Rules Of Attraction#2 Chapter29 Pg125 19/08

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#901

I was crying, and am still bloody crying. This was such a beautiful update. The love Arnav feels, and then the pain of seeing Khushi through the tumour... This was a very SOAKED update you know. Like, it was so soaked in love and pain, that I could feel it crawl up my skin.

thankyou for the PM! ( though I got here before it =P)

Love,

Edited by V323 - 13 years ago

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#902

Reality sucks sometimes specially in such cases. I Feel for them

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#903

sorry like button is nt working

very beautifully written...

life is unfair at times n tht reality check

i want a happy ending

i cant blv its abt to end

Edited by rkapoor1382 - 13 years ago

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#904

The change from a hot heady mischievous atmosphere to a dull mechanical atmosphere which I dread was done so seamlessly and artfully that it seemed extremely natural.

Consciously removing myself from being person who has known there journey for once I read it from a stranger's point of view and yet it tugged at my heartstrings.

Yet there is something here which gives me hope. Maybe I'm just a hopelessly optimistic person!

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Swati

@Swati_

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#905

Wonderful update Sona...:-) simply beautiful..
Awww..Arnav..i realy feel bad for him...cant have a long moment of joy, can he? ...hope you are giving him happiness in the end sona...
Khushi...i dont know what to say...such a brave girl...those pains must be horrible...

What last phase ? No...:-( ...but all good things do come to an end:-(

You have met a cancer patient ? *shudders* i hope patient is fine now...

You write amazing stuff..i like the way you express uniquely...i love your choice of words...

Waiting eagerly for the next update...:-)
Take care...:-)

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#906

Just gonna res a spot

EDIT:

Wow , that was a beautifully written chapter, whats the word Im looking for it wasn't trashy(for a lack of a better word), it was elegant, sauve, very well thought out.

As always the diction , the writing style almost poetic AND I learned a new word today "Dcolletage"! Now I can be classy.

The struggling victim ,and caring lover leaves me in awe.

I can't believe its coming to an end, this was one of the FIRST FF's I started reading when I initially made an account. In fact its because I was reading this FF and a couple of others that I made an account, so I could keep track of them! Now, the journey is almost over, thats depressing.

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duncanelise

@duncanelise

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#907

I loved the club scene.. It was electrifying..

And my heart really breaks for Arnav, dealing with a loved one having cancer is no piece of cake..

Amazing update!

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@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#908

Once again an amazing chapter

Edited by Aveiro - 13 years ago

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#909

Nicely written! Thanks for the update!

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#910

Beautiful chapter...u have captured arnav's anguish and helplessness and the fear of future so well...I am sure that the whole family of a cancer patient suffers with the patient.