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Yayyy finally I finished it...have been reading all the 43 chapters non stop...my God feel like reading marathon!
Okay, so you deserve a long ass comment for such a beautiful story and the fact that I cannot comment on the individual chapters..lol
Firstly, I loved how you introduced the characters, they were already engaged, not in love and not quite hating each other, so we could see the progress in their relation without the bullshit of hating..and ego etc...I really like the progress in their relation...under the situation they got married, I found it too sweet when you started with Arnav going her home every day to spend some time...and Khushi was her quirky best to call him Rakshas..
Then the phase, where things started changing, they have a fight, start feeling attraction, they solve a fight like mature people..lol, and they promise to work on it...beautiful again, it shows the strength the characters have, the loyalty, the promises, the fear of not living without the other.
The best part when they admit to themselves and to each other that they love each other...just beautiful..the confession when Arnav wasnt able to say the words and had a panic attack...lol the humor is awesome in this story throughout...I believe you r funny too...so u bring out the humor in the best way..
Things go downfall for a while with Kannan's arrival, her knowing the truth, the apologies, etc...but very maturedly handled by Khushi...and what to say about Kannan, he is a good man, with a good heart...he forgave Arnav even before he said sorry, just cos he knew the old ASR is nowhere here to see, ASR had changed for Arnav...for Khushi...you know the best thing is I love the progress in Arnavs character, how you slowly make him a human..lol
Kannan and Khushi's friendship and their chemistry mind blowing...just awesome...their dialogues to each other are brilliantly written, the sense of humor, the teasing, the fun they have amazing...
And not to mention, I love how Arnav and Khushi have not given into the physical desires even if being attracted so strongly to each other, not that I dont want them to...but it makes their characters more strong, more loyal to their promises...the sexual chemistry between them is so cutting..my God can only imagine there will be fireworks..wen they actually "do it".
Shyam part is just too shocking, he is crazy to be obsessed by one face and doing all that to other girls...sick and crazy! Thank God Anjali is finding a good trusting friend in Kannan, and even if he knows he loves her, he is so carfeul of not hurting her by crossing the lines...love how their relation is shaping up. I hope Arnav and Kannan take care of Shyam soon...though for a whole hour until i read the next update, i was shit scared that Arnav will marry the wh**e Menaka and then Khushi will be broken...Please (I mean I beg you) dont do that, it will just break my heart...ofcourse its your story, but cannot see Arnav and Khushi apart because of that psycho..(already doing that on the actual show).
Finally I loved the mush part, the birthday surprises, the way Arnav told her all the hurt he has been experiencing, he was scared she would hate him, but time and again she has proved that whatever he did, she was always there to look beyond his mistakes, his past and love him for the good and love him more and more...i think Arnav in here needed this desperately for someone to show the love, the respect that she does...becos he was suffering from the self loathing..
I am loving the Arnav and Khushi here, you have done an amazing job in creating them...and please keep it up! So many people recommended this story to me,..and I did not read cos did not have the time to catch up on 43 chapters...but now that I have...I am glad I did...i would have misses a good read...
Loving it...you are an awesome writer...beautiful, mystifying, and amazing story...
Please pm me with updates, I promise to comment on updates from now on...
Thanks :)
(Phew...such a long comment, I hope you dont fall asleep reading this ... LOL)
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