you are mine only mine my BAATCUTTER!#thread 2#

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--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Hey guys back with an update!😃

Sharon:day after tomoro all are gng back rite...so kyun na hum aakri dhin enjoy kare???wat say?

all:yeah!!

swayam:Okok guys ab ke liye so jathe hai!

Simmi:par plan?

Sharon:yes hum plan karke hi so jayenge!

Swayam:sharon its too late...

Sharon:nahin plan karke hi sojayenge!

Swayam:plz sharon man lo na we will decide tomoro

Sharon:nahin !nahin nahin!

swayam:ok jo karna hai jaldi karo...

Rey:wah beta itni jaldi man gaya!kya control hai sharon manna padega!

Swayam:guys aisa kuch nahin hai...

vicky:soch guys!

Nilesh:soch soch!

Simmi&rinni:kaha jaye!?

neha&vishaka:soch!!

All were thinking wen rey pulls kria aside and whispers...

Rey:baatcutter soch rahi ho??

Kria*deep thinking*:haan...

Rey:kya soch rahi ho??

kria*innocent*:yahi ki kaha jaye?

Rey:Tum soch bhi sakthe ho*sarcastically*

Kria:Rey!!!!😡

Rey burst out laughing...she was about to move away from him when he took hold of her wrist...

Kria:rey chodo muje..!!!

He controlled his laugh ...

Rey:baatcutter sorry yar i was jus kiddin!

Kria:rey muje aapse koyi baat nahin karni!

She swipes his hand away and moves towards the gang

Kria:guys meri sar dhardh ho rahi hai..am gng...(bahana😆)

Swayam:kria r u okay?

kria:yeah swayam am fine...

rey:kria kya hua?chalo room mei chalthe hai...tum rest karlo

kria:muje aapki zaroorat nahin hai!!

she goes away from there and closes the door behind...
swayam understood that they fought

Sharon:guys idea!!!

all:kya?

sharon:i knw one place...!!!!

neha :what place u saying sharon??

sharon:i dnt knw the name correctly ...its kinda ancient one and uske piche eek waterfall bhi hai...

(guys i dnt knw mumbai only its just my imagination...i dnt knw any place jo pics dheka uss pictures ko ek link type kar rahi hun thats it)

Vishaka:Awsum!perfect than!

Swayam:ok ab toh chale?

All:haan!

All went to their rooms but swayam and rey were left behind

Swayam:toh jagda?

rey*puppy face*:haan...

Swayam:toh manana padega na...

Rey*puppy face*:haan...

Swayam:toh i shud help u tomoro by taking gang away from u two..rite?

rey*excited*:haan!

Swayam:kya halat ho gaya mera aapni behan ko uske bf ke saath time spend karne ke liye muje help karna padega!

Rey:oye!tu typical bhai mat ban!

They smile and say in unison "Girls!"

Next Morning

Kria woke up and checked her mobile they were 50 messages!😲

Ofcourse all were from rey...

She deleted all the messages without reading...

she immediately got call from rey she dint lift like that three four times happend..she kept on ignoring
then she got a msg from rey saying that "baatcutter if u dint liftt my call am gonna come to ur room!"

She immediately lifted the next call

"baatcutter am sorry plz plz plz plz maaf kardho!!plz plz!!"he begged

she dint reply she stayed calm..

"baatcutter plz chup mat raho i cant bare it!kuch toh baat karo "he said in a sad tone

"rey muje jana hai bye!" by saying this she cutted the call

She went to washroom started washing her face while washing

"kya samjtha hai rey aapne apko!lagthe rey samajtha hai ki mei bhi dhusri ladkiyon ki tarah hun!mei usse baat nahin karungi!!"

As she was cursing him she saw back and found him standing leaning to the wall and staring at her

when she saw back he disappeared

"lagtha hai kuch zyadha soch rahi hoon!" she said and closed the door of washroom

"lagtha hai baatcutter bahut gusse mei hai!i think muje uss romantic apot mei hi usko manana padega!"he said,standing behind the curtain of her room

*conti in next post*

Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 13 years ago

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--Nishi--

@--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

They went to the place ..on their way kria sat with girls and rey could not even go near her...

