Is it our destiny? ~ Kriyaansh FF ~ discontinued!

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

nyc concept... plz... write it further... i wanna read is 1...

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Nivedya

@ArSha_TanHa23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Wonderful start!!
Lets see how ur story turn out...
Thnx 4 the pm... =)

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maitri

@kriyansh.d3

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

vry different concept

loved it to d core

thnk u so much for d pm n do update soon

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MANAVI KHATTER

@dazzlingmanavi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Awsm concept yaar..!!😃
Kria crying..??n doesn't wanna make frnds...
plzz continue soon...nd thnxx for the pm😊

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awsome dear
pls cntinue
i love ur concept

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Thank u soo much everyone 😊 We will surely try to update soon. The nxt one will b by mahima... pls zarur batana kaisa hoga we will try to update today itself 😊

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kriyaanshmahima

@kriyaanshmahima

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Hey guys so hows u all... well im new at this forum and we r going to write this FF... hope u all will like this update...

Part 2

Rey - Kriya!!!! ruko na pls... I too dont have any friend over here... pls be my friend pls...

She stop in her way. How she wished to make him her friend but her destiny always played with her...

Kriya - dekho reyaansh... pls dont come in my way... I dont like to make friends...

Rey - why?

Kriya - b'coz...

Rey - b'coz?

Kriya - nothing...

She started to leave that place when rey notices something.

Rey - hey wait...

Kriya - ab kya hai?

Rey - tumhare gale par bhi ye nishhan hai?

He pointed towards a mark on the side of her neck

Kriya - haan toh?

Rey - mere bhi hai dekho...

Kriya - so what?

Rey - kya tumhein iska matlab pata hai?

Kriya - haan

Rey - pls batao na... i always wanted to know

Kriya - it means that the one who have this mark on his or her neck is said to be very special with bad destiny while the one who have this on his or her back is said to have a very good destiny but the one who is never liked by anyone...

Rey - oh! how did u knew this?

Kriya - maa told me.

Rey - pls be my friend pls...

Kriya - ok ok fine... friends.

Rey - friends...

He said forwarding his hand to shake hands with her.She shaked hands with him and smilingly said 'friends'

*After some days*

Both Kriya and Rey were playing in the garden of the orphanage when suddenly kriya slipped and her dress got dirty. She started crying...

R - why r u crying?

K - Its my fav dress.

R - why?

K - It was given to me by my mother on my birthday... it was the last gift given by her to me 😭

Rey even intentionally falls down and starts crying. 😭

K - now why r u crying?

R - its my fav dress..

K - copycat.

R - no im not copycat.

K - u are..

R - im not

K - yes

R - no

K - yes

R - no

K - no

R - yes

K - lol u accepted reyaansh... u r a copycat...

She started running and rey started chasing her... finally he got a hold of her...

R - u cheated

K - u accepted 😆

R - not fair *Pout*

K - pout boy

R - oye aaj kal tu mujhe bahut naam de rahi hai haan

K - so? mera muh meri marzi...

They both were always lost in eachother... they never care about the world around them... reyaansh had done that what none of the child of the orphanage was able to do... he made her smile... she was there in that orphanage from last 1 month but the sister herself never saw her smiling as she was smiling when she was playing with reyaansh...

*Somewhere in the jungles of dehradun*

1st man - I want that boy at any cost!!!! by hook or by crook... i dont care... adopt him, kidnap him, do whatever u can do... but i want him at any cost...

2nd man - jee master...

woman - but master... how will we identify him?

2nd man - ya master how will we?

1st man - look at this mark... it must b present on his side of the neck...

woman and 2nd man - ok master... we will adopt him and wait till he turn 18...

1st man - great... now u both can leave...

huh not more guys... thak gayi... well till next update guess whos that boy and these 3 new personality... pls tell hows it

Precap - hmm woh toh konpal hi bataayegi aapko 😊

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

haye boy to muje pta hey rey hey

baki ka pta nahi

tu thal bohat jaldi gyi itna schota update not fare

megical tha

update soon ok

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Mahimamanral
huh not more guys... thak gayi... well till next update guess whos that boy and these 3 new personality... pls tell hows it

Precap - hmm woh toh konpal hi bataayegi aapko 😊

Haww mahima bahut jaldi thakti hai tu... chal no prob... update achha tha... Precap? hmm sochlke deti hun 😊