Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

That was so beautiful I love your writing style its so poetic!

Excellent update!

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

OMG that was awesome and beautiful.

lovely update. thanks for the pm

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

the last part was simply and utterly gorgeous! the way khushi was describing how she'd take anything apart from his tender touch, even the anger. and arnav too! i was thinking he'd start yelling at her the second he'd see her but no, and he was so lost in khushi he didn't even ponder upon who that kid was. 1+1 is NEVER 2 for him is it?! ahahah not so smart are u arnav?! :P . ashna-arnav scene was cute too.. :)

but poor khushi :'( :'( i loved the different emotions the mother daughter went through where khushi was distraught and ashna was rejoicing with glee to see her idol in front of her.

and oh my god the tension in the car! jee it was hot ^_^ ^_^. *gasp* but i'm curious to know as to why NK waited so long to make dese two meet? i loved the update, it was mixed with sooo many emotions! and thanks for the pm! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Oh dear.

That was amazing. I have been rendered speechless!

The whole thing was dealt with such tenderness, such gentleness...*wipes away tears that are prickling my eyes*

Beautiful...specially the last past...just names for some, but actually so much more.

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ssaaaa

@ssaaaa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

WOW!!!!! That last part with the both of them was beautiful!!!! So full of emotion!!!

That was beautiful! Love the way you write!!!

Update soon pleaseee...

Thank you for the PM

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preetijaiswal19

@preetijaiswal19

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

SO SO SO SO beautifully written!!! I could see the scenes happening in front of me! very touching and beautiful! thnx for the PM!

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

awww tht was so so beautiful

m speechless

thnks for pm

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

You paint the perfect picture. Others stare in amazement and wonder.

dts exactly wat i w doing...staring at the update in amazement..how do u manage to write it so beautifully...arnav n khushi in car n i can imaine evry single detail...he noticed ashna's eyes are like him...

thnx for PM

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

GOR-geous!

When I read words strung together with such perfection----I put my hand to my heart and am left inarticulate.

For some it would mean nothing, a simple taking of names.
But for them, saying and hearing those words, were like taking sips of a long-forgotten elixir, that if not completely, partly quenching the thirst that had built-up over the past years.