Arhi- Their Child (Part 10 on 91, upd 6/8)

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

it was so cute and sweet

loved it

oh pretty please make this longer and continue it

it was very well written😉

therefore definitely continue

either way i don't mind if u turn it into a ss or ff, but i think u should definitely continue it.

im adding u to my buddy list so please pm me when u update😉

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Nice. Definitely you need to continue. will wait for the next update.

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sbk2

@sbk2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Awww Nish!! 🤗

What a sweet sweet OS! Loved it...

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: ---Nisha---
Question:
Do you guys want me to write just another part to this OS or turn this into an SS/FF?

Can you guys comment here and let me know, so I know how to proceed with this story. 😃

Turn it to SS / FF if possible. If not, then add at least one more part for his reaction 😆

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Ilahi_mera_Jiya

@Ilahi_mera_Jiya

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

You should definitely continue atleast to show his reaction!!!

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

that was so realistic: khushi's anger at arnav's absence, her forgiving him the moment he expressed his concern, her joy at the news of her pregnancy and the surprise she had planned for him, etc. loved seeing arnav's worry for khushi and the manner in which he showed his love for her the moment he returned... the announcement was the highlight of the story but would have loved to know arnav's reaction to this momentous news: can imagine him gaping at her speechlessly, for once in his life 😃!