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awesome ff...just read it in one go...plz pm me ...
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awesum update
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Chapter 5: Hot! But too Hot

Character sketch: Alisha



Sometimes the witch and sometimes an angel. Confident, determined, strong willed, responsible, yet childish and innocent. Filled with attitude. Actually her attitude varies depending upon the person before her.

She has all flavours meetha, thikha, khatta and namkeen.

One person you really can't disrespect and if you do then only one sentence for you''..

WELCOME TO HELL

She respects and loves only one person

Don't ever say bad abt that person'''''..Well if want to commit sucide and you r not able to then surely go ahead coz she will make sure you do.

Opps forgot the most important thing she is so damm hot that there isn't a guy who wouldn't look twice.

Location: St. Louis canteen

"SHARON RAI PRAKASH AND KRIYA GHAI I CHALLENGE YOU FOR A DANCE FACE OFF"

Every one turned back to look at the girl.

Everyone kept starring well atleast the guys couldn't take off their eyes off her.

Nil: She is hot man

Vicky: Ha dude hai kon yeh hottiii

Just then the college pune entered and walked towards her asked her if she was the new junior and asked her to follow him to the principal's cabin for some formalities.

Alisha: (turned back and looked at Sharon and Kriya who were still staring at her): By the way meh tumhari junior hu. Nice to meet you. Don't worry you guys are not on my rival list. It's just a friendly dance challenge. I really wanted to have a face off with you guys.

Hope you two will accept the challenge. No hard feelings kkk. See you around.

Everyone was practically dumbstruck.

Vish: Strange man, face off ke liye challenge bhi karti aur bolti hai no hard feelings.

Simi: Mujhe ye ladaki bilkul nahi pasand. What do u think Sharon?

Sh: She sure had guts. Challenge kiya hai toh obviously apna mazak banana ke liye nahi kiya hoga so that means acchi dancer hai.

Sw: Shayad ha but I m sure sure tum se acchi nahi

Sh: Like I need you to tell me that (still angry at him)

Sharon walks out off the canteen followed by rimmi and simmi.

Nil: Junior hai rite but seriously hot hai.

(To Vicky) What do u think dude? Woh mujhe pasand karegi'..

Bharat: ARRRE yaar ladki dekhi nahi ki phir se suru ho gaya

Neha on seeing Vicky still stare in the direction of that girl

Neha: Babu tum us ladhaki ko liking na

Neha hates u

Vicky: Nahi Neha woh'.

Neha: Woh kya Neha knowing everything (saying so she started crying '''.

Vicky ( still lost in his thoughts): Neha aisa nahi hai

(Then turns towards nil) Tune iss ladaki ko pehele kabhi dekha hai kya

Nil: Nahi kyu

Everyone else attentively hears this conversation

Vicky: Ek baar jakar Sharon se puuch leta hu

Sw: Kyu Vicky

Vicky: Meri gut feeling hai ki meh ne isse kesi party meh ya kahi aur dekha hai nahi infact I m sure ''''.Par yaad nahi aaraha kaha

Nil: Dude tera dimag phir gaya hai, chal

Sw: thik hai guys chalo class chalte hai

Kriya was lost in her thoughts

Swayam moved his hand before her and asked if she was alright.

Kr: Ha meh thik hu bas sooch rahi thi ki woh ladaki kaisa dance karti hogi.

Location: Class

They all walked into the class. The lecturer came and began teaching.

Swayam and Sharon were sitting together.

Kriya could not believe her eyes it felt like she was seeing things more like a mirage in a desert.

Kriya elbowed vishakha who was sitting beside her

Kriya: Wow kya scene hai I mean Swayam aur Sharo ek sath baithe hai''.This is amazing''''''

So finally kuch toh theek ho raha hai''..

