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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Nice concept...
Thanx 4 d pm konpal...
Pm me nxt time u update


hey its not written by me its by mahima!

She is having problem in sending pms so i did that thats it pls dont misunderstand
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Osm ...
do update soon ..!!
ty fo pm ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u all!!! I really never expected this!!!

Well as said before the updates may not b regular b'coz of my hectic schedule but will surely try to update in b/w and thanx k for the title it perfectly suits the storly line 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww thank u sweets for mentioning my name! and update soon dekh ab main bhi wednesday tak lar dungi so mejhe tera bhi wednesday tak hi chahiye 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey...
Sry r late reply...
Awesum start...
Please Kuch mat karna kriya ko...
Please...
N update ASAP...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept...waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

Aww thank u sweets for mentioning my name! and update soon dekh ab main bhi wednesday tak lar dungi so mejhe tera bhi wednesday tak hi chahiye 😆



are baba theek hai! wed tak update pakka!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Update?? Really? Aww sweets lubh u soo much for this! see i updated befor wed now i want it till wed only 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2



*St. Louis*


The lousians were sitting in the canteen and chit-chatting. suddenly swayam's phone rang and he checked the id! He picked up the call!

Sw - haan bhai (not real cousin)

Sw - but bhai hua kya hai?

Sw - ok calm down! im coming!


Swayam hung up the call!

R - kya hua?
Sw - kuch nahi
R - are bata bhi!
Sw - pata nahi guys! I'll be back after sometime! bye!

Swayam rushed to the hospital

(Swayam's cousin i.e. Aditya is a doctor and he called him there)


*Hospital*


Sw - bhai what happened? why u called me here?
Ad - come with me!


Swayam just followed her brother's instruction but what aditya showed him shaked the earth below swayam's foot! He was hell surprised! Her best friend, Kriya Ghai, a fighter was then fighting to survive!

Sw - bhai how did this happened?
Ad - I dont know swayam! Some people took her and 1 more lady with her over here! they both were injured very seriously! The lady with her is dead and she...
Sw - she?
Ad - she lost her memory swayam
Sw - What!!!!!!! Bhai how can this... oh gosh kriya!
Ad - swayam pls sambhalo! I checked her contact no.'s so i called u over here! I dont know who is she and any further info about her! do u know anyone related to her?
Sw - umm i only knew her mom! noone else related to her!
Ad - come!


Aditya took him to another ward where smriti was lying! DEAD!

Sw - bhai this lady is her mom!
Ad - what!
Sw - haan bhai! but is she that lady?
Ad - ya!
Sw - oh gosh whats all happening in her life!


*1 year later*

A girl screamed - AASHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another girl came running to a room just to find her sister looking damn angry!

Aa - haan kritz


Ya she is kriya but now she is kriya shekhawat! Hehe dont think that is she is married or anything else! She lost her memory and aaditya took her with him and she is living with them only from past 1 year!

Kr - What is this aashi! Tumne mere room ka ye kya haal bana rakha hai! dekho zara!

Her room was totally messed up! It was like just a few mins ago a hurricane came inside the room!

Aa - soory kritz!
Kr - not fair aashi! who will clean it up now! u know na swayam and some of his friends are coming today!
Aa - alright! im helping u! lets start

After sometime the dorebell rang and aditya left to open the door. The lousians entered the house! All of them were damn shocked to see the house! It indeed was a big one!


The house - http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_-YHz1-BFjxU/TEeECiUxcwI/AAARk/A2cWHntSVZY/s320/Port+Royal+Homes+For+Sale-Gordon+Drive+Estates-Port+Royal+Naples.jpg


Sw - bhai! aap yahan! I thought Aashi yahan akele rehti hai!
Ad - hmm lekin use wahan thodi problems ho rahi thi toh yahin par le aaya main use!
Sw - oh ok! Guys inse milo ye mera cousin hai Aditya a doctor.
Lousians - hi!

Aashi from kriya's room - Bhai kaun hai?
Ad - swayam aur uske dost!
Aa - what! really?

And she ran downstairs and hugged swyam very tightly!

Aa - I missed u a lot bhai!
Sw - calm down aashi! main mara nahi hun!
Kr - Aashi ki bacchi! phir beech mein chodke chali gayi!

Kriya said coming down from her room and all the lousians were like 😲

Aa - ab kya karun kritz! tujhse toh roz milti hun par bhai se nahi mil paati na! isiliye!
Kr - hey sam!
Sw - hey! so problem in dehradun haan?
Kr - ya ajeeb ajeeb se flashes aate the and headache too!

Swayam looked at aditya and he just gave him an assuring look.

R - k..kriya?
Kr - umm sam introduce nahi karaoge kya?
Sw - umm kriya wo ye...
Kr - kriya 😲 oye mister im kritz
Sw - ok kritz! happy?
Kr - very happy!
Sw - umm kritz they are my friends

And he introduced her to everyone of them! Finally after sometime rey and sharon took swayam to a side.

R - swayam ye sab kya hai? kriya yahan and overall why is she behaving like this?
Sh - ya rite swayam. she's behaving like she dont knew anyone of us!
Sw - she indeed dont!
Sh and R - What!!!!
Sw - umm guys firstly calm down! actually she lost her memory.
R - what? how?

Swayam narrated the whole incident to both of them.

Sw - bhai pehle use dehradun leke gaye the lekin uski tabeyat baar -2 kharab hone ki wajah se use yahan le aaye.

IN THE OTHER HAND

Kr to Aa - yaar ye log itna weird kyon behave kar rahe hain?
Aa to Kr - pata nahi kritz

Finally Sw,R and Sh came back and all have a good time but Kriya was feeling a bit uneasy so she excused herself and went to her room.



She rested her hand on her head.

Kr - oh god not again! this pain aah!!!!


*Phew* finished wriiting the part 😆 I know its not that big but what to do! I cant help it 😆. So K it was for u luv u soo much sissy and I wish that now u can start a new FF/SS as one of ur SS which was changed into OS is finished today!

So guys pls hit the like button and comment 😊
Edited by Mahimamanral - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey sweets dekh main phir se sabse pehle! wo bhi bina pm ke 😉

Kriya and Smriti met with an accident 😲

Smriti is dead! feeling bad for her 😭 and kriya lost her memo!!!! why u always gve such bad news 😭

So Kriya is now shekhawat! Fisrtly I thought she is Kriya Shekhawat b'coz of *ahem ahem* i hope u understood 😆 but after reading further all the things were cleared!

Lousians shocked to see Kriya 😲 no doubt they saw her after 1 year i think 😕

Hey is Aashi aur Aditya ki pic chahiye mujhe samjhi

And ya u r rite! Its not a big update i needed a big one sweets

Chal no prob! well naya FF/SS dekhti hun!

Amazing update
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago

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