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priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow beautiful and amazing part

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Gayathri

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Posted: 13 years ago

It was just so beautiful! :) It was very realistic! Good one!

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

i just LOVED the conversation .. it was too good and perfectly ASRish. the way he was teasing her .. and she was confused. LOVED it. :)

good job!

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Harshnee Vora

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Posted: 13 years ago

luved it

wonderful update

especially their confession of them both needing each other

thx a lot for the pm

continue soon

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

a lovely update that really touched my heart! khushi's desire for arnav and her confusion at him going back to his 'laad governor' style has been depicted well... arnav also misses being close to her but his fear of harming her further prevents him from giving in to his desire for her... loved the whole scene!

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_Janki_

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved the update it was awesome!!:)
Please do continue :D

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful Part . The Caring & The Teasing :) ADORABLE 😍

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aakriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow..

that was awesome..

really loved reading it..

do continue..

thanks for the pm.:)

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chavvi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

chalo dono ne confess kar diya
all is well one hopes

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was such a nice update

she felt he was avoiding her and cried

Now Arnav explained... which was GOOD!

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