Vish: (giggeled) Ya rite kuch theek ''Dude seriously do u realize that you haven't been here for 6 months aur 6 mahine meh bahut kuch badal gaya hai madam

Kr: Huh

Vish: Waise give me the honour to give you the biggest news of the millennium

Kr: Sedhe point par a etna ghuma Kyu rahi hai''''

Vish: Swayam and Sharon are officially a couple now

Kriya couldn't believe her ears. On hearing the news

Kr:(She yelled so loud that the whole class turned to look back at her) WWWhhhaaatt'''''.

Sir: Kya hua kriya

Kr: Who sir kuch nahi who actually''mai'''''''.

Sir: Chupcaap bait jaooo aur agar phir se class disturb karne ki sooch rahi ho toh detention jane ke liye bhi taiyaar ho jaoo

Kr: Sorry sir

Vish: dude yeh news sun kar toh hum sab ki bolti band ho gayi thi par tumhara reaction toh ulta hi tha

After the class during the lunch

Sharon :( turning towards Vicky, Nil, Rinni and Simmi) Guys woh ladaki Alisha kuch jani pehecani lagti hai na

Vicky: Ha dekha guys Sharon ko bhi woh ladaki jani pehechani lagti hai. Mene kaha than a ki hum usse kahi dekh cuke hai

Sh: Par kaha, forget it''

Sh: Kriya ready

Kr: Kiske liye

Sw: dance face off ke liye

Kr: Pata nahi

Vish: No worries man. I mean thodi woh tum logo se accha dance kar sakti hai

Amar: Vishakha ne tik taha. Tum donno toh test ho

(Best ho)

Neha: Neha sure u both only winning

Then all of them went toward the canteen just to find all the boys in the canteen staring at Alisha.

Well just on her first day in college she became the centre of attraction.

Alisha:(murmers) Aisa lagata hai jaise meh koi criminal hu

Simmi: Junior ki thodi ragging toh banti hai

Nil: Jab junior itni sundar ho toh ragging karke bechari ko kyu darana

Vish: Simmi ignore him let's go

Kriya: Guys nahi suno

Simmi, Vishakha, Vicky and Bharat go near her and start their ragging session

Vish: You, kya tumhara naam''

Alisha: Alisha

Simmi: So Alisha, kya sooch kart um ne Sharon aur Kriya ko challenge kiya

Alisha: Dance ke liye challenge kiya hai koi Marne ki dhamki nahi di hai ki tum aakar mujhe introgate kar rahi ho police ki tarah

Vicky: Tameez se baat karo hum seniors hai

Alisha: Seriors hone se kya tum kuch bhi karoge waise mai ne suna hai ki yaha ragging allowed nahi hai aur yaha ka GS sare rules bahut stricktly follow karta hai.(giggles)

The four of them went back into the flash back when Rey had made them wear no ragging t-shirts and stopped ragging. Well and THE GS had made it pretty clear that he wouldn't tolerate it if the college rules being offended.

They backed off and returned to were their friends were sitting.

Just then Sharon got up from her seat and walked up to Alisha.

Sh: I accept your challenge

Al: Really'''..thats awesome'''''''..Lets have a show down

What about Kriya (she looked at Kriya with innocence asthough it this was very important to her)

Everyones eyes were now on Kriya.She could feel those penetrating stares. Kriya was confident but she didn't know why she always felt a kind aura around this girl. More like it reminded her about someone and not only someone but someone special.

Kr: Well okay''''.so whenever you want to begin

Al: Now

The others were pretty amazed at her confidence. Eventhough she had challenged them, she was blunt in her way of speaking. None of the team members ever felt mad neither anyone hated her nor had any kind of negative attitude towards her infact for some unknown reason everyone felt an attachment towards her. The whole place was filled with excitement.

