All My Life (kriyaansh ff)updated pt 12 - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww i m crying dis tym
dis is tooo emotional
i dnt knw y bt tears strt rolled out
n dat performance was my fav jiye kyu
n love ur poem
pls update nxt asap
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ShonaSparkzz

AWWWeeesome update
That dance seriously brought tears to my eyes
I miss them so much

Thanku for such a beautiful update

thnku soo much that dance is my fav

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: poojadworld

wow its beautiful update,,,,,,,i m really speechless,,,,,kriyansh dance was amazing luv it,,,,,,awww i really miss kriyansh moment😭😭😭,,,,,thnkxx 4 d awsummm update🤗

thanks for liking it...me tooo missing kriyaansh ...😭
Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome update...

beautifully written...can feel the pain of kriyansh😭
and finally taani is trying to understand kriyansh deep and true love
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon

thanku ... next update will be tommorrow...kriyaaansh misss them like helll...and its really painfull...
Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jiya_ArSha4Ever

Overwhelming Update I must say.

After reading this one I am missing my KriYansh more now. Why that has to be over . Damn!!!!

Coming back to the update, it was heart touching , their performance in Jiyein Kyun was awesome yaar. Fitted the context totally.Actually zats one of my favourites. Their last hug said it all. Whatever D3 current track is but for KR fans kria will always be Rey's only true love just like ur poem said.


thanks for liking it ... hey its my fav tooo...yup kriyaaansh were 1 for us ,are 1 and will b 1...forever ...no matter kitni tani naani kyun aajayen...
Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

awww i m crying dis tym
dis is tooo emotional
i dnt knw y bt tears strt rolled out
n dat performance was my fav jiye kyu
n love ur poem
pls update nxt asap

thanks... next updaye will be tommorrow...me to crying while listening to these songs...it really reletes me to Kriyaansh...and that jiyein ix my fav tooo...
Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amzinggg!loved it once again!update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum update ! Realy LOVED IT
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Posted: 13 years ago
kriyansh dance-seared my insides...


my heart was like a king-kong...


loved the update...


splendid...
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭First of alll ...thank u...for all ur support...
here we go...
Kriya hurriedly ran outside the caught an auto ...she was crying all the time...
There Rey in the FE started crying ...he puts his hands on his head ...
ON THE STAGE ANNOUNCEMENT...
Nil: so guys ab kuch yaadon ko taaza karte h...
Simmi:haan old beatifull memories...ja hum kabhi nhe bhoolte...
Nil: yeah wo yaadein jo kabhi hum tasweer main ked karte h to kabhi apne dil m...
Simmi:so un sb yaadon ko yad dilane arahe h.ST LOUIS k sab s cute couple...
NIL:yup...the cuttest of all...so wel cum...
both:Vicky and Neha...
so this is Viha performance guys plz play this song and read below the kriyaansh part as both r going together ..on stage Viha r performing and on other hand Kriyaansh ...must hear the song...plz plz ...
Kriya in auto ...crying, rubbing her hand to get off the touch of Reyannsh...she tries her best to remove those memories but when heart is not in ur control nothing goes ur way... she has her heart to Rey back ago...how to remove his memories...
he ask the auto driver to stop by a lonely sea side...she reached there got off the auto...
and went slowly towards the sea...and just hit her self on ground ...her hand on her head ...regreting all her memories...then she sat like this...
There Rey in FE ...
cud not able to control himself and just sit where he was standing hiding his head into his legs... crying ...hardly...😭
An the song
Kitni baatein yaad aati hai
Tasveerein si ban jaati hain
Main kaise inhein bhooloon
Dil ko kya samjhaaun

Rey remebering all kriyaansh moment...all moment were just moving in his head...
dil se re...
their fights...
their dance...
dost se kuch zyaada
...crying like helll...she was not saying anything and thsi was killling him...and now its going untolerable...
Their...Kria...near sea...
remembering their moments...and the best way for her to speak her feelings out is to dance...She started dancing pationately...
Kitni baatein kehne ki hai
Honton par jo sehmi si hai
Ik roz inhein sun lo
Kyun aise gum-sum ho

