Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!!

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Tia.0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Oh my... You guys create a walking talking vision with words... I can actually see everything happening in front of my eyes... Kudos...

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pere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Very well written! I am loving the suspense

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fffan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Absolutely Wonderful !!!

Poor Anjali

Please update soon

Edited by fffan123 - 13 years ago

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jazzpreet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

great update, gals! thanks for the pm :)

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Vrushali Naik

@barunlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

The emotions dat portrayed blew me off completely!!...its ws way too fabulous!!!...M starting to fall in love wid it more n more!!!

Thnks for d pm Gargee!!!

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Shyam is a mysterious guy...I started off actually thinking he was a good guy...when he bought Anjali for double I thought it was because he was saving her and actually liked her...but now due to the ending...I'm not so sure!

Poor Anjali...to have her father hate her so much and for her to be sold like that by her own family! I wonder why her mother committed suicide? And Arnav's her brother?? They think he's dead??

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arhiluv101

@arhiluv101

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

va va va kya baat hain so dramatic!😆

that was like so many emotions in one update

you can display emotions really well in your

writing, keep up the fantastic work (i say that to everyone)

please pm me for the next update

-arhiluv101

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Glad to see you update so soon! Well, I expecting more Arnav and Khushi but instead I got Shaym. When I first read his name I thought this was going to be boring, but I was pleasantly surprised. I love that we get Arnav and Khushi on one hand and then we get this amazing piece on the other. I really like-no, love it. So quick question: why did Shyam marry Anjali (sp?). Was it because he was so attached to her mom and she wanted him to save her? Or was it because he actually admired her from afar?
Also this Shyam kind of reminds menof ASR, I really hope that Shyam is a good guy in this and actually cares for his wife.
Can't wait to read more!!

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Absolutely loved the play of words with their eyes!!!! Brilliant job, Gargee

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Your work is so rich with details. A layered composition.

It satisfies on so many levels--though it makes me long to see something like this on screen, because the details are so evocative. Lovely lovely work.

Want to add that Anjali's deflowering was depicted so well. One sees her vulnerability but also her desire. Oh, he is such a cad--but I want to read more about him.

Will wait for the next.

Maya