Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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smile_n_laugh

@smile_n_laugh

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

I was so happy to read your update!! It has been so long that thought you had forgotten, but, I am so glad to see you pick it up again. This story is absolutely perfect and can't wait for the next part.

Welcome back!
-Maya

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

You update a year later and I read the update a month later! Yet, the story holds its charm. Another beautiful that leaves you feeling restless, wanting, yet somehow content. Such talent you have. :)

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

This story will never lose its charm or ability to make me sigh and wonder the how's and whys of their separation.. no matter how many times I read it...please update soon..

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Loved the latest update, after so long - but too good as per usual.

This was just touching - the sweet subtle romance, after all these years- behind the pain, there's still the longing for love and to be with him. Experience the bliss and be away from the hollow pain within her for a little while.
I loved it all from the gesture of the kiss to khush sleeping next to him towards the 'good moring' .. it was all too sweet and subtly toothy grin*- type romantic. Loved it all and ashna .. can't wait to have a bit of her next update.

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can't wait ! Update soon ! : ) x

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

Please update:) the story is addictive

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Here's hoping for a twist of fate (pun intended!) that an update will be posted soon... Hope you are well,. This story is deeply rooted within me. The characters come to life, because your writing allows the reader to envision them, hope you really do complete it one day ,please.

Edited by LadyR - 11 years ago

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Aparajita267

@Aparajita267

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

This is by far my favourite story.. I feel like I'm in a trance while I'm reading this story..pls continue.. 😊

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#828

Even If incomplete I can read this over and over again, in my mind I have envisioned a happy ending for just the three of them, with a lttile help from NK ..

.I have in my mind visualized long conversations between Khushi and Arnav, the past revisited, the missing moments in each other lives recreated and the present waiting for them to start lving for each other in Deradhun...

The lyrics of ' Tera Bina Zindagi se koi shikwa nahin, shikwa nahin, Tere bina Lekin Zindagi toh Zindagi bhi nahin, Zindagi nahin' summarizes their love that never diminished while they continued to live apart ...

Hope you may update one day...

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jeetega

@jeetega

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Posted: 10 years ago

#829

After getting the link for this ff from many recommended arhi ffs, read it in one go.

Have to say that I'm completely bowled over by the story and the writing style, especially how the story shows the present, but drifting in and out of the past, it seems like taking a dip in a pool sometimes, and sometimes like getting wet in a drizzle or a heavy downpour depending upon the memories.

I don't know whether I'm saying it the write way as it's bit overwhelming to describe the feel you give through the story in words. Please do continue with the story when you can and don't wrap it up just for the sake of it because it's too beautiful to give a sudden ending.

Thank you for sharing your work with us, especially for readers who started reading arhi ffs late, really appreciate it

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#830

This is beautiful writing. The way you described each moment and feelings. I was quite apprehensive to read this one first but then now I am very much in relief that I decided to read it.

Now, it's been more than a year since your last update. Still I hope you'll update this. Please do. I really don't want such a beautiful story to be unfinished.