Rules Of Attraction#2 Chapter29 Pg125 19/08 - Page 89

Simply loved it!

nice updatee...

Beautiful update !!!!!!!
The way you gave written about Arnav's fear at losing her and his worry and love is simply brilliant !!!!!! It's like he's slowly realizing the implications and the reality of Khushi's illness !!!!
Loved the scene in the plane !!!!!!! The way he was worried when she didn't wake up !!!!!!!!! Superbly portrayed !!!!!
Also the part where she wants to dance and enjoy life normally and his line in the end !!!!!!!!!!
You've described true love marvellously !!!!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!!!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !

I really cant put it in words how much I love this FF!
When I first started reading it I was awestruck at your writing!
The way you've managed to give two sides of the same coin. There is a Arnav reaction and then there is a Khushi reaction in every situation.

Your words have touched my heart! Every single update left a dull ache in my heart!

When khushi said I love you soo soo much but I cant live you and the impact of that situation was immense!! The way Arnav reacted to it was awesome to read! He left, because thats exactly the kind of person he is. Blocking himself! But I really really love this Arnav and specailly when he decided to never let her go after they met after 6 months.

During the intial updates just when they were getting comfortable and the way you've described their feeling< loved it to bits! You made us understand with every update that this is how the relation has progressed!

Special moments-The Delhi haat, the pictures Arnav clicked and how amused/ happy khushi was seeing them. The way Arnav threw the ring Khushi had given him, the way he picked it up again, the part where he couldnt cry, the part where his tears wouldnt stop!, the moment he saw khushi after 6months and noticed how she was wearing the jacket he had given her, the silver bangle she wore! The instant realisation that now he had to move on!
When khushi called him and heard his voice on the voicemail and how there was sudden changes in her- beautifully described!!

Now after they meet in Goa! Man, the way they just stood there, the way you've described their meet I could actually see it happening!!

When Arnav came to know the truth my heart broke! His reaction to the whole situation, the moment he said 'We will be fine'! Awww that showed that he is there to stay in her life! Unlike what Khushi thought!

The part where they both realized that they were being selfish just because they wanted to live for each other- BEAUTIFUL!!!

I could probably go on but then I'll be ranting! ;)

This whole FF is just beautiful! A very different concept and a very different way you've penned it down! Awesome, beautiful, rocking, PERFECT!!!

P.S- I happened to read this FF because my fav writer 'AngelTeen' had mention in a comment somewhere that you are one of her Fav writer and so I had to check it out! Truly thankful to her and YOU for writing this beautiful FF!

P.P.S- I'll buddy you please please please send me a PM when you update! :)

khushi is trying to be happy and normal not jsut for herself but for arnav as well. She cannot see him this worried and stressed. while arnav is willing to move heaven and earth to make sure that nothing will happen to khushi

Finally!

Oh my gosh, I think this has to be my favourite chapter of ROA till date! It was so sweet & just conveyed everything Arnav and Khushi were for each other & the song was so perfect! This happens to be one of my favourite songs (: The moment when Arnav got upset, theres a hinge of guilt in him, cause he regrets not being there for Khushi earlier and they way Khushi knew to make that go away! That little bit was brilliant! Also the way, you described the beautiful mess of life with the high fives and missed kisses, those were just exquisite lines! Stunning update & I cant wait to see what happens with the meeting with Dr. Kenedy (: