A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121

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archa2810

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Awesome... Arnav initiating a public display?? Wow!!

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

nice
arnav dancing with khushi
awesome

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summaiya

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

superb updt

luvd it

so romantic

thanks for pm

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

wow an update after ages of waiting.

wow loved it as always.

the romance was the best.

loved both arnav and khushi's perceptive.

and less occurrence of the creep in this update was very welcoming.

all in all the update was freaking awesome.

and thanks for the pm.

p.s. hope you update soon

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Awww...I actually dream of this ipkknd...which should have been!!!
War are you doing here girl??? You should
Be there sitting among the cvs!!!! 😉
loved it!

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disha7

@disha7

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

I loved loved it!!

i know i have said this so many times but very beautifully written! 😊

and i'm now sitting and grinning like a fool 😃

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damonzlady

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

awesommme update!😊 loved it!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

each and every part of the update added zing to the story! especially loved nk keeping a protective eye on khushi... nice to see how his goofiness hides a clever mind and a loyal attitude... arnav's last line to nk was adorable, as was his earlier interaction with khushi... have always loved how his teasing leaves khushi flustered and her confession that she was thinkinng of him was just plain cute!

can't wait for the unmasking of shyam... hope he gets what he deserves and the innocent won't suffer in the aftermath

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Swati Hansraj

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Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

HUH!!! he said that... that Khushi will be dancing with him... WOW!!!

NK is such a good soul... he is a jem of a person.

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#440

This part was Awesome!!! I really liked the Arnav and Khushi conversation. The way you write about them makes me want to read more and more!

I liked NK as well, and the last line Arnav said...!!! Brilliant. Will you be writing about their dance? I would love to read that...I can already imagine Shyam's face!

Cannot wait to read how Shyam's truth will come out in front of everyone else.

Keep up the great work!