ArHi - Kaisa Ye - Part 10-3Pg 51 - 08-21-12 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

Sound awesome babes...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Note: Many people getting confuse about Arnav and Khushi's age (in the present Arnav is 27 and Khushi 17), but the story begins in the past and (I've posted the character sketch of the past). I hope - this make sense now.



Kavya Singh Raizada... is totally confused soul who loved his family. When his dadaji changed the will he was forced to marry (on contract basis) with Panchi the girl he hated the most. Living together he fell in love with her and now he is proud father of two kids Anjali and Arnav.

Panchi Singh Raizada... comes from a middle-class family and respects her parents. She shares a special relationship with god as she was not born with silver spoon. But things changed when she agrees to tie knot with Kavya Singh Raizada, a rich confused business man, but the marriage is on contract basis. However later on she falls in love with Kavya and lives happily ever after with her two kids Anjali and Arnav.

Anjali Singh Raizada
Age 27


She love Arnav the most after her Dad and enjoy teasing her brother the most.

Arnav Singh Raizada
Age 23

At the age of twenty-three, he is very strict about his morals in life. He believes everything can be bought in the world, including love. He has no consideration for relationships and can even manipulate people to achieve his ambitions.



Garima Sharma... divorcee (in front of the society), but some say she is widow of (Mr. Shashi Gupta) and doesn't live with her kids (Rudra and Khushi) only stays with her elder sister's daughter Payal Kapoor.

Payal Kapoor... after her parents' death she stays with her masi Garima and misses her cousins too and doesn't understand why her cousins hate their mother.

Rudra Gupta... hates his mother and elder brother of Khushi. Married to his love interest Kripa and going to be a father soon.


Kripa Gupta... stays next door to her parents after marriage, loves her younger brother Daksh and going to be a mother second time (its her first born child, but Khushi has always been her first child instead of her husband's sister).

Khushi Khumari Gupta... at the age of three she lost her father (Shashi Gupta) and her mother (Garima Sharma) at same time. She is very simple and bubbly girl. Always bringing laughter around the people she stays with. If she is the apple of her brother's eyes than she is the strongest pillar in her Bhabhi's life. Her Bhabhi's brother Daksh is her best friend and her Bhabhi's parents are like her grandparents (since the age of four she called them Nani and Nanu).




Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Can't Wait To Read :) 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Can't Wait To Read :) 😳



Thank you...

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Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey OMG seems so interesting 😃 but lolz arnav 16 years old?? make him abit older like 26 😃 16 is too young 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: darksydeangel

hey OMG seems so interesting 😃 but lolz arnav 16 years old?? make him abit older like 26 😃 16 is too young 😆



I've kept your request in mind and made some changes. I hope its alright. Let me know if I should make some changes to Khushi's characters.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MistiofMistz



I've kept your request in mind and made some changes. I hope its alright. Let me know if I should make some changes to Khushi's characters.

Love Misti

hey 23 is the perfect age 😃😃 everything is perfect now 😃 nd how old is khushi???
oh nd thnx for changing the age 😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: darksydeangel

hey 23 is the perfect age 😃😃 everything is perfect now 😃 nd how old is khushi???

oh nd thnx for changing the age 😃😃



Our Khushi is thirteen and the age itself is very important. Its going to be very funny and I promise you'll enjoy laughing your head off.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh! Thank you... I hope you'll enjoy the first part that is going to be posted soon.

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Hello Everyone! Are you excited for first part? I couldn't stop myself from using song out of classical film DDJL...


Note: Many people getting confuse about Arnav and Khushi's age (in the present Arnav is 27 and Khushi 17), but the story begins in the past and (I've posted the character sketch of the past). I hope - this make sense now.

Part 1

Kya Pyar Kya Ishq Kaisi Yeh Chahat Hai
Bekaar Nakaam Logon Ki adat Hai...

Sharma's Resident

"I hate you Di" the words echoed deeply in Payal's ear. She closed her eyes remembering those sweet moments with her sister "please come back" only desire that her heart scream. She only wants her sister back and she'll do anything for her. Just once; but she knows that nothing like that is going to happen.

Payal felt hand touch her shoulder "what are you doing, beta? Why are you standing out here? Why aren't you ready? Groom and his family would arrival any minute" she heard her mother.

Payal slowly turn around "Maa, my every happiness I am getting in life is incomplete without my younger sister." Maa's expression changed after hearing about her younger daughter. She missed her badly, but restrict herself from expressing a mother's heart. She place her hand on Payal's forehead "Beta, what happened was not in our hands. Stop blaming yourself and get ready. The groom and his family would be here anything and they hate waiting. Please hurry" Payal close her eyes and retreat inside her room. Payal got dress quickly into her bridal wear, but her mind keep on thinking about her sister...tears kept on streaming down her face "Khushi, please come back and forgive your sister because she doesn't know the meaning of happiness anymore" Payal is brought down toward her destination while the word "Khushi" echoed deeply inside someone's ear.

Mt. Abhu - Gupta's Resident

She jerk up from her sleep "Bhaiyya" she shriek. Sweat dripping down her face. Heavy force of the wind, blowing her curtains and trees tapping her window loudly. Lights shown inside her room. She saw her brother sitting in front of her. She flung herself in his arm's and silently shedding away her grief.

"Bhaiyya, why me? Why can't these awful nightmares stop? I can't take it anymore. I find myself standing in same place I was many years ago. Why can't I move on in life? Why me?" Sobbing sound echo through the entire room "ssh" I tried my best in soothing her pain away. It's difficult witnessing my sister's painful state she trapped herself. I hate tears reflecting in her eyes. I can do anything for her smile "meri pyaari Angel" I cup her face "you know that I hate tears in your eyes than why are you shedding them" I asked her.