Sh: So what r we waiting for'''''..Lets begin

Music

The light focuse on the trio

(Guys I got three videos see all and let me know which is the best so I can edit it don't get angry I found only Korean videos. Also the dance is not as awesome as our real Kriya's, Sharon's and frictional Alisha's. I related the girls to Kr, Sh and Al as per their dresses) Btw these dances r the reason ur update is so late I practically had to do research work

Video 1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oo3x9JdPcJ4&feature=related

Middle short hair: Kriya

Left brown hair : Alisha

Right black hair: Sharon

Video 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QcD3jFCfE3M&feature=results_video&playnext=1&list=PLBD20D53600557388

Black hair: Kriya

Brown hair: Alisha

Blonde hair: Sharon

Video 3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W6faxQkzwh4&feature=related

Short hair: Kriya

Brown hair: Alisha

Black hair: Sharon

(Request: please don't het offended kk

I really put in a lot of hard work to search for trio videos and this is the best I could find.

Also if u find better ones let me kno I will include ur)

Everyone was pretty shocked and dumbstruck. No eyes that could blink. It was such a sight to see three hot girls dance like'''words were less to describe. Just wow'''.wow'''''''

To think that girl was actually as good as Sharon and Kriya

There were given a standing ovation when they had finally realized that the dance was over.

Kriya and Sharon themselves found it unbelievable.

Kriya(pov):

Wow''''''''''

Yeh kitna accha dance karti hai

To be able to match mine and Sharon's level of dance

Gautam Rai Prakash ki dono betiyo jaise dance karna

Hai kon yeh?????...

Mujhe miss line cutter se dosti karni hai''.

Miss line cutter ''''''''''.Line cutter who toh sirf Rey ke liye hai

Mai isse Miss line cutter kyu bula rahi hu'

Uska naam hai Alisha '''..bewakuf Kriya

Rey bhi toh mujhe baatcutter bulate the

Aur ab Rey ke bare meh sochna band kar''..Ramira

ARRR Kriya concentrate

No matter how much Kriya tried to keep her thoughts away from Rey it would always end up connecting with something which has to do with Rey'''.

Sharon(pov)

Nice no actually amazing

Yeh hai kon aur kaha se aiye hai

Intresting baat toh ye hai ki usne rey ka signature step bhi kiya''''''

Kya yeh ladhaki Rey ko janti hai''..

Kyuki rey ka signature step karna kitna mushkil aur maine toh sikhne ki kitni koshis ki

Par kabhi sikh hi nahi payi''..

Who the hell is she?????????

Tanni(pov):

Yeh kon hai

Kitna accha dance karti hai

Mera kya hoga

Pehele yeh Kriya wapas aagayi yeh kam nahi tha ab ek aur musibat

Eska matlab agar meh kisi tarah kriya ko dance na karne dene ka plan kamiyaab bhi ho gaya toh bhi kuch nahi hone wala kyuki yeh dusree ladhaki bhi mujse accha dance karti

Hey Krishna meri madat kijiye meh team weakling meh apni jagah nahi khona chahati

Aur agar mehne woh kho diya toh Rey ko bhi kho dunggi kyuki dance hi ek isse chiz hai jiski wajah se meh Rey ke aas pass reh sakti hu.

Mujhre kuch aisa karna padega jisse dono dance na kar paye

Then leaves the place

Kriya went towards Alisha

Kr: Awesome'...Aap bahut accha dance karti hai

Al: Pata hai, nahi toh tumhe challenge karke sabke saamne thodi aapna mazak banaungi

Sharon so what do you think about my dance?

Sharon was still lost in her own thoughts

Sharon(pov)

Alisha'''.

A''''L''''I''''''.S'''''''H'''''''.A

Could she be'.her

Nah that's not possible.

Sharon's thought prosses was broken and everyones enthusiasm shattered when they herd the hooting and dirty comments of the KR college students.

The gundas were back to cause commotion. They were standing behind Shivam who was looking at Alisha with his crooked smile and crooked intentions.

(Guys I won't take the trouble of giving these unworthy people names so just gonna use colour of their shirts to refer to them k)

Green: Wow nayi item

Red: Hot hai

Yellow: Junior lagti hai

Alisha was now loosing it, she wanted to stangle them to death. Her eyes were red with furry.

