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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
it was just awesome
loved it
waiting for nxt update eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: yogini64

Itna chotu sa update 😭

aww . . . Rey remembering his beloved . . . . . But the flashback seems blurred . . . . 🤔

did they met in UK?? . . . . 😳


yes!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Think soo baada wala update..njoy

Episode 4

*flashback*

Kria was called "K" in her group!

Her crew had 8 ppl kria, sam, jake, liii, zoe, elliee, tom & harry

Harry: k we are sorry but u have to leave'this grup

K: y????? u can't do this!

Jake: we can!! We got a better popper then u!

K: no jake'sam plz tell u all are kidding!

Sam: no K but u need to leave m sorry'kria is hurt but she had no other option'she walked away'

Its was a brezze day'& kria did not had a jacket she was frezzing'.she went into a caf'where she used to work'the manger greeted her'she waited there for some time and then left..she just kept on walking'in the uk streets..she was in her own world'she was now in an dark..& not crowded place! But it did not affect her'there were few street ppl there waiting for some one to come'they went close to kria'. kria

Now was scared'.she started to run'but the street ended into 'a wall..so she was stuck there with those men'she waited..the men came closer..& closer'as they came closer..she hit hard to a men and ran away'

All this was seen by a guy'hot,handsome,biceps, reyansh singhaniya'he was a son of rich merchant'he tried to follow kria as he was impressed by her'but she vanished all of sudden'actually she was hiding into a shop as she saw rey was following her'rey left'& kria also reached home safely'but the whole nite rey was thinking about kria'kria was only thinking about how her crew ditched her'

Next morning kria was ready but she was thinking'

Main kyu ready ho rahi hun'aaj thodi rehasal pe jana hai'but then to she left'she was walking on street here and there as if she had no where to go'all this happened for several days'while this days rey was searching for the gal (KRIA)but he couldn't find'

One day kria was walking on street'she wanted to dance'but she had no place to'so she taught'

"agar street dance street pe nahi hoga toh aur kidhar hoga.."

She removes a walkman'and pressed the play button'the song started DON'T STOP THE PARTY & she danced'but she didn't new..ppl 'dancers were watching her dance'she was dancing in front of MSA it was a coll for arts & mangment'(I don't need to mention rey was a dancer there) rey & his frenz Sharon, swayum, neha, Vicky were ballet students there'they had their break so they'cold listen to the music & rey was happy to see kria..the gal he was impressed with'

*PRESRNT*

Thinking about his past rey had fallen asleep'

Next day moring..rey , swayum & Sharon went to airport'to meet the unknown'the flight had arrived in which Mr.unknown was cuming with his miss'

Sw:guyz'.vicky..he waves his hand'vicky waves back'

Sh: neha bhi haan'.

All five of them are happy to see each other'(Vicky neha married'they have a son..he'll came into the picture later..)

All of them goes to swaron house..jill was there with ria..

They are happy to viha

N: yeh jill hai..woh'ekdam tumhari tara lagta hai..glances towards rey'rey simles back'neha open her arms'jill runs into them'(though jill was more attached to sharon'he liked neha to')while via (VICKY & RIA = via)

Hugged each other'

Suggestion, complains, feedback, annde & tamatar are welcomed!

Srry kal bina baatye chali gayi thi..net mein prob tha'srry lovecookiiee,kinjal,shruti&vaishali'this epi is for u all..



i became a senior member...

Edited by sweety-reylover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
awesome flashback of kria...kria's group did not do good with her...rey impressed by kria...nyc 1...loved neha+jill and via's bonding...waiting for more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awsome update and awesome flashback...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Kria's story in Rey's flashback was very interesting...it will b exciting to know how Kria becums part of the gang ... ViHa's return was a pleasant surprise too- waiting for next part - good going Shivu - a refreshing script 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Amazing Update.
Loved it a lot.
It was cute update.
thanks for pm.
Update soon.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Awesome update shivani
arrgghh that crew 😡 ...huh they dont deserve kriya
loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Awesome update Shivani... and Congo for Senior Member... U will be Goldie soon. 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
wow kria in flashbacj seems like andy of step up 2 while ray is chace nice concept
loved it loved it update soon

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