OS: I Say A Little Prayer For You - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I think I love Arnav and Khushi more because of how you wonderful writers portray them, then as shown in just a few episodes of the serial.

What a beautiful analysis of thoughts and feelings and shown sooo beautifully!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You know I was wondering about how later on when things became all right how they would think about that mangalsutra, and I had the same thoughts both Khushi and arnav did here-- cant bear to look at it and Khushi cant let it go as its a symbol of her marriage--- AND you wrote about it--- so wonderfully too!!.
I am happy Now!
Take care of your cold get well soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Outstanding...I am so speechless right now..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing beautiful ...its so near to their original characters n very naturally done...so elegantly written grt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am glad you write these one shots along with your other work, it gives us another glimpse of your ability as a writer. Each and every piece has the essence of Arnav and Khushi wonderfully captured and still has something new to offer, like different colors of the sunrise.

Coming to this story, loved the way Khushi expresses her love, longing and understanding of her husband. Arnav is as complex as they come, it is not easy to be his wife and understand him to such an extent that, you let him have all the joys in the world even if you are subject to unnecessary stress or pleasant torture. He likes the surprise and joy on her face due to his sudden appearance after a long absence and she likes the joy that she can give him with her uninhibited reaction. If this is not unconditional love then what is?

Love is also accepting symbols they may mean different things to different people, like the mangalsutra, meaning one thing to both a symbol of their love and belonging to each other.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved this one...It has such a mesmerizing feeling to it..I was touched...and emotional at Khushi's feelings...
Arnav is a control freak..but also a caring and loving husband!
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully os well written beautifully done loved the song awesome words can not describe the beauty of the os loved it thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it. Beautiful OS!!!! It was very well written, I hope they show something like this in the show.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A beautiful OS !
I loved it !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written. Sweet reason behind her new mangalsutra. Loved it. Your taste in music is obviously great, I spent the weekend listening to Aretha & B.B. King. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it was a beautiful OS

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