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Posted: 13 years ago

Im dead...when i read the dialouge tell me where it hurts i expected him to point at his heart and i was right!😃
Dat was beautiful!

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peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

It was so poignant and subtly beautiful. Touched my heart deeply.

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ShiningStar18

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Posted: 13 years ago

So beautiful dearie !!! 🤗 You have got to write more on a scene like this. I am so excited to see how they'll react to one another when they escape from the kidnappers and return home. P.S Totally loved the OS. Khushi will never stop caring for him. That is the utmost truth. Great work Risha 😳

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dur-e-shewar

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Posted: 13 years ago

really nice

beautifully written

plz pm me

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ssatny

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Posted: 13 years ago

The stories you tell are simple and beautiful.

Will you continue this one? It seems as if needs a conclusion.

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sriambale

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Posted: 13 years ago

there hsn't been a single work of urs i haven't liked till nw.. AMAZIN!!!!:)

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Risha

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sriambale
there hsn't been a single work of urs i haven't liked till nw.. AMAZIN!!!!:)

woah! Thankyou so much!That does mean alot :D

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darkangelp

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Posted: 13 years ago

aw...itz written so beutifully...👏

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Nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

OHHH that was beautiful!!!!!! no other words to describe it!!!!

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tvbuf

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice. Hope you will continue ?

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