Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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AllOfTheStarss

@AllOfTheStarss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

The ending was absolutely beautiful!

Can't wait to see how this story shapes up.

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peepli

@peepli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

that was sooo beautiful..

loved it..

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devsum

@devsum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

awesome. They are so much in love, so why did they separate?THANKS FOR THE PM.😊

Edited by devsum - 13 years ago

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Once again. I pick what I felt was the most touching line in the entire update.

"For some it would mean nothing, a simple taking of names.

But for them, saying and hearing those words, were like taking sips of a long-forgotten elixir, that if not completely, partly quenching the thirst that had built-up over the past years."

This update was loaded. And brilliant.

The emotions you put into such simple things is brilliant.

Loved it.

Thank you for the update, and the PM.

~Arya~

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Apologies haven't been able to read the new FF so far! Finally dI'd!

The first chapter depressed me no end - they spent so many years apart? Why? Made worse by the fact that I was already depressed - but the third chapter washed all that away!!

Waiting to read more! Will comment at leisure !

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 13 years ago

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Maya

@What_the

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Oh it was so well-written...loved the way you captured their emotions at seeing each other after years...

truly beautiful...looking fwd to more...

cheers
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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

That was beautiful!

I'm speechless!

Thank you for the PM!

Edited by JerryTheMouse - 13 years ago

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berdine

@berdine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

AAAWWW

I wept while reading

So touching

beautiful,

don't know which other way to appreciate the writing

god bless

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

beautiful! just beautiful... i had pins pricking around my heart while reading the last 2 paras... how do you manage to weave such wonderful emotions with words???

also please please update ROA... its been quite a while... i am missing it...