FF : I Am...FREE (Part 12 cont. Thread 2)

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lastdesire

@lastdesire

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#721

ok...khushiz heart stilled due 2 her proximity wiz nk and wen arnav was around it started beating wildly...i feel bad 4 nk...i duno wt i wan m so confused jus lyk khushi...wonderful update

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#722

Awesome... 👏

Aranv is not gonna give up...😃

N.K also loves khushi but he know she only loves Arnav...

Cant wait to see what will happen next..

Update soon

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#723

its khushi's heart of course...

im feeling relieved...
arnav didnt give up...

nk does love her...
but who cares??well.. i dont..
she doesn't love him...😛

do update soon...
i have cravings for this hehehehe...😆

do update soon...

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#724

i'd rather ve khushi with nk than arnav...

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madforipk

@madforipk

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#725

U had scared me in the last part ending.. Phew

.. Great going.. Love the story

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Becs

@Becs

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#726

I can actually feel Arnav's pain. What he's going through. But we have full faith in you and waiting to see how the story takes it turn.

Wonderful update!

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CrazY-4-BaRuN

@CrazY-4-BaRuN

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#727

NK !!.. You confusing mee ! 😭

Khushi Plss.. its Arnav.. only Arnav ! :(

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cutepuppy

@cutepuppy

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#728

it is khushi's heart that beat now .am i correct?well will see in next part

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#729

that was a very moving and emotional update... arnav's open challenge to nk was awesome, but loved how calmly the latter took it... I find nk the most sensible of the lot! poor khushi still searching for an answer, but looks like nk will have to accept that she has no deeper feelings for him

arnav's penitence was nice to see... appreciate that he went to the gupta house to apologise to them and to escort them to his house to meet khushi... loved amma and buaji for standing up for khushi and giving arnav a piece of their minds... they should forget about society and look after the daughter who has sacrificed so much for them

an intriguing end to the update, I must say: And the heart that had been still...now beat wildly... But who's heart was it? has arnav decided to sacrifice his love? his earlier words to nk somehow bely that fact! don't tell me that nk is now falling for arnav, too 😆!

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prayasbanetta10

@prayasbanetta10

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#730

Hey Desi !

This is my favourite fan fiction of yours . I absolutely love this . It's quite different with the NK angle and your words are always powerful . I have been a silent reader of this ff but your author's note made me comment. How can we be unhappy ? I mean it's your story so it's up to you how you want to continue it (which you have been doing remarkably) , who are we to demand any changes in it and I really hope that you continue it like you have originally planned to do and not let some people alter the course of this gripping story . You are the writer and this is your concept and this story just shows your creativity , your ingenuity and that's why I love it so much .

I'm sorry if I came across as rude or have offended you in any way .

You are a gifted person Desi ! Kudos to you !

Edited by prayasbanetta10 - 13 years ago