Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

Fantastic update! The pain and hope in both Arnav and Khushi is brilliantly written.. Pain at all those lost years, hope that they can finally build something from this point forward... And I think Ashna is not going to be happy that the truth has been kept from her all these years.. I think there may be some ASR-ish anger there.. :) Can't wait for the next chapter..

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smithasrk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Men...Grrr

Nice update

short one[ runs to hide]😆

Thanks for the pm

smitha🤗

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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

oh what a lovely update! so many emotions portrayed so well! arnav knows aashna is his daughter, arnav and khushi still have sizzling chemistry, aashna suspects something(or soon will), and best of all, they are living under one roof! you're such an awesome writer! cant wait for the next update! :)

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

nice update its getting interesting...did arnie asaked to leae khushi omg...

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

ohhh...
arnav himself asked her to leave????
😭
the flashbacks are awesome...reminded me a lot of memories😊
a lovely update...

thanks so much for the pm...:)

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ayushma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

... they're such a cute couple!!!! they laugh together, are hurt together, they're writhing in pain together... and they love immensely together...

i wonder why he let her go so easily... old wounds have not dried yet... does arnav know aashna is his child???

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

superb job on this update too :)

thxx for the pm 😊

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s s nair

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

wow... that wz an awesome update... really enjoyed... update fast... waiting... 😍

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-Devanshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Why?why?why did he ask her to leave??hmmph..stupid-"i feel guilty"-incredibly handsome-arrogant-flirtatious guy...yeah...that's what he is...

Loved the whole chapter though...;)...

Especially when he came to know that aashna is khushi's daughter...i have no idea what is going to happen in this story and so im more excited to read it whenevr you update it!!

Aahh,,and how can i forget the eternal crackling chemistry...and the way you describe it...just love it!!!khushi is obviously hurt from the past but im sure arnav will not let go off her this time...:)

P.S love the arnav falling unconcscious and khushi reviving him flashback...i had never actually thought about it that way till i read it in your words...:)...now that i think of it...it explains the whole situation so much better!!

Edited by DM1810 - 13 years ago