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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovd d whole chaptr. Plz gv an early update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just awesome. I was really glad to see dance take the centre stage in this update. Whether it was Kriya's excitement on seeing the rehersal hall or whether as medium to break the ice between Swayam and Sharon. It seems even more good because lately in the show we have hardly seen anything related to dance and the passion related to it among the characters.

Kriyaansh part was nicely done. And i completely agree with Kriya's pov that it would be damn interesting to read Sherlock homes over Pride and prejudice and stuffs like that. At least i would remain awake while reading it not zoned out or something. Swayam and Kriya friendship or the bros sis relationship was pleasant to read. They both know each other like back of their hand. But the surprise for me was Sharon accepting Swayam's friendship so soon. I have not anticipated this .

Waiting for the next update. And yeah this time please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Kriyam bonding is really good
Finally swaron r frnds
Update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am happy that you updated...😃
it was awesome medha...
i really love it..very cute one..
kriyansh and swaron become friends...😃
kriyansh part was sweet...
rey become the tourguide 😆
swaron sequence is also nice...

and you have 300 unread pms..😲
all the best...🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: marauder

Just awesome. I was really glad to see dance take the centre stage in this update. Whether it was Kriya's excitement on seeing the rehersal hall or whether as medium to break the ice between Swayam and Sharon. It seems even more good because lately in the show we have hardly seen anything related to dance and the passion related to it among the characters.

Kriyaansh part was nicely done. And i completely agree with Kriya's pov that it would be damn interesting to read Sherlock homes over Pride and prejudice and stuffs like that. At least i would remain awake while reading it not zoned out or something. Swayam and Kriya firendship or the bros sis relationship was pleasant to read. They both know each other like bak of their hand. But the surprise for me was Sharon accepting Swayam's friendship so soon. I have not anticipated this .

Waiting for the next update. And yeah this time please update soon.

oh my god is that you shishir? itna lamba comment!
thankyou so much, reading your comment always brings a amile on my face. as for swaron, well youre gonna have to wait and asee what happens next. i cant tell you cuz i dont even have a clue myself.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: medhasainanee



oh my god is that you shishir? itna lamba comment!
thankyou so much, reading your comment always brings a amile on my face. as for swaron, well youre gonna have to wait and asee what happens next. i cant tell you cuz i dont even have a clue myself.


Thoda jyada bada ho gaya 😆. Well it all depend on my state of mind and how the update affects it. I was in good mood and this update was even more pleasant so. So itna lamba wala comment. Waise update hi itna badhiya tha ki bina likhe raha hi nahi gaya.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: marauder


Thoda jyada bada ho gaya 😆. Well it all depend on my state of mind and how the update affects it. I was in good mood and this update was even more pleasant so. So itna lamba wala comment. Waise update hi itna badhiya tha ki bina likhe raha hi nahi gaya.

wow! you made my day! thankyou so much and i hope im good enough to keep getting bada waal comments in future updates😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..

loved how u expressed kria's views...

lekin kria ka toh dance hi nhi huya... 😔

anyways waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

awesome update..

loved how u expressed kria's views...

lekin kria ka toh dance hi nhi huya... 😔

anyways waiting for next part

next update ke liye ruk ja, mil jayega
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dildostidance19

i am happy that you updated...😃

it was awesome medha...
i really love it..very cute one..
kriyansh and swaron become friends...😃
kriyansh part was sweet...
rey become the tourguide 😆
swaron sequence is also nice...

and you have 300 unread pms..😲
all the best...🤣

glad you liked it!
i know, a mammoth task lies ahead of me!😆

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