FF: Living Without You: 4: Part 59 (Last) Updated

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#801

It was wonderful.. Loved it..

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#802

that was simply beautiful! that para describing what arnav could share with khushi now that she has given him the right was just mindblowing and poignant, at the same time... it was almost like arnav can't believe his good fortune: that khushi has finally accepted him

whenever he is referred to as a devil with a seductive voice has been apt, never more so than today... the manner in which he naughtily played with khushi while removing the jewellery was very seductive with a strong undercurrent of passion runniong through it... it wasn't graphic , yet was scorching hot... could relate to khushi almost melting into a puddle at arnav's feet... love how you bring emotion into the midst of a passionate scene: "Last Diwali, I couldn't... I hurt you, disappointed you...", he whispered his apology. "This Diwali..."

khushi's desire and childlike innocence blend well in these lines: He tasted sweet. And she loved sweets. She looked eagerly at his hot lips and then at his eyes, in case he had missed the message. and those photographs added that extra something to what was being described... they were just bang on!

thank god arnav and khushi got some respite from the world outside! they need this happines and moments of togetherness as life hasn't been very fair to them much!

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#803

☺️ Beautiful...smitha, u did it! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#804

the sheer passion has managed to reduce me to gooey mesh!!!...this is beyond excellence!!!...it was sensual with a capital S!!!...omg, i am still reeling under its after effects...

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deep5128

@deep5128

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#805

Brilliant update!! So beautifully written!
Cant wait for next part!!

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#806

That was so beautiful...no words to explain👏

Amazing!!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#807

This was absolutely beautiful. Magical! No other words to describe it!

thank you!

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#808

absolutely stunning! S.T.U.N.N.I.N.G.! and the pics just ellivated it even more! loved the gentleness yet the detailness in this update! simply beautiful!!