MG ~( DESTINED LOVE AND PAIN) new thread pg 144 - Page 8

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nehakapoor7 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb start... already waiting for update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

superb start... already waiting for update😊




thanks for liking
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved d update dear!!!!...w8ing
plzzz cont soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
THANK YOU GUYS FOR YOUR LOVE AND SUPPORT...

thanks all who liked and commented
here is the part 2...

PART 2

After having bath and preparing breakfast geet went to her little life '..her darling diya'.

Geet: (lovingly diya's forehead and showering all her love)diya honey get up '.,'look its already morning , you wanted to help mumma in packing na common get up baby'.

Geet: diya get up look we have to go '.get up baby otherwise we will miss the flight '..

While geet was busy waking her little angel on the other side somewhere in delhi'..

A handsome,tall and fair complexion guy was getting ready for his daily daily routine''..his face was devoid of any expressions'..his eyes were boring pain'.anguish and hatred'' hurt that he his he experienced three years back''.

The grief of believing her is still as fresh as the first drop of rain in him''

There he is surrounded by pain of betrayal''her unfaithfulness to their relation''

The ache that his heart is experiencing every second due to her ''.there are some unanswered questions that he want answers for them''..

But his love somewhere is still bored in his heart that it sometimes refused to accept that she was wrong '..she cheated on him'..

But at the end mind always wins'.the proof of her deceive was something that his mind refused to believe her''.

Now he is all alone in his own world'though many persons are related to him ''a very supportive and understanding family but he made a vast distance from them since he was taken advantage''.

All knows that his attitude and set of mind that is why everyone is scared of him ''.

He never admits but the longing and vast emptiness the separation had created in his life has left him vunerable to the situations''.

He also wanted to cherish his life with the most beautiful moments of his life but the one who he considered his soul mate duped him''.she destroyed his life''

She is the reason for his change ''she had changed the maan who once had experienced the frangrance of love '.love the most beautiful feeling that everyone awaits In their life to once treasure had made its way in his life '.he had indeed encountered ''''

But it is said that'"LIFE IS ALWAYS NOT A BED OF ROSES'''.

IT IS ACCOMPAINED WITH THORNS"

That's what he had go through in his life for making her his life'..but inturn what he got the suffering for lifetime'..loss of peace of mind'..immense betrayal the pain that he is living everyday is the cause of his mistakes'..

Yes'his mistakes that he believed her fake innocence'.whose result Is now in the form of his rude and arrogant attitude'.

Maan: I have only got the bitter fruit of trusting someone unconditionally'..that was my mistake'.that I am not going to repeat again''

Maan was getting ready after his daily exercise /taichi to let out his frustration of her memories , the sweet time they have spent together along with the bitter images of her of the past '..

His past is haunting him from the last three years ''her face..her every single gesture'.every single word spoken by her'..is killing him inside deep within '..that always reminds him of their fake so called marriage'..their false relation''

After getting ready maan went to office without paying attention to anyone present in the hall'..this was the daily routine for past three years'..

Every single heart ached seeing hm like this'going without having anything'..but none can do anything to soothe his pain '.no one knows what happened between them three years back that made him hard as rock 'that he counts no emotions no feelings all these are baseless and waste of time for him '..

"SOMETIMES OUR VISION MADE US PART FROM THE ONE WHOM WE TREASURE THE MOST'''

RELATIONS ARE TIED BY A VERY FRAGILE KNOT

WHICH IS NEEDED TO BE TREASURED

WITH THE EMOTIONS OF LOVE AND TRUST"

While in daarjeeling geet and diya were busy packing to leave this place forever to which they were bound to live for three years''

During collecting diya's stuffs , geet noticed that diya was not seeming happy she was sitting with a grumpy face . geet went and sat beside her and made her comfortable on her lap'

Geet: diya, what happened sweety you are not happy that we are going to a new place '

While diya looked at her mother's face and said

Diya: mumma will I be able to make friends '.my ol friends are her 'I will mich them'and made a sad face after saying her problem to her mom'

Geet: looking at her daughter seriously sensing her genuine problem ''

Geet: baby mumma will be there for you and I am sure that my diya will make loads of friends and I have a surprise for you when we will reach delhi '..now its upto you to decide do you want to go or mumma will stay her only with my little angel '

Diya sensing the surprise jumped in excitement ...

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Edited by suhaaana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
awesome update
is the surprise geet talking about is maan😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
oh what happened btwn maan and geet in the past waiting for that
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Loved the part a lot...
Maan s still in the misconception that geet cheated him...
But wat made him think so?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GEET THINKS MAAN BETRAYED HER AND MAAN THINKS THAT GEET BETRAYED HIM
BOTH ARE LIVING IN MISERY WITH THE MU
WHO CREATED IT
BUT GEET HAS DIA AND MAAN IS ALONE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
bth feel betrayed
wonder wht went wrong
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
very interesting update
superb part
thanks for pm
cont. soon

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