Infact everyone furious was especially Swayam.

Sw: Tum logo ko yaha kisne aane diya

Green: Kuch jal raha hai

Simmi: Excuse me

Yellow: You are excused

Shivam: Hi Sharon

Kriya by now was furious.

Kriya(pov)

Koi itna gira hua kaise ho sakta hai

Shameless gadha kahi ka

Sharon ignores and signals her friends to sit down and not create any commotion.

Even Alisha joins her friend Needhi and Ayush were also feeling disgusted with those people

Shivam: Sharon it is bad manners to ignore a friend By the way you look hot

That's it Swayam lost it. He was furious enough to rip them apart into pieces. He got up from his seat and went to Shivam and held his collar.

Kriya was surprised to see her best friend who had been so quite and calm actually react so aggressively.

Sharon to instantly got up from her seat and went and pulled swayam back trying to calm him down.

Sh: Stop it Swayam these guys they are not worth it

Saying so she pulled him back towards the seat, right beside her. Put her hand on his which was on the table, seeing him glare at them.

Shivam shamelessly walked towards Alisha's table

Shi: Waise tum bhi kam nahi thi''.

Alisha shot a glare at him and resumed drinking her juice, ignoring him.

He pulled down the chair and sat down beside her. Now she was practically furious but then controlling her anger she signaled her friends that they should leave. She got up to leave.

Shivam caught her hand. She quickly pulled her hand back.

Al: How dare you?

Green: Hai kya ada hai. Waise dare toh hum kar chuke

Red: Yeh tumhara senior hai hotti, respect karna sikho

Al: respect meri juti, pehele respect karne layak toh ban. Waise bhi respect aise bhik meh nahi magte

Gadha, bas***d kahika

Yellow: EE muh band kar pata hai tu kisse baat karrahi hai

Apna luck samaj ki Shivam ne tujse baat ki

Sarri ladhakiya iske aage peeche ghumti hai

Itne popular senior aake tuhse khud mil raha hai

Al: Ya right apne aap ko India ke president ka beta samajta hai

Ladhakiya aur iske aage peeche ghumti hai

Bechari I m sure unhe cataract (eye problem) ki problem hogi nahi toh for sure andhi hongi

Nahi toh iss tenduye jaise chehere wale insaan ke piche toh khud tendua bhi na bhage

Characterless f*cker

Get lost of here

Everyone looked at Alisha in disbelieve. How could someone so who looked so innocent and cute speak like that?

Green: Baat toh aise kar rahii hai jaise yeh college tere baap ka hai

Al: Ha Hai, toh kya karega bhe

Jaoo yaha se nahi toh...

Red: Nahi toh kya ha

Dhumki de rahi hai

Alisha: Dhumki nahi de rahi hu

samjha rahi hu

Chale jaoo nahi toh

chalne ke layak nahi choduggi

They were taken a back they remembered Rey who said the same dialogue

Shivam was angered and grabbed her hand tightly and started twisting it inorder to hurt her

That's it now Alisha had lost it. She was Furious, ready to kill. She had changed to her witch mode.

Before swayam could come and help her she picked up Ayush's hot coffee and and spilled it on his face.

This threw everyone in shock. Her aggressiveness was like that off boys. Now they were witnessing a total different side of her. Scaryyy is the perfect word to describe her now.

Then immediately she also threw water on his face.

She was furious but she was not an insensitive person who would actually cause burns on someones face.

Alisha: Be thankfull, jaldi se panni bhi fek diya nahi toh tumhara tendua jaise cehera aur ghatiya lagta

Actually agar aisa hota toh plastic surgery karne meh aasani hoti naaa

Giving an evil smile

Everyone was in utter disbelieve. The KR college guy were actually scared and left taking shivam along with them.