"Come on give me a smile" I force her to smile. She slowly start smiling "that's like my Angel" her smile grew bigger "that is my Angel's smile. And if my Angel loose her smile than her Bhai will loose his smile" I took her in my arms. She hide herself in my arms "isn't my Angel feeling sleepy" she nod her head. I smile at her and settle myself on her bed beside her. I place her head on my lap "now Angel close your eyes" I watch her close her eyes. I pat her to sleep. After she slept peacefully I place her head on the pillow and tuck her tightly inside her blanket before heading back into my room. I curse the moment (Rudra close his eyes) I forced my sister into unwanted relationship at the age of thirteen...(Rudra open his eyes recalling those unforgettable moments took place in their lives).

5yrs ago, Simila

Key Note: Currently Arnav's age is 23 and Khushi is 13

Age of 23, a girl wrap in bluish sari walking around the house searching for her daughter (meaning her husband's sister) and shouts her name "Khushi" A girl is standing in front of the window. Her face is covered by her hair.. she remove her hair from her face (and that is our chubby Khushi) she open her eyes and hear her Bhabhi's voice "first time I've felt this at age of thirteen"

I realize Bhabhi is reading my dairy. I ran toward her and grab my dairy "Bhabhi, its my dairy" Kripa smile at her "so what" I stood on my bed "only I can read my dairy" I saw Bhabhi folding my clothes "alright, but at certain age Bhabhi become her sister's best friend" and putting them inside my wardrobe "fine, but you promise not to reveal anyone about it" Bhabhi nods her head.

I sat on my bed with Bhabhi "alright than I'll read and you listen" I open my dairy feeling the emotions reflecting through the words I spoke "first time I've felt this at the age of thirteen, unknown feeling of unknown face floating inside my mind. In reflection of my eyes... there is unknown shadow that leave its evidence inside my heart. His brownish eyes, capture definition of his impression in the lines of my hands and I can visualize his unknown face. Uff! His breathe soothing the outside of my ears. Sensitization of his hands leave behind his aroma in my hair." I got up from my bed and sat on the window still "yes, its first time I've felt this unknown sensitization at the age of thirteen... unknown stranger start interrupting my thoughts" Kripa snap her fingers in front of Khushi.
Kripa: I never knew that my angel could write very emotional poetry. I am surprised. It seem as if the boy itself look decent for my angel, but who is he and where does he live.

I smack my forehead "Bhabhi, its unknown face of stranger that I've haven't met in my life only in my imagination."

Kripa: I was only getting excited for no reason. You are crazy girl

I just smiled and watch Bhabhi leave while I look upwards "no Bhabhi its just isn't my imagination, I believe that I haven't met him or seen him lekin I know he is out somewhere waiting for me."

... imagine song sequences between Khushi's craziness and Arnav's entry ...

Soccer field is shown (raining heavenly) and many people standing outside the field waiting for their player to make the winning goal. In the background his name is being chanted "Arnav, Arnav, Arnav, Arnav" he close his eyes and his fist.

Khushi has her towel wrapped around her body "Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye Aa Ke Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Usse Kaho Kabhi Saamne To Aaye" start dancing in her towel "Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye Aa Ke Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Usse Kaho Kabhi Saamne To Aaye
Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye" she covered her face in excitement. Afterwards she is jumping on her bed than falls down.

Reminding himself about his ambition in wining the game. He runs toward the ball and kicks it very high. Everyone look towards him and he misses the net. Everyone come rushing toward him.

"Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Woh Jaane Kahan Hai" Khushi is siting on the sofa of her living room and she is wearing blue chooridar "Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Woh Jaane Kahan Hai" .. including his friends... he slowly turns around and shake his head...after giving his watch to a person. "Jiske Liye Mere Hothon Pe Haan Hai Apna Hai Ya Begaana Hai Woh
Sach Hai Ya Koi Afsaana Hai Woh
Dekhe Ghur Ghur Ke Yoonhi Door Door Se" Khushi start dancing with her Bhabhi in the living room. Kripa is flattered by Khushi's innocent and hugs her "Usse Kaho Meri Neend Na Churaye
Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye Aa Ke Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Usse Kaho Kabhi Saamne To Aaye
Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye" His friends are walking behind him... he pulls his shirt off.. and his friends question him "you could have made the winning shot and kept your watch than why didn't you?"

Khushi is sleeping on her balcony in cute white blouse and white mini skirt (skirt is up to her knee) "Jadoosa Jaise Koi Chalne Laga Hai" she gets up and start dancing in the rain "Jadoosa Jaise Koi Chalne Laga Hai Maein Kya Karoon Dil Machalne Laga Hai" Arnav stop walking and look at his friends "I know! I could have win the match and kept my watch; but Arnav Singh Raizada doesn't wear someone's touched watch. Either if its very costly, but Arnav Singh Raizada hates sharing his things and if somebody as the same things ASR burns it" he walked away leaving behind his friends.

"Tera Deewana Hoon Kehta Hai Woh
Chhup Chhup Ke Phir Kyun Rehta Hai Woh" Khushi is jumping in the puddle while twirling herself "Kar Baitha Bhool Woh Le Aaya Phool Woh
Usse Kaho Jaaye Chand Leke Aaye" Kripa come outside to remove the clothes and Khushi drags her and start dancing with her again. Kripa smack Khushi on her forehead and leaves while she kept on twirling in the rain "Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye Aa Ke Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Usse Kaho Kabhi Saamne To Aaye Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye Aa Ke Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Usse Kaho Kabhi Saamne To Aaye"

Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago

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