on the sand...remebering rose part where she met chabilal for the 1st time...
she smiled in her dance then again thought ...their differences...the slap...the rose party...
Tumne hamko dekha jo aise
Toh ik umeed hai jaagi
Phir tumse pyaar paane ki
Ab kya kahen
the butterfly kiss...
All memories just flowing throgh her mind...
There Rey in FE hit his hand on the wall(one who was injured)
Tumne hamko dekha jo aise
Toh ik umeed hai jaagi
Phir tumse pyaar paane ki
Ab kya kahen
...and said ahh...but his heart was paining much more than any thing...
AT SEA...
Kria just sat crying and hit her hand on the sand...and luks at the sand where the name of Reyaansh was wriiten through her foot when she was dancing...she luks at it and rub the sand to remove his name...but she cant she just lied over that name...
Kriya lying...on sand...
Rey sitting alone throughing his pain out...
VIHA PERFORMANCE ENDS>...
Nil:was'nt it beautifulll...
Simmi:it was peace ful...hum apni life larne jhagra karne b bita dete h...sochte nhe k y waqt dobara aye ga ya ...nhe...
Nil: true ...aur aj ka yeh waqt b khatam hua ...i hope app sab ko hamara show buht pasand aya hoga...
Simmi:for sure...will meet u soon guys at sum other place ...
Nil:tab tak k ...
both:live ur life...cux dont may its ur last chance...
FIRE ESCAPE>...
Rey rmoved his tears...got up...
Rey: ab aur nheee...m apni wajah s dusron ka dil nhe dukha sakta...
OUTSIDE IN COLLEGE>...
Whole gang were sitting at the stairs in atrium...
talking about the event...
Nil:hey guys Rey kahan h??????
Tani ,Sharon and swayam were also there...
Neha: ya neha not knowing wher Kria is??????
In that time rey entered ...(he was bit angry not wanting to talk to any 1)
Vicky:hey rey kahan tha tu.?????
Rey not answering him...
Rey:Tani mjhe tum se kuch baat krni h...
every 1 luking at him like wats going on man...
Tani:ha ...haaan ...bolo na Rey...
Rey: Tani yahan nhe ...(luked here n there and saw rehearsal hall) rehearsal hall m chalte h...
every 1 got tensed ...
Swayam:baat kya h Rey ...
Rey not answering...
Rey:chalen Tani...
Tani: ha...haaan chalo...
both proceeded towards the hall...
Tani closed the door...
Rey sat just giving his back rest on the mirror...Tani came and sat besides him...
Rey's hand on his face completely covering his face...
Tani:Rey kya hua ...app aise...
Rey silent...
Tani: mjhe pata h hum dono dance nhe karpaye is liye tum pareshan ho...
Rey romved his hands slowly...Tani cupped his face...and made him luk towards her ...
Rey's eyes r closed...both facing eachother ...Rey opened his eyes and a tear escaped from his eye...he made his face luk up to her...and said...
Rey: i m sorry...😭
Tani's hands slipped off hid face and had tears in her eyes ...Rey holds her hands and said...
Rey: i m sorry Tani... but m chaah k b use nhe bhul paya ...i cant ...i cant live without her...m use nhe bhul paya ...i m sorry...and hugged her...
She didn't replied to his hug...Rey pulled him back...
Tani: Rey mjhe kuch der akele rehna h...
Rey: but...
Tani: plz Rey...
Rey stud and moved out ...All gang were waiting for them but he just rushed towards the college door to get himself out of college...
Dazling and Weaklings were very tensed ...like wats happening...
Swayam and Sharon went inside...
Swayam went in and saw Tani sitting...
Swayam: Tani ...(she jsut hugged him)
Tani still in hug saying...
Tani: bhai he dont luves me...bhai wo mjhse pyaar nheee karta ...
Whole gang were standing on the door of hall...listening this...
Just then Vicky had a call...
he went a side...
Vicky:hello...
Guy:hey Vicky m Anuj...
Vicky: hey Anuj ...
Anuj: tumne bataya nhee k Rey aj kal Race m b part leta h...he's a true rockstar...dacing ,body building,and ab to racing b...
Vicky:wat?????????
Anuj:haaan ..wexe to m b races m part leta hun but yeh race ...itx tooo dangerous...pichli baar aik larke ki jaan chali gai thi while racing actually wo rasta itna tough h k kisi b racer ko use complete karna buht mushkil h...and new comers k liye to buht h mushkil...ibut Rey is Rey...wo to na danger dekhta h na h...dar...he is a superstar...chal m ab rakhta hun...
Vicky hurriedly rushed towards the gang saying...
Vicky:guys Rey ,,,,,,
Sharon puts her hand on Vicky's shoulder...
Sharon:kya hua Rey ko...
Swayam:jaldi kaho Vicky...
Vicky told them all the thing that Anuj told him...
Sharon :guys we have to stop him...Swayam do sumthing...
Swayam :haan chalo...he tried to stand but saw Tani in his arms...he luked at Tani...
Tani:bhai aap jao...
Swayam:paka...
Tani:haan bhai jaldi jao...
Swayam hugged him and all of them rushed towards the place except Tani where the race is gonna take place...
All of them reached the place...Started searching for him...and finally saw him preparing for his race...All went to them