Vicky: Bahut hot hai na tujhe kya lagta hai nil

Nil: Kuch jyada hi hot hai

Simmi chuckles on nil's sentence

Bharat: Isse toh duurich rehene meh bhalayi hai

Kriya(pov)

Mujhe lagta tha ki meh hi puri duniya meh ajeeb ladhaki hu

Jo apne pehele hi college ke din par pagga le liya

Par yeh toh meri bhi nani nikli

Alisha looked at everyone staring at her

Alisha: What the hell wrong did I do? That shameless creature deserved it. So why the hell is everyone looking at me as if I am the criminal here

Saying so she was just about to leave just then Sharon called her from behind

Sharon: Alisha

Alisha: Ya what di

DII everyone scremed together

Alisha: Opps sorry that because u r my senior rite and'''

Alisha was fishing for excuses just then Sharon cut her off

Sharon: ALISHA

ALISHA SINGHANIA'''''''''''


So guys hope u like the chapter

Sorry for the delay

( 50 likes next update page 65)

Ignore grammatical mistakes please

Preview: Chapter 6: Unpredictable

Guys I have 4 questions for you please answer


1. Would you want me continue the story as romantic comedy or as a story which has adventure, romance and comedy?

2. Is it okay if i upgrade Rey's character i mean more amazing and outstanding?

3. Would you like a severe twist in Sharon's character?

4. Also do suggest me how would you like Kriyaansh to meet
a) In a dance sequel
b) On an adventure
c) normally seeing each other in college
d) unpredictable( if this is your choice send me a pm telling ur suggestion)
Edited by ShonaSparkzz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okiii
Guys I have 4 questions for you please answer

1. Would you want me continue the story as romantic comedy or as a story which has adventure, romance and comedy?

2. Is it okay if i upgrade Rey's character i mean more amazing and outstanding?

3. Would you like a severe twist in Sharon's character?

4. Also do suggest me how would you like Kriyaansh to meet
a) In a dance sequel
b) On an adventure
c) normally seeing each other in college
d) unpredictable( if this is your choice send me a pm telling ur suggestion)

Also let me know if u like my new character Alisha
Edited by ShonaSparkzz - 13 years ago
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loved the update... kya alisha rey ka sister hai... waiting 4 next part
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Originally posted by: ShonaSparkzz

Okiii

Guys I have 4 questions for you please answer

1. Would you want me continue the story as romantic comedy or as a story which has adventure, romance and comedy?

2. Is it okay if i upgrade Rey's character i mean more amazing and outstanding?

3. Would you like a severe twist in Sharon's character?

4. Also do suggest me how would you like Kriyaansh to meet
a) In a dance sequel
b) On an adventure
c) normally seeing each other in college
d) unpredictable( if this is your choice send me a pm telling ur suggestion)

Also let me know if u like my new character Alisha


1.adventure romance and comedy...
2.yes
3.puraney sharon nahin chahiye...
4.unpredictable...

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Awsm update shona!

Liked alisha's character a lot

umm i cant watch the vedio. mobile se internet connected hai sorry for that!

Kriya shocked no doubt!

Liked what alisha did with tha bl**dy shivam!

Is Alisha rey's sister? 😕

Anyways awsm update and thanx for pm!

1. Would you want me continue the story as romantic comedy or as a story which has adventure, romance and comedy?

umm i prefer second option

2. Is it okay if i upgrade Rey's character i mean more amazing and outstanding?

ur choice

3. Would you like a severe twist in Sharon's character?

ur choice again

4. Also do suggest me how would you like Kriyaansh to meet

i like option a
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Amazing updt shona...loved alisha's character alott😊
mindblowing...all the dances r vry gud😃
yeh alisha ne toh shivam ki band bajadi...awesomme👏
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1-2nd option
2-yess
3-yess
4-adventure😉
Edited by Kriyansh_jaanu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing updt..


Kriyaansh meet in adventure.

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awesum update shona
luvd it
lykd alisha's character as in shivam's part ( i wish i culd do dat myself)
kriyansh kb milenge??????
waitin fr da nxt update soon


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