what does it matter to you... My happiness?' he enquired, looking her deep in her teary eyes lifting his eyebrow as he searched for an answer in her eyes.
'It doesnt' she barely whispered
'Why are you still here then?'he asked chilling her whole body with his icy tones
Manvi looked down unsure what to say
'Theres a difference between who we love, who we settle for and who we are meant for... I guess i had to learn the hard way.' virat continued
'Theres also a difference between who we think we love and those we need to have and get out of our system' manvi replied her eyes firmly on virat.
Virat pursed his lips finding it difficult to contain his anger at being so misjudged.
'why do you hate me so much?' virat asked manvi lifting her chin up slightly so she had to look at his eyes.
'i hate how much i cant hate you' she muttered guiltily... Trying hard to hide her face.
'why do you try?...i will do nothing to hurt you, not now not ever'
Manvi stared into his promising eyes, falling deeper into his hazel oceans with every word he said.
'its too late now", he told her... Sadness echoing the walls around them.
Manvi slowly looked at the tears in his eyes mirroring the tears in her own... She cupped his face and turned it towards her own... She looked at him, both their eyes mirroring what they had to say. She pulled his face in towards hers placing her lips on his.
Her kiss telling him everything she needed him to know... Her eyes closed, she felt him pull away unwantingly,rejected, manvi opened her eyes seeing virat shaking his head with his own eyes still closed.
'you belong with someone else manvi... I cant do this to anybody... Not even dilip'
Manvis face burned in both guilt and embarassment... She looked at him again, her body weak under his influence
'sorry' she stuttered as she left the room in a rush...
'what have i done?' she asked accusingly at her reflection, shocked realising the game was no longer in her control.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh God, this is bad. Now Mallika thinks Virat loves her, but he does not. Poor thing will have her heart broken.😭 I can't believe Maanvi actually kissed Virat, I mean she is trying so hard to hate him, but she can't.😊 I like how Virat said that "he can't do this is anybody...not even delip." Real nice of him.😃 I hope in the future updates, Virat tells Maanvi his past, why he did the things he did. Maybe then she will understand him better.
Thanks for the PM, continue soon. šŸ˜›
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