eyes that mesmerized(AK).on hold till may - Page 10

Hi just came to knw abt your Ff. and the fact its based on AK made it more special. I loved your way of writing and loved the story so far. Pls do PM me when u update next..

Originally posted by: armaghan0

hmm fascinating and intriguing but unexpected i was like😕 that maybe am reading the wrong fic or had missed out a part then i thought maybe ur writting in flashbacks or something but am really excited to read more and anxious as to whn ur gonna cont again

sorry for the confusion, i was getting restless with the current plot, it felt very common place, girl meets boy they fall in love and marry😆 plus i like reunion stories so i changed it a little bit😆It will become clear in a part or two😊why and how will be out in another three😊

Originally posted by: aroramaina

Wow Love this interesting twist.Excited to know what had happened in the past.Prithvi that kabab mein Haddi is still here.Kappa and Yuvi did not know about Ansh?Cant wait for the next part.

Prits is not and never will be the kabab mein haddi, i liked his character in kyph till he turned a psycho, so i cherish him as he was before that. Same cannot be said about Misty though😉and a big thank you for pms

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

wow so intersting...suddenly the story has changed...i really wanna know how come angad and kripa ended this way and what transpired b/w them 5 years ago.

thanks for pm pallika

thank you😊 it will be clear in about 3 parts...or atleast i think so😉😆

Originally posted by: spvd

part 9
nice...
5 year leap?
cont soon dear...

yup part 9...as for the leap...i was getting restless with the current plot...and it was going nowhere i wanted it too...so the change😆

Originally posted by: fffan123

Interesting. Looking forward to next part.

thanks for reading😊

Originally posted by: _Simmy_

Hi just came to knw abt your Ff. and the fact its based on AK made it more special. I loved your way of writing and loved the story so far. Pls do PM me when u update next..

thank you for reading and appreciating it😊I would include you in the pm list or request Pallika too😉

Originally posted by: soni4eva

Amazin update luvd it x

thank you😊

Revised PM list

aroramaina
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Love,
Anshu

PS: next update on monday😊

Along with being the co-owner of the event management firm with Naina, Kripa also taught 1^st grade children at a nearby school every Wednesday. It was one of the joys of her life. She loved being with small kids, and swimming in their superseded imagination and large world of possible. It was as if nothing was impossible under the sun, and they can do and get anything. Their world encompassed their friends, parents and teachers. She felt privileged to be a part of that world.

"Ma'am; I want there to be 7 Sundays."

"Pihu, then how will you and I meet, if there are 7 Sundays?"

"Okay…" "Then 6 Sundays and 1 Wednesday." She said cutely. Kripa just hugged her, and said, "We will see."

"Ma'am, you are looking pretty today. Pink looks good on girls," said one of her favorite geeks, and then made a run for it when Kripa tried to hug him. He didn't like when people hugged him, but Kripa couldn't stop herself all the same.

"So, what story will it be today?" Kripa asked. She was responsible for their story hour. Every time she took them to the lands of brave and beautiful, clever and cunning, pirates and princes on their demand.

"Ma'am, we want the prince story."

"Which prince story?" Kripa asked even though she knew what they were referring to. It was her fault, for delving into the past.

"The prince who loved the white dress," they chorused.

She gave in.

"Once the king announced a big ball for the prince to choose his bride. Every fair maiden in the kingdom was invited, except for one." At this moment her riveted audience chorused as they always do, "but why ma'am?"

"Nobody knew that she existed, they thought she was a boy."

"But she wanted to go and show one and all that she is a beautiful girl, worthy of being a princess. But there was a catch; she didn't want to marry the prince."

"Why?"

"She didn't like the prince. He was arrogant just like the archangel."

"Who is archangel?"

"Archangel was the angel who was thrown out of heaven by God."

"Why?"

"Because he was bad, and he didn't do what God told him to."

"What did God tell him to do?"

"That is another story. I will tell you that next week."

"Okay. But ma'am if the girl didn't meet the prince how did she know he was bad?"

"She has met him, accidently."

"How do you meet someone accidently?"

"When you are not going to meet him or her, but meet with him/her nonetheless. Like when Rudra go for shopping in the mall with his parents and meet Pihu who has also come to shop. Then Rudra met with Pihu accidently."

"Okay."

"Where were we?"

"You met with the prince accidently."

"Not me, Panchi, the girl met with the prince accidently, that's how she knew he was an archangel."

"Only once miss?"

"No not once, 5 times."

"Accidently?"

"Yes. Well not every time, but sometimes."

"Then what happened ma'am?"

"Then her friend Prithvi helped her find a dress."

"Which was white in color?"

"Yes, it was white in color. She looked like a princess when she wore it."

"But miss, if she was not invited how did she go to the ball?"

"Her brother and her friend were invited, she went with them."

"When she entered the ball, everybody was astonished and curious as to who is this beautiful girl."

"What did the prince do?"

"He watched her dance with Prithvi."

"He did not dance with her."

"No he did not."

"When Prithvi went to get a drink for Panchi went after the dance, the prince cornered her and dragged her with him to the palace garden."

"But why ma'am? Did he recognize her?"

"Yes he did, he was furious with her for not telling him she was a girl when she met him earlier."

"Ma'am the prince was stupid. How can he not know Panchi was a girl? Panchi is a girl's name. Did he never ask her name?"

"No he did not. That is why I told you he was arrogant."

"What happened then miss?"

"Then the hour clock chimed, as it is doing now, which means that story hour is finished."

"But miss, we want to know what happened next."

"I will tell you next Wednesday."

"Ma'am, please please please."

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Angad remembered the night when they had gone to Jinx. Kripa had looked spectacular. He hadn't been able to take his eyes off her. There had been just one thorn in his side, her best friend Prithvi. She had danced with him for what seemed like hours. Then when Prithvi had gone to get her a glass of water, Angad had dragged her off the dance floor to one of the cubicles. She had made him furious by struggling.

He had dragged her to him, and caged her within his arms. When she had finally looked up in his eyes, he hadn't been able to break the contact. She had mesmerized him. She had surprised him by bringing his head down and kissing him. He had not been able to resist and had kissed her until they were both out of breathe. Even then it had not stopped, if they were not surrounded by hundreds of people with her brother and Prithvi among the crowd he would have taken her home. Instead like a gentleman he had released her like a gentleman and let her go. It had been a mistake.

😕really confused prince loved the part kripas interaction with the kids was cute but u have left me more curious and excited to read more

Damn. I didn't realize how many chapters I had missed out on. XD
But OMG, they've separated? Already? And they even have a kid? =O
I'm so confused right now..But it sounds interesting.
Continue soon and PM me.

-Jot.

part 10
nice part...
so Kripa is telling the kids about her story...
cont soon dear...