OS: The Vow - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Brilliant! Haha, Hari prakash is so protective bless him.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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🤣 🤣 🤣
Awesome i thought it was arhi but when u wrote he put her in her room it got me thinking why in her room and not their room but ignored it and read to end up like dis 🤣 my hubby thought i went mad and when i told him the story he laughed too kekkekekekk

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I knew this had some twist the moment I realized that you aren't using any character name.

BUT OMG LAKSHMI??????????? 🤣 🤣 🤣 Too good!! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Lifu18
🤣 🤣 🤣
<font color="#FF0000" size="4">Awesome i thought it was arhi but when u wrote he put her in her room it got me thinking why in her room and not their room but ignored it and read to end up like dis 🤣 my hubby thought i went mad and when i told him the story he laughed too kekkekekekk</font>

Thank you. Woah Does your husband watch the show?

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: arshiarnav14
What the...????????
😲

i am shocked!!!!🤣

Yeah that was the plan 😊

Originally posted by: pieryrose
lol!it was abt laxmi... i thgth it was khushi and arnav vowing each other... continue..

Its a One Shot and it will remain so 😊

Originally posted by: Mxk3444
Hahah I'm dying rite now lol

Dont die pls 😃

Originally posted by: cherry...
haaha amazing os

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: uamaz
What the ... poor laxmi ...

Yeah I know. She hardly gets the limelight that she deserves 😃

Originally posted by: TJ16ROX

best goat os ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: princessunara
hehe i thought it was a typo about sleeping on the floor!!:p🤣
hahahahaha awesome!!! i was like WT! hahaha🤣

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: kammy63
oh my 🤣 i was thinking it was arnav and khushi...
too coool!

Thank you [:}]

Originally posted by: shaaranya
hahaha hahaha hahahaha
Good one

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: samko
the last line was 🤣

loved it v much

do continue soon

Thank you. it will stay as an OS 😊

Originally posted by: dreaminvincible
🤣🤣

thank you 😊

QUOTE=sowmyadharini]super..

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: morning_star
is this ur first attempt...unbelievable...😲
it is AWESOME...the last part had me...🤣

🤗
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Yes it is my first attempt

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Aartzz--
hahha laxmi?! i love the idea 😊

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Inked
Very cute.
Love that you did it in first person or first 'goat'--it adds to the playfulness.

Maya

Thank you so much for reading 😊

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
that was awesome... a totally unexpected turn of events... you really had all of us going for a while... kudos to you!

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: imran78
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

😊

Originally posted by: NaLeyton23
How dare Shyam do such a thing to Laxmi??
Stupid Creep!😡

Amazing OS!!!!😊

I totally didn't expect it to be about HP and Laxmi!

He can go to any lengths

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Orange101
My reactions while I was reading this:
😊😔😭 and then 😲😆🤣

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Xxcoolchick1xX
Haha

I thought this was between Arnav and Khushi :o

But then when Shyam begged him not to tell anyone, i was liked he wudnt do that to Arnav 😆

Great first attempt at writing x