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Posted: 13 years ago
coolll the update was awesome thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum update dear!!!

Loved it totally👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was quite gud yar...story actually begins from now I guess

waiting 4 the nxt 1...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...loved it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
IT WAS AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT
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Posted: 13 years ago
Partner, I really hope ab tu mujhe jaanti he! I can never comment early! Late hona to banta he! So uske liye no sorry! :P Update bada hi extreame me cutee tha! I LOVED it! Update asap!! Ab I'm very lazy haan, so chote cmnt se hi kaam chala Le! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
medha before i forget the storyline update karo meri maa...
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Posted: 13 years ago
okay im finally back with the update. im sorry i cant update more than once a week, mainly on the weekend cause school can kill, and besides what can i say laziness rules. moreover ive started yet another ss so i have to write that too. anyways enough excuses and back to the update. to all those who commented and liked thankyou so much, it really means a lot to me, id love to reply to everyone personally but if i start that then it will probably take me a month to update. anyways this update has a little less swaron and the next update will have a little less kriyaansh, so dont stop reading, besides i got a twist coming up in the next 3-4 updates.
anyways here goes. the first bit might be a little boring but it picks up.
chapter 4

Kriya- hey, swayam youre back, I was just about to send the car for you. The mechanic just got done with it a minute ago.

Swayam- yeah I got a lift. Anyways I spoke to Nicole maam and she said that shell consider you for the dance team aftger you audition tomorrow. Maybe you can think of the steps you want to do and rehearse a bit.

Kriya- wow, that's great. But I don't think we can do that today. Didn't you get the text for the party today evening? The from what I know theres a party in the campus grounds first and then later theres an after party at one of the players house.

Swayam- no, I don't think I got one. Wait let me check.

He searched his pocket for his phone but to no avail, it wasn't there. A quick scan through his bag and another frantic search of his pockets later, when it was still not found he came to the conclusion that it was lost.

Swayam- damn, where is that phone now. I had it with me in the parking lot, when I spoke to you.

Kriya- where did you go after that?

Swayam- I just got into the car after that. crap I must have left it there, theres no other option left.

Kriya- you can borrow my phone and call up yours. Maybe if your friends still driving he might pick up. By the way who gave you the lift, I thought the school would have been empty by then.

Swayam- um, actually Sharon did. Anyways let me call up and see if she can bring it to the party if shes coming.

Kriya- wow, I thought you said she hated your guts.

Swayam- well yeah, apparently not as much as I thought. Anyways you get ready, ill make the call and then find something to wear myself.

Sharon had just reached home when she heard her phone ring, she checked the caller id and saw it was rey.

Sharon- hey, rey, whats up.

Rey- youre coming to todays party right? The one for the basketball tournament win that I told you about yesterday? The texts have just gone out to everyone today afternoon, that's what the meeting was abouy, last minute changes here and there and stuff.

Sharon- yeah ofcource im coming. Ill see you there only.

The party was in full swing when kriya and swayam reached there. Even after many attempts there had been no response on the phone so hed assumed that either she didn't know about it or shed rather not pick up. He searched for her in the mass of bodies and spotted her sitting beside rey and a couple of other people. She had chosen to wear a white satin gown for the evening that complimented her figure excellently. he was about to make his way up to her when all the guys sittig there dragged rey from there and led him to the stage and the rest of the group followed.

Random guy- hey guys, listen up! The reason for for this tournaments victory goes to this guy right here. Hes go the best record in the entire tournament. So guys a big cheers to the basketball team captain, rey!!!!!

A loud cheer wnt up through the crowd at that.

Rey- thanks guys, but it wasn't possible without the rest of the team and our coach. Anyways enjoy the party.

Random guy 2- hey wait rey, where you going? We aren't done yet. Guys since this party is in honour of rey we thought we hd to include something he loves to make this night special for him. So it has to do with dance, but theres a twist, So we have decided on a small game, somewhere in this hall weve hidden a pair of dancing shoes, and the girl who finds these dancing shoes is gonna have a dance with rey right here.

A louder cheer seemed to rise mostly from the girls this time, who instantly began a a rather thorough search of the hall.

Rey sighed, these guys were crazy. God knows which of them hed land up with, most of them barely even knew the basics of dancing. He felt a tap on his shoulder and turned around to see it was kriya. She was looking absolutely stunning in a well fitting short black dress that she had chosen to wear.

Kriya- mr team captain hun? How come you never mentioned that?

Rey- just like that.

Kriya- anyways, congratulations.and best of luck for your new challenge.

Rey- what new challenge?

Kriya- that. You think those girls are gonna let you off easy, they seem to be on a madhunt in there.

Rey- I know, so whats up. filled the form for the dance team?

Kriya- yeah, I did. The auditions tomorrow.

Rey- that's great. Lets hope you make it.it will be cool to have you in there.

Kriya- well see you around and congrats again.

swayam made his way through the maze of girls, searching frantically for the dance shoe, toward Sharon who was now standing alone watching the scene unfold before her. He had never seen anything like this and no matter what he did he couldn't stop laughing.

Swayam- hey!

Sharon swayam! Hey!

Swayam- actually I just wanted to ask you if id left my phone in your car by mistake.

Sharon- I don't know you can come and check later if you want.

Swayam- by the way, youre not participating in this game of sorts?

Sharon- I already know where the shoe is.

Swayam- how do you know that?

Sharon- you need a mastermind to think of this. Guess who that was.

Swayam- oh I see, you right?

Sharon- yeah, that's me.

Swayam- well one things for sure I can nevere think of something like this.

Suddenly they heard random guy 2 announce that the shoe had been found. They turned around to see him hoisting the shoe high in the air while kriya stood beside him with a shocked expression still grasping the situation.

Now how had this happened? All she had done was made her way to the drinks counter and occupied the high stool beside it. how was she to know that the shoe would have been kept right beside it barely visible but definitely there. She had nearly tripped on it and when she bent down to see what it was, this had been the result. Before she even realized she had been pushed onto the stage with rey opposite her. He seemed a little less disoriented than her, atleast he had got the time to expect it.

Rey- ready?

Kriya=guess so, what about you?

Rey=always am!

okay thats it for today, hoped you liked it do shower your comments, id love to read them, criticism always welcome



anybody intrested in the dresses then the first one is sharons and the second is kriyas





Edited by medhasainanee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I didn't find any couple getting extra footage even though you said so in the begining. This has been another achievement of yours to maintain the balance between the 'script time' of each character. So far each one has gotten equal time and space to grow as character and mark for themselves. So Kriya and Rey are going to get their first dance . I was kind of expecting somethng like that. And yeah Sharon seems so chilled out in this update. Looks she is quite enjoying herself to see the mad rush of rest of the girls. Waitng to see how each couple are gonna come close and affect each other.
P.S - Medha i think the update is copied twice.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update and loved the dresses

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