They reached the place everyone loved it...kria was stayin with girls...rey saw swayam with a puppy face...swayam signed saying he will take care...

rey took kria's camera and kept it in the car without knowing her...when they reached the waterfalls all could utter just one word "wow"

all were admiring the beauty of waterfall but rey was enjoying the beautyof his baatcutter

kria searched for her camera but she coould not find it...she asked swayam about it he acted as if he was busy with sharon..all couples were busy..kriya dint want to ask rey so she went alone to the car...she took her camera kept it in her backpack and while returning she felt a hard pull(this scene happens at the first pic)
someone closed her mouth and pushed her towards the wall..she was about to struggle but she felt the touch it was him "REY"..she stood quite,he removed his hand and holded his ears saying "soryy"

"meine kaha na muje aapse baat nahin karni!" she said shooking her head to the opp side

"baatcutter plz..." he said...

He took her hands and started hitting them on his cheek...she stooped him from doing that

"ye aap kya kar rahe ho?" she said with concern

"i want u to talk to me..i miss u!i love u!" he said making puppy face

"chalo maaf kardhiya" she said with a smile...

"WOHOOO FINALLY!!!" he was jumping like a monkey...

"ab bas karo aur chalo chalthe hai sab humare wait kar rahe hai"she said

"rukho na kal raat se romance hi nahin ki humne...aur yaha koyi bhi nahin hai na teri mom nor teri bhai nor bhabhi!" he said coming closer ,pinning her to the wall

she was blushing...

he came forward and was about to kiss when she slightly pushed him while blushing..now he is angry(fake anger😆)

he stood in the opp side with a pout...

"chalo na" she said pulling him

"muje nahin ana" he said showing fake anger..

she came infront of him and kept her hands around his neck went closer to him ,their lips were inches away

"awww!golu ko gussa dhilaya meine" she asked with an innocent face

he was melting but took control over his senses..

he nodded a yes

"toh gussa meine dhilaya toh muje hi usse khatam karna hai na" she said this one seductively came closer to him and kissed him ...she took his upper lip between her lips...it was a lip lock...they were kissing passionatelly...he hands circled her waist and pulled closer so that they look like one,without breaking the kiss...he ppushed her slightly onto the wall and were kissing passionately ...he left her lips but not her skin...he started exploring her neck...she was moaning...he came near her ear kissed it and bit it ...she smiled on this action of his...

"a---b ab ch---aa---chalo na" she said managing to talk while he was kissing all over her face...

"rukho na chalthe hai..kya jaldi?" he said while kissing...

she gained her senses and pushed him saying "ab romance bandh karo!"

"but y?" he said making puppy face...

"chalo" she said pulling him near the waterfalls...

Precap:Volley ball in water

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Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 13 years ago

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Rucha

@rock_ruvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

awesome update...
like it very much...

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

superb ...

thanks for the pm

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Awesome part 👏...

Loved this line 😆...

Swayam:"Kya halat ho gai meri apni behen ko uske BF ke sath time spend karne keliye mujhe help karna parega"...

Aw Kria ka ruthna aur Rey ka manana 😉...

Haye Kriyansh ka Romance 😳 😍...

The pics were WOW 😃...

Continue soon...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Wow such mindblowing update and kriyansh romance was owesome

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@Black_Stone

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

awesumm updte

swayum nd sharon soo cute 😊

sharon ka accha control hai swayum par 😆

kriya gussa nd rey ki band baji 😆

the places were awesumm

atlast rey ne kriya ko manaa hi liya 😃

luvd kriyansh here 😳

updte soon

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aishasully

@aishasully

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

wooww yaar such a cute updte i loved it to bitts mann its so cute cnt wait 4 next 1 will read it whn i cum bk 4 sure

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

Soch nhi sakti . . . Lolzz . . . Vo kya rinni hai 😆
rey bhi na . . . . Baithe baithe musibat le li . . . . 🤢
ye bhul gya tha kya ki vo apne bhai jaisi calm nhi hai,,,,,, but apni mom jaisi hai- jr. Lakshmi bai 😡
ab manao 🤣
50 msg . . . Lolzz
fullto aashiq . . . . Aur usne ainvayi delete kar diye
wat a blackmail . . . Dar gyi 😆
swayam to typical bhai banta ja rha hai . . . . . Yaad nhi,, pehle ussi ka love guru tha 😛
wow . . . Lovely place 😃
ahan . . . Gud job rey 👍🏼
akele milne ki planning already done 😊
yahan to fireexit milega nhi . . . . . Issi se kaam chala lo 😉
awww . . . Kiss nhi karne diya . . . .
Don't worry,,, ab khud kiss mil rhi hai . . . . ☺️
keep up the acting 😃