OS : Damn That Laptop! Part 2 UPDATED! - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you for the pm... the funny beginning of the update was nicely done... wow! what a line: ..."Something is definitely turned on..." always loved arnav's one-liners... can imagine him drawling this in his husky voice... her reaction was just awesome; quick work, khushi! she sure is someone who believes that actions speak louder than words: She hurled herself into his arms, sunk all ten fingers into the midnight depth of his hair and urged his mouth down on hers. ☺️ 😃 really revealss how much she loves and missed her arnav [hope to see such scenes in the show... one can dream can't one?]
loved the slightly calm interlude in the middle of their passionate greeting, when they just sit on the recliner with their hands clasped... that was simply sweet
trust arnav to have a one-track mind, and khushi to have the last word:"Arnavji...I mean, recharge the laptop..." 🤣 I believe the laptop is the last thing on her arnavji's mind! loved the humor that permeates this os
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Posted: 13 years ago
OHH GIRL.. THIS WAS THE BEST... SOOO ADORABLE... THE WAY HE ADMIRED HER... N CUDDLED HER N PAMPERED HER.. SO SOO SOOO CUTE... U KNO U WRITE THE BESTEST OS, SS N FFS.. ;) THE EMOTIONS U PORTRAY N THE LINES R SOO EXCELLENT... LOVE IT.. ALWAYS HAV A SMILE WHHEN I READ ARNAV'S LINES DESCRIBING KHUSHI N HIS LOVE FOR HER.. N NOW AT THE END WHEN SHE SPOKE ABT RECHARGING THE LAPTOP N HIS REACTN.. AWWNESS... MUAHH MUAHH MUAHHHS SARAH... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was an amazing piece of writing there!! Loved it when Khushi said "Shall we re-charge?" and Arnav did not even realize it was the laptop she was referring to...talk about gutter mind😳 😆.
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was really god! what a lovely way to ending the OS..or is it the end? haha i would love for more!
it was so nice arnav surprising her, what more could she want?!
thanks for the pm...and awesome updatee😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww soo romantic !! 💔 Haha he was here the whole time !! 😆 Superb update! Thankyou so much for continuing it. Loved the chapter 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it awesome update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
haha...
recharge part was funny...
nice one!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lol how on Earth did I miss this one!!? Just read part 1 and part 2 - LOVED IT!! Their characters are so easy to fall in love with, sigh...must be the hopeless romantic in me!!

Kudos for keeping me updated! x

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Posted: 13 years ago
simply superb!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the end completely...
You are really best in everything you write ..👏

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