Rey saw them and he knew y they have came here...
Rey:guys tum sab yahan...
Sharon:Rey tum yeh...
Rey cuts in middle...
Rey:no Sharon ajj nhe ...plz...
Swayam:but rey...
he again cuts...
Rey: tum sab ko meri kasam aaj mjhe koi nhe roke ga...
Sharon: tum kya soch rahe ho k tum koi aisi faltu kasam do g aur hum maan jaen g ...tum kahin nhe jao g...no tum koi race nhe karahe ...(started crying)
Rey hugs her...
Rey:mjhe kuch nhe hoga...
Sharon:but...
Rey: shhh...
left her and went towards his racing bike...all were luking at them...he turnt back and gave them a sweet smile...it was more like a gud bye smile...
Sharon:Swayam kuch karo use roko plx...(crying and hugged Swayam)
Vishaka: ajj aisa lag raha h k wo hum se buht dooor ja raha h...
just then Neha mobile rang...
Neha picked it up...
Neha:hello...
Tani: hello hello Neha ...Rey mila(panicking)..wo mana wo race nhe karaha ...bolo na ...
Neha: nhee Tani Rey mila magar wo nhee maaan raha wo race k liye ja raha h...
Tani: use roko...
Neha: hello ...hello tani ...
Tani luked at her phone and saw her mobile battery down...
Tani: oh no...m m kya karun mjhe rey ko rokna hoga...mjhe pata h k Rey ko kon rak sakta h...but saw her mobile and threw it away...
Just then sum 1 came and gave mobile to her...yeah it was Shivam...
Shivam: yeh lo Tani jaldi karo ...is s pehle k buht der hojaye...
She luked at him ...and then at his phone and took it...
Tani called a no...yeah she was calling Kria...
Kriya was still at the sea side and it was night now...
Kriya luked at her phone and picked it up...
Kriya: hello...
Tani:hel..hello ...Kria ..m Tani ...
Kriya:haan Tani bolo..tum itni ghabrahee hui kyun ho...
Tani:plz Kria Rey ko bachalo plz...(and told her whole story)
Kria silent...cudn't take it wat she heard...
Tani:Kria kria tum sun rahe ho...
Kria just left all the things and started running like made ...
Tani:hello...
Shivam:kya hua...ux n suna...
Tani:pata nhe...pata nhe kya hoga...
Shivam put his hand on her shoulder consoling her...
Shivam:mjhe lagta h humain b chalna cheiye...
Tani: haan haan...chalo...
both moved towards racing track...
Kria running towrads her destination and reached there ...as she reached she heard a fire shot as the start of race...
Kriya in mind: maa m appko nhe bacha payi par Rey m aapko kuch nhe hone doongi...
Shita also reached there and saw Kria...Kria started running from the back of the jungle to reach him ...shita saw this and saw the gang too ...and went to them...and told theem about Kria is here...and they also moved through the jungle to them...
Kria tried to reach to him ...she ran hard from back side of jungle and then came to the road but her effort were in vain cux they have moved ahead...she again took another root...and tried to reach to them...Finally she rached the road and saw the two bikes cuming to her but she didn't move...1 of the bike just paased her and another 1 was cumin closer to her...
she put her hand on her face ...after sum time she opened her eyes and saw she was ok...and two masculine arms were holding her...yeah it was rey...In the time the whole gang also came there...
Rey holding Kria tightly with anger...
ReyLtum yeh yeh kya karahi thi haan ...
Kria jerked his hands and slap him hard...he again straightened him self...Kria hittin his chest ...pushing him backward...saying...
Kria: tum apne aap ko samjhte kya ho super man ...ho haaann...
Rey: Kria...(trying to hold her arms )
but Kria pushed him ...
Kria: dont touch me ...dont touch me...tum sab kya samjhte ho ...maaa maa b mjhe chor k chali gai ...aur ab tum...
Rey cuming closer to her trying to hold her but again she jerked ...his hands...
Kria: tum mjhe chor k nheee ja sakte ...samjhe Reyaansh Singhania...tum nhee ja sakteee..
Rey: Kria (again t rying to hold her but she tried to jerk but this time he holds even more tighter and said)
Rey:kyun???????kyunnn????????kyun he shouted...
Kria:kyun k I LOVE U ...I LOVE U ...hugged him ...he hugged her tooo both started crying ...
Rey: i love u tooo...
whole gang jumped to them huggung them shouted yeahhh but Tani was standing their luking at them ...i that time sum 1 came and holds her hand ...
she luks up...and saw it was Shivam...
Shivam: i m with u ...
Tani luks up and LLHH SETION...

m so happy today kriyaaansh r united 1ce again ...
hope u all like it...
for pm add Angel56...
stars up in the sky
A million one shines brighter I cant deny
A love so precious a love so true
a love that comes from me to you
The angels sing when you are near
within your arms I have nothing to fear
You always know just what to say
just talking to you makes my day
I love you honey with all of my heart
together forever and never to part..
THANK U>...
Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago

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