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Posted: 13 years ago
RES.

-Edited- (Finally😆)

Manaall.🤗



First of all soo soo many sorries for taking an eternity to UnRES my comment, I had totally totally forgotten about it, in fact i havent even read the chapter abhi tak. Lagta hain porein tarha sein dimag satak gaya hain mera.😆😆 So sorry for the wait dear, my dimag is out of schedule these days.😆



Like always, an awesome update (it would be awesome I haven't read it), but this time you will get a more sequenced comment, since I am going to comment as I read the chapter.😆 So it better bee Awesome, warna I will look pretty farig in front of everyone.🤓


"We Are Sisters", this part so touched my heart.😳 It had so much of warmth, just three words, and its like you get the whole world on your feet, left an impact on me, like it does when people say 'I love you" in fact I would prefer this every time instead of ILY, (not applicable on couples I know that.😆) The first part was so just like Khushi, the girl who never sees the bad in anyone, yeah yeah, she is fiesty, she is hot headed, but when it comes to being emotional, her emotions are always racked aside, if she has the slightest inclination that she has unknowingly hurt someone.😳 We got to see this Khushi all the time, in fact as I said earlier, reminds of the same scene in the show on Arnav's Mothers Barsi when Khushi gave her sympathy, yet he acted cold towards her, even then she blamed herself for hurting, not taking into account the way he had hurt her, later she did realize, now that's a different story.


I soo love the Winchester brothers bond, and with the added twist of Arnav being their brother too its just takes it too a whole new level of awesomeness that you cant even imagine.😍



Dean, can never be serious can he? Arnie seriously? Literally felt like spanking him hard just then, you don't joke all the time seriously! I have always adored Sam and his sense of things, the maturity that he shows unlike Dean, but anyways there is no beating Dean in looks *Sighs back to drooling over Dean*



Dean-Arnav can never get along can they? Every time I hear them quarreling over their father, the replays of Sam and Dean doing that play in my mind. Sam's continuous taunts of subjecting Dean to be the pawn for John Winchester, a puppet who had no life but that which he had been led into by their father. I don't think Sam was wrong at any instance, and similarly I don't think Arnav is wrong either, its John Winchester who has been wrong on every instance, Dean stands corrected, on the revenge dialogue, yes I loved that counter strike between the two brothers, it felt so real, reminding me of one of Sam and Dean's 'dad' wars.




Aww, I love Payal and Khushi's easy going friendship, their talk about the boys was so adorable.😍 The 'only sane one' yeah exactly, that's what I tag Sam as like always, personally even in the John-Sam-Dean banter, I loved Sam for his sanity, even though John is their father I feel he lacks a lot of sense and a thing called maturity.🥱



I knew it! I knew it! she could read him, she could read his eyes, he is as reflective as a mirror, his eyes say what his tongue cannot, and that, that is what I love about Arnav most.😎 I have heard that people whose eyes speak volumes, are more pure, more sentimental than those, whose tongues speaks more than required.



The last part touched my heart more than the sister dialogue I must say. The flashbacks, that turbulence in his head, the turmoil, everything coming out to eat him, you wrote it so realistically in such few words I could only imagine him doing that. I really need to learn some summarizing skills form you I guess!🤔


All in all, just a totally spell bounding wonderful update, loved it to the core.❤️👏




Thankyou so much for the Pm.😉




I hope this comment has made up for the delay, I am so sorry for it once again.😳




Love,




Batool😳
🥱


Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww i feel bad for both khushi and Arna. Please update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Manal. Thank you so much! I must say this was a very very pleasant surprise! I couldn't stop smiling :D

It's really commendable how you brought out the nightmare and the turmoil Arnav's facing. He had i coming for a long time.
The fight between the brothers was out and out emotions and anger.
You always write the scene which involves the brothers exceptionally well and this chapter was no different!
Khushi feels the connection and defended his actions?! * sequels and jumps on the bed*

Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice bad
Feel bad for them
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 Manal ... stop biting the fingernails !!!
It was great, loved the way you created that tension among the boys and then the despair of Arnie ⭐️ I could feel his pain ... love how effortless it is to read your updates !!! x
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Posted: 13 years ago
just now read the updates i missed...really it's getting very intresting...continue!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all WELCOME BACK!!! yaay! I love this chapter[ my fav so far]
I absolutely love the continuing tension between Arnav and Dean. Just because their hunting together doesn't mean that everything's happy go luck btw the brothers. OMG i so psyched to see the reunion between father and sons!! Arnav might just loss it on John.
The last 2 chapters kinda reminded me of the barsi(is that how you spell it😕) episode.

I love the fact that you have Arnavs mother coming to him in attempts to soothe him.Ohh and the kangans💔 My heart cried out for him!

I hope Arnav and khushi develop more of a connection before they become romantically interested in one another.
Quick question; how old r the characters??[khushi,Payal,Dean,Arnav,Sam...]


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*GASP* I DON'T WANT PAYAL TO DIE!!!!! we all know what happens when Sam Winchester falls for (or sleeps with) a girl😲
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Edited by mz.brar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update ...wounder how kushi fixes arnav...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
VERY NICE UPDATE. IT'S TOUCHING AND EMOTIONAL.
I FEEL BAD FOR ARNAV BUT I KNEW THAT LOVE IS IN THE AIR.
YEAH KUSHI IS COMING.
BTW GOOD JOB, AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my this was bit explosive update for the brothers
will they quit blaming each other though it wont help if they keep doing that
lets see what happens next

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