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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

They kiss in ur version!! Awww m so happy..cvs cdnt show nethn..bt u filled up d space 😊 n their seperation in ur os is more heartbreaking as both cud c into each other's eyes while seperatinh😔

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

They kiss in ur version!! Awww m so happy..cvs cdnt show nethn..bt u filled up d space 😊 n their seperation in ur os is more heartbreaking as both cud c into each other's eyes while seperating😔 well written!

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priya

@priasweet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

so amazing and beautiful os

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cupcakez

@cupcakez

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

NNNOOO!!1

don't do this to them they deserve a happy ending 😭 even though it was amazing and writing itself was very nice. please please please please pppllzzz make a part 2 for a happy ending.

but you should know I STILL LOVED IT. <3

again please happy ending im a sucker like that can't be all sad just got to have a happy ending. Something like she swims back and finds him unconscious and saves him do PM me about what you think about the idea of continuing this.