Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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@.1.1.1.1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

loved it plz update soon😊

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Oooh! I love it! Can't believe her daughter's idol is Arnav. Twist of fate, indeed. Glad to see that NK is still part of Khushi's life :)

Continue soon!

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

As usual your writing is beautiful misty... but I'll be honest when I say that I was skeptical about middle aged Arnav and Khushi... but your stories are poignant...so I will try to remove my mental block and enter into this new world of Twist of Fate :-)

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

A new story by you??? WOOO!! :D :D

And the first chapter already has me excited to read it! :D

I haven't watched the movie, but shall go and check out the trailer to get an idea what it's about!

Great work! I could visualise the entire thing, the maturity on Khushi's face, the childlike innocence on Aashna's face, and the secrets that surround them.

NK is still in touch with them? :) That's nice :) I always thought that those two would make the best of friends, and so I am glad that whatever happened in Khushi's life she still had someone she could call a friend :)

Aashna's last line cracked me up :') Seems like someone already has a bit of ASR running through her :D

And as for her looking up to Arnav. As children we always look up to our parents to learn, to imitate, to be just like them. So I actually really really liked how you showed Aashna wanting to be just like Arnav, having a connection with him despite not knowing her relation to him. Great stuff!

I hope I am not jumping the gun by assuming Aashna is ASR and Khushi's daughter! That's the impression I got from this chapter anyway :P

Oh and I forgot to add, I absolutely love the banner of this story! It's beautiful! :)

Edited by Krani - 13 years ago

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Vrushali Naik

@barunlove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Whose the guest gonna be!!!...Khushi's dream haunter...Aashana'a Dad!!!! Just hope so...love d way u write!!!!

Desperately Fabulous!!!!...Already excited to know the rest!!!!...

P.S. I havent seen d movie...!!! Would love to c ur wicke dways frst n den thnk of watching it!!!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Oh my gosh!

This is simply awesome!

I'm guessing Arnav is the father! wow! What a premise!

Thank you for the PM!

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

hey is that guest is arnav.?? awesome.! i loved it and yeah i will try to watch that movie too..update soon😊

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disha7

@disha7

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

great start!😊

looking forward to the next chapter!!

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

So I just read the synopsis...and I have a feeling we are in for a hell of a ride.

And I think my analysis of the part was off as well, after reading what the movie is about.

But then again you said you are putting your own spin to the story, so let's see how it goes :)

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Roopa

@roops82

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Another FF by you..thats amazing..Aashana is Khushi's daughter and she wants to interview her own father!!! thats interesting..eagerly waiting to know the past of arhi and now NK is getting a guest..i hope